The Silhouette in the Stillwater

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"I never told anyone about the figure I saw in the bathroom mirror that summer, not even my sister Lena. It was the summer of 2012, and we had moved into our great-aunt’s old house by the lake, a rambling Victorian that smelled of mothballs and dried lavender. My parents thought it would be a […]"

I never told anyone about the figure I saw in the bathroom mirror that summer, not even my sister Lena. It was the summer of 2012, and we had moved into our great-aunt’s old house by the lake, a rambling Victorian that smelled of mothballs and dried lavender. My parents thought it would be a good idea to get away from the city, but the house felt wrong from the start. The floorboards creaked in patterns that didn’t match our footsteps, and the lake water was always perfectly still, as if holding its breath.

One sweltering afternoon, I was leaning against the bathroom windowsill, the only spot where my phone could catch a weak signal. I was scrolling through photos, half-aware of the heat and the buzz of a far-off lawnmower, when I felt a draft behind me. I turned, and there he was: a tall man, at least six feet, standing in the bathtub. He was all in shadow, a silhouette with no discernible features, but I could feel his gaze. I blinked, and he was gone.

My heart hammered. I called out to Lena, who was in our bedroom across the hall. She said she hadn’t come in. I didn’t believe her, so I stormed into our room, ready to catch her in a lie. But she was sitting on her bed, reading a comic, and the room was empty. I checked the closet, under the bed, even the attic stairs. Nothing.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I kept seeing that figure, how it stood so still, as if it had always been there. I told Lena about it, and she just laughed, saying it was my imagination from the heat. But I knew what I saw. The next day, I noticed the bathtub drain was clogged with black hair, though none of us had dark hair like that. My mother said it was just old residue, but I noticed she wouldn’t look at the tub when she said it.

As the days passed, I started seeing the figure more often, always near water. Once, I caught a glimpse of him in the kitchen window while I was doing dishes, standing by the lake, just a shadow at the water’s edge. Another time, I saw him in the bathroom mirror, but when I turned, he was behind me, and I heard a faint whisper, like the sound of water trickling. I told my grandmother, who had called to check on us, and she went silent for a long moment before saying, ‘Stay away from the water, child.’

I asked her why, and she told me a story I had never heard before: our great-uncle, the one who built the house, had drowned himself in the lake in the 1940s. It was said he couldn’t stand the silence, and he went mad, and his ghost still lingered, waiting for someone to join him. My grandmother said she had seen him too, when she was young. ‘He doesn’t want a visitor,’ she said. ‘He wants a replacement.’

A shiver crawled up my spine. I started avoiding the bathroom, but it was the only place with the weak signal to contact the outside world. I would sit on the toilet lid, my back to the tub, but I could feel him in my peripheral vision. One evening, I was texting a friend when I saw a reflection in the window: the silhouette, now solid, its head tilted. I dropped my phone and spun around. The bathtub was empty, but the water was running, a thin stream, and the drain was clogged, and the water was rising, and in the water, a face formed, not in the water, but as a shadow on the surface, and it was my face, but not my expression, and it was smiling.

I screamed and turned off the faucet, my hands shaking. When I looked up, the figure was gone, but I saw that the water had seeped under the door and into the hallway, leaving a dark stain that never dried. Lena saw it and asked what happened. I told her it was a spill. She didn’t believe me, but she didn’t press.

That night, I woke to a sound like someone breathing in my ear. I was alone in the room, but the window was open, and the curtains were billowing like a figure. I got up to close it, and when I looked out, I saw him standing at the lake’s edge, staring at the house. He raised his arm and pointed at me. Then he turned and walked into the water, and he didn’t resurface.

The next morning, I found the bathroom door locked from the inside. I had to break it open. The bathtub was full of dark water, and floating on the surface was a black hair, long and thin. I knew it wasn’t mine. I pulled the plug, and the water drained quickly, leaving a ring of grime. I never saw the silhouette again, but sometimes, when I’m near a window at dusk, I catch a fleeting shadow out of the corner of my eye, and I feel a cold draft, like a presence waiting. Grandmother says I should have stayed out of the water’s way, but I think it’s too late for that. Some things, once they see you, they never let go. And on the stillest nights, I hear the lake whispering my name.

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