The Slash of the Third Floor

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"The old mill house on Bramble Lane was the only home I’d ever known, but at eleven, I’d started to hate it. The third floor, where my room sat, was a labyrinth of crooked walls and low, sloping ceilings, and the bunk bed my father had built seemed to reach toward the dark beams like […]"

The old mill house on Bramble Lane was the only home I’d ever known, but at eleven, I’d started to hate it. The third floor, where my room sat, was a labyrinth of crooked walls and low, sloping ceilings, and the bunk bed my father had built seemed to reach toward the dark beams like a skeleton’s hand. I feared heights with a paralyzing terror, and every night, I clutched the wooden rail, convinced the top bunk would tip over and send me crashing to the floor. My mother called it a phase, but the fear was as real as the draft that whistled through the warped window frames.

That particular night, the air had turned thick and still, as if the house itself was holding its breath. I lay on my back, staring at the ceiling, when a sensation crept over me—not just the usual paranoia, but a suffocating awareness that I was not alone. The feeling was so intense that I turned my head toward the closet, half-expecting something to be there. Nothing. But then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw them: a cluster of figures, small and indistinct, darting from the far wall toward the window. They moved with a jerky, unnatural speed, like insects skittering across a wall. I counted four, maybe six, and before I could blink, they were gone, as if they had passed through the glass.

I wanted to scream, but my throat was locked. I tried to lift my arm to rub my eyes, but my body felt like lead, pinned to the mattress by an invisible weight. The shadows in the room seemed to deepen, pooling in the corners, and I could hear a faint scratching sound, like fingernails on wood, coming from under the bed. I squeezed my eyes shut, praying for morning, and eventually, exhaustion dragged me into a restless sleep filled with images of children running through endless corridors, their faces blank, their hands raised as if to strike.

When I woke, the morning light was pale and weak, filtered through the dusty curtains. I tried to sit up, but my limbs refused to obey. Panic seized me as I realized I could not move a single muscle, not even to turn my head. I lay there, helpless, my eyes fixed on the cracked ceiling, when my mother’s footsteps echoed on the stairs. She pushed the door open with her usual smile, but the smile froze and melted into horror as she rushed to my side. I heard her gasp, and then her voice, trembling, calling my name. I wanted to ask what was wrong, but my lips could not form words. Instead, I felt a strange, burning sensation on my face, and I tasted copper in my mouth.

The next thing I knew, I was in the hospital, my mother crying in the corridor as doctors murmured about seizures and lacerations. They told me I had suffered a violent fit, and that my face bore three thin, parallel cuts, as if made by fingernails raking across my skin. The scars are still there today, faded but visible, and I have never been able to explain them. But sometimes, late at night, when I close my eyes, I still see that group of children running across my room, and I feel a cold breath on my neck, as if they are still waiting, just beyond the edge of my vision, for me to look again.

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