The motel sat at the edge of a dying town, its neon sign flickering a desperate pink against the gray November sky. I’d been driving for nine hours, and my eyes felt like sandpaper. The last three exits were nothing but boarded-up gas stations and fields of withered corn, so when I saw the ‘Vacancy’ sign, I almost wept. I pulled into the lot, the gravel crunching under my tires like bones, and parked as close to my car as possible. My trunk was full of laptop parts—motherboards, LCDs, a tangle of cables—worth more than this building’s entire worth.
Inside, the lobby smelled of stale coffee and bleach. The clerk was a thin man with a name tag that said ‘Edgar’ in faded letters. He didn’t look up from his magazine as he slid a key across the counter. Room 14. First floor, facing the parking lot. Perfect. I could see my car from the window. I signed the register, took the key, and walked down the hallway that seemed to stretch longer than it should.
The room was exactly what I expected: a bed with a faded floral bedspread, a nightstand with a lamp that had a suspicious brown stain on the shade, and a small television on a dresser. I don’t watch TV. I never do. So I left the remote where it was, a plastic rectangle with a broken mute button, sitting in its designated spot by the remote holder. I unpacked my go-bag, hung up my clothes in the closet, and set up my laptop on the rickety desk. I ordered a pizza from the only place in town that delivered, a establishment called ‘The only pizza in town’ which was literally the name.
I worked, answering emails, reading schematics, the quiet hum of my laptop the only sound. The pizza arrived, and I ate it while scanning a PDF about thermal paste application. It was 9:47 PM when I decided to call it a night. I closed my laptop, plugged in my phone, and lay down. The bed was lumpy, the pillow smelled like someone else’s dreams.
I drifted off quickly, too exhausted to notice the subtle change. But I woke up at 2:12 AM. Not gradually, but with a jolt, my heart pounding. The room was dark, but the light from the parking lot cast a dim glow through the thin curtains. I lay there, listening. Nothing. Just the hum of the ancient air conditioner. And then I heard it—a faint, tinny sound, like a radio tuning. It was coming from the TV.
I froze. The TV was off. I never touched the remote. But the static was there, a low hiss not from my ears but from the television speaker. I stared at the dark screen, waiting. The static grew louder, then softer, like someone was turning a dial. And then, a voice. Not human. It was as if all the sounds a voice could make were scraped down to a single flat tone, like a dial tone stretched into a whisper. It said, ‘Floor six.’
My blood ran cold. This motel has two floors. I told myself it was just the wiring, the old building, maybe a radio interference from the nearby cell tower. But I couldn’t shake the feeling that the voice was not asking. It was telling. I pulled the blankets up to my chin, staring at the darkness of the TV, and slowly, the static faded. After an eternity, I fell asleep.
The next morning, I woke to weak sunlight. I felt groggy, as if I had run a marathon. I looked at the TV. It was off. The remote was still in its spot. I laughed at myself, blamed it on a weird dream. I went to the bathroom to shower, but when I turned on the water, the pipes groaned. And in that groan, I heard it again. ‘Floor six.’ I turned off the water. The room was silent.
I dressed quickly, packed my go-bag, and checked out. The clerk, Edgar, gave me a strange look. ‘Sleep well?’ he asked. I forced a smile. ‘A little strange, actually. That TV…’ He nodded, his eyes unreadable. ‘Ah, you got the room with the ghost. We call it ‘The Listener’. It’s been here since the fire.’ I asked what fire. He pointed to a crack in the ceiling that I hadn’t noticed before, running the length of the room. ‘1962. A whole family. They say the mother’s voice got stuck in the wiring. Sometimes she talks to people. Tells them to go to floor six. But we only have two floors.’ He laughed, but it was hollow.
I left quickly, my car tires squealing on the asphalt. I drove for hours, trying to forget. But as I drove, I began to notice something. Every time I passed a radio tower or a high-tension line, I would hear a faint static in my ears. And the voice, ‘Floor six,’ would return, not as a memory, but as a fresh sound. I pulled over at a rest stop, shaking. I looked up at the sky. There was a flock of birds circling, not in a normal flock pattern, but in a spiral. They were descending. And as they neared the ground, they began to make a sound. Not chirping. But a low, human-like hum.
I got back in the car and locked the doors. My hands were shaking so hard I could barely grip the wheel. I decided to call my wife, just to hear a normal voice. I dialed, and the line connected. But instead of her voice, I heard that same static. And then, ‘Floor six,’ in that flat, empty tone. I hung up. I tried again. Same. I threw the phone on the passenger seat, breathing hard.
I don’t remember the rest of the drive. I only remember pulling into my driveway, the sun setting, the sky bleeding orange and purple. I rushed inside, slamming the door behind me. My cat, Mister Jinx, ran to greet me, but stopped mid-run, his back arching, hissing at the door behind me. I turned. The door was closed. The air in the room was cold.
I haven’t turned on my TV since. But every night, at the same time, I hear a faint static from my bedroom. It’s coming from the smoke detector. And last night, it said, ‘Floor six.’ I live in a one-story house. But I’m starting to wonder—maybe floor six isn’t a floor. Maybe it’s a state of mind. And maybe it’s already inside me.
Tonight, I’m going to find a place with no electronics, no wires, no sound. But I’m afraid. Because the static isn’t just in the TV anymore. It’s in my head.
And floor six is waiting.