The Spinning Woman in Room 12

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"I was twelve the summer my mother sent me to stay with my father at the Cradle Creek Inn, a crumbling Victorian bed-and-breakfast he’d inherited from a great-uncle. It was a place of peeling wallpaper, dusty chandeliers, and a porch that groaned like a living thing. My father, a man of few words and fewer […]"

I was twelve the summer my mother sent me to stay with my father at the Cradle Creek Inn, a crumbling Victorian bed-and-breakfast he’d inherited from a great-uncle. It was a place of peeling wallpaper, dusty chandeliers, and a porch that groaned like a living thing. My father, a man of few words and fewer emotions, had remarried a quiet woman named Myra, who smelled of lavender and old paper. They gave me a room at the end of the north hallway, number 12, with a heavy oak door and a single window that overlooked the overgrown garden. The room had a high bed with a threadbare quilt and a rocking chair that creaked on its own, even when the air was still. I didn’t like it, but I was too old to complain, and my father had warned me, ‘Don’t wander after dark, and don’t touch anything in the attic.’

That first night, I went to bed early, exhausted from the long drive. The heat was oppressive, even with the window open, and I tossed under a thin cotton sheet. I must have drifted off, but I woke with a start, my bladder aching. The hallway was dark, lit only by a dim lantern at the stairwell. I tiptoed to the bathroom at the end of the hall, relieved to find it empty. The toilet ran with a hiss, and the mirror above the sink was cracked. I washed my hands, glancing at my reflection, and saw a flicker of movement behind me. I turned, but there was nothing. I hurried back to my room, trying to convince myself it was just a moth.

As I climbed onto my bed, I felt that familiar prickle on the back of my neck, the sense that I was not alone. I looked up from the pillow and froze. In the middle of the room, under the pale moonlight streaming through the window, stood a woman in a long, dark dress, her back to me. She was spinning, slowly, as if in a trance, her arms held out like a ballerina. Around and around she went, her bare feet barely making a sound on the worn floorboards. I could see the whites of her eyes as her face passed me, but her expression was blank, lost. She seemed to be searching for something, or trying to escape, her movements frantic and circular. I wanted to scream, but my throat closed. I yanked the thin sheet up over my head, squeezing my eyes shut, and whispered a prayer I barely remembered.

Under the sheet, I heard the creak of the floorboards stop. There was a long silence, then the soft patter of footsteps, growing closer. The ladder to my bunk bed rattled, and I felt a weight on the bottom rung. I held my breath, my heart hammering so loud I thought it would burst. The ladder creaked with each step up. My hands were shaking as I clutched the sheet. I felt a cold draft as the steps stopped right beside my ear. I dared to peek, just a sliver, through the weave of the cotton. The woman was leaning over me, her face inches from mine, her breath a whisper of cold air. Her mouth opened, but no sound came out, only a faint hiss like steam. She pointed a long, pale finger toward the window, and then she faded, dissolving like mist.

I didn’t sleep the rest of that night. When dawn broke, I told my father and Myra, who exchanged a look I couldn’t decipher. ‘You saw Mrs. Hardwick,’ Myra said gently. ‘She’s been here a long time. She was the innkeeper’s wife, a century ago. They say she went mad after her husband vanished, and she spent her last nights spinning in that very room, trying to find the way out.’ I asked why she kept doing it, and Myra looked at me with pity. ‘Because she’s still looking, dear. And she’ll keep looking until someone helps her finish her dance.’ I never went back up to Room 12 without a light, and I never again slept without the curtain closed tight. But some nights, I still hear the creaking of a ladder and the faint hum of a waltz, coming from the floor above, where the dust never settles.

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