The Saltwater Room

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Story Premise 7 min read (1,256 words)

"I never believed in the old stories, not until the night I slept in that house on the Devon coast. The cottage was a crumbling relic, perched on a cliff that gnawed at the sea. My partner, Lena, had rented it for our anniversary, and we’d spent the day driving through rain and fog. The […]"

I never believed in the old stories, not until the night I slept in that house on the Devon coast. The cottage was a crumbling relic, perched on a cliff that gnawed at the sea. My partner, Lena, had rented it for our anniversary, and we’d spent the day driving through rain and fog. The first evening was quiet, save for the wind moaning through the chimney. I remember lying in bed, the sound of waves crashing below, and feeling a strange heaviness in the air, like the house itself was holding its breath.

That night, I dreamt I was standing in a vast, dark expanse of water, ankle-deep, then knee-deep, then waist-deep. The water was cold and thick, like oil. I tried to move, but my legs were stuck in the silt. Ahead, I saw a grey shape, a doorframe rising from the water. I knew I had to reach it, but with each step, the water rose higher until it reached my chest. I could taste salt on my lips, and I heard a low humming, like a lullaby sung in a language I almost recognized. Then I woke up with a jolt, gasping, my hair wet and my pajamas soaked. I was lying on the cold stone floor of the cottage’s kitchen, my cheek pressed against the tiles. The moon shone through the window, and I saw I was covered in fine sea salt, as if I’d been dipped in the ocean.

Lena found me there and helped me back to bed, muttering about sleepwalking and a leaky roof. But I felt the salt under my nails, and the next morning, my skin tasted of brine. Over the following days, the dreams intensified. One night, I dreamt of a woman with hair like seaweed, her face a blur, standing at the foot of the bed. She pointed to the ceiling, and I looked up to see water dripping from the plaster, forming a pattern like an eye. I woke up to find myself in the attic, crouched beneath the rafters, shivering, with a necklace of seaweed wrapped around my throat. Lena was frantic, but she couldn’t explain the seaweed’s presence. The nearest beach was a mile away, and the door was locked from the inside.

I started to dread sleep, but exhaustion always won. I tried to stay awake, but the heaviness behind my eyes grew. One evening, I noticed the cottage’s old grandfather clock in the hallway. It had stopped at 3:33, and the hands were skewed, as if they’d been twisted. I asked Lena if she’d touched it, and she shook her head. I began to notice other things: the mirror in the bathroom fogged up even on cold water, and the glass would frost over with the shape of a handprint from the outside. I remembered reading about the ‘sleepwalkers’ who were found drowned in their own bathtubs, but this was different. This was a pulling, a call.

The worst came on the fifth night. I dreamt I was in a small, round room with a single window. Through the glass, I saw the face of a man, pale and gaunt, his eyes black pits. He pressed his hand against the glass, and I saw the red lines on his neck, as if he’d been strangled. He opened his mouth, and a stream of seawater poured out, flooding the room. I struggled, but the water rose, and I felt his hands on my throat, cold and strong. I woke up choking, thrashing. Lena was shaking me, and I saw the red finger marks on my neck, just like the ones I’d heard about in a story from my grandmother, about a drowned sailor who died in a shipwreck off this very coast.

Lena finally believed me. The marks were real, and they throbbed. That morning, we went to the village and found an old man who told us the story of the ‘salt wife,’ a woman who drowned in the 1800s, accused of witchcraft. She used to sing to the sailors to lure them to their deaths, and her spirit haunted the waters. The cottage was built on the spot where she was buried, and every few decades, the house would ‘claim a soul’ by pulling them into dreams and painting them with salt. The old man said the only way to break the curse was to find her grave and pour fresh water over it before the next full moon. But the moon was that very night.

We hurried back, determined to face the truth. As the sun set, we dug in the cellar, following a map from a local archive. We found a stone slab, and beneath it, a small, iron box. Inside was a tarnished locket and a parchment. The locket had a portrait of a woman, and the parchment was a letter, written in a trembling hand, begging forgiveness from the one she loved, saying she didn’t want to lure him, but the sea compelled her. I read it aloud, and as I spoke, the wind outside died down. Suddenly, the temperature dropped, and the room grew dark. I turned, and in the corner, I saw the woman, her hair like seaweed, her eyes sad. She pointed to the locket, then to my heart. I understood. The story said the dream pull was her asking for release, not for revenge. She needed someone to break her curse by completing her unfinished ritual.

I realized what I had to do. I took the rope from the shed and tied one end to my waist, the other to the strong oak beam in the living room. Then, I went to bed, telling Lena to watch over me and pull me if I started to walk. I fell asleep, and I was drawn to the water again, but this time, I let it pull me deeper. I saw the woman standing by the doorframe, and she handed me a key. She showed me a coral chest, and inside was a silver bell. She gestured for me to ring it. I hesitated, but I did. The bell rang, and the water glowed with ethereal light. The woman smiled, and her face became peaceful. As she faded, I felt a release, like a knot untied. I woke up in bed, the rope still tied, and Lena was asleep, her head on my chest.

In the morning, the cottage felt different, lighter. The clock had started again, its hands at the correct time. The mirror was clear. And the salt was gone from my skin. I looked out the window at the sea, and for a moment, I thought I saw a woman waving, but it was just the waves. I never had another dream about the water, but sometimes, when I close my eyes, I hear a faint bell, and I know it’s her, finally at peace. The cottage is still there, waiting for the next restless soul, but I hope she won’t need to call them anymore. I keep the locket on my bedside table, a reminder that some nightmares are not attacks, but pleas.

I still don’t sleep in the dark, but now, it’s because I’m thinking of the salt and the sea, and the woman who found her release. And I’ll never forget the feeling of being pulled, not to death, but to another story. I only hope that whoever comes after me listens, because sometimes, the dead don’t want to haunt; they just want to be heard.

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