The Reflection in Room Seven

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"The fifth-grade lock-in at Oakridge Elementary was supposed to be the pinnacle of our young lives: a night of pizza, games, and whispered secrets in the cavernous gymnasium. But by 11:30, with the fluorescent lights humming overhead and the thrill of staying up late fading into exhaustion, forty of us were sprawled across sleeping bags […]"

The fifth-grade lock-in at Oakridge Elementary was supposed to be the pinnacle of our young lives: a night of pizza, games, and whispered secrets in the cavernous gymnasium. But by 11:30, with the fluorescent lights humming overhead and the thrill of staying up late fading into exhaustion, forty of us were sprawled across sleeping bags like a battlefield of the bored. My friends—Jenna, with her wild curly hair and a penchant for daredevilry, and Marcus, who wore his skepticism like a badge—and I had migrated to the dim corner near the stage, where the teacher’s supervision was less vigilant and shadows clung to the walls.

It was Jenna who brought up the ritual. She’d heard it from a cousin who’d gone to a haunted mansion in the nearby town of Hollow Creek. ‘In the old science wing, there’s a bathroom with a cracked mirror. If you go in alone, run the taps as hot as they’ll go, and say the name ‘Evelyn Crane’ three times while looking into the glass, she’ll appear. She was a girl who died in the 1950s—drowned in her own bathtub because her parents left her alone. And if you can meet her eyes without blinking, she’ll show you something—your future or your death, depending on her mood.’ Marcus rolled his eyes, but I felt a chill creep along my spine. The science wing was off-limits, a dust-covered relic at the far end of the school, and Room Seven was its forgotten heart.

Empty threats and dares flew back and forth, but then Marcus, ever the pragmatist, threw down a challenge: ‘If you’re so brave, let’s do it. I’ll even go first.’ To my surprise, Jenna was all in, and before I could voice my misgivings, they were both staring at me with expectant grins. I was a coward, but peer pressure at that age is a tide you can’t swim against. We slipped away, past the chaperones who were dozing in their folding chairs, and tiptoed through the dark hallways of Oakridge. The air grew cooler, and the familiar scent of floor wax gave way to a musty, forgotten smell as we approached the science wing. The door to Room Seven was slightly ajar, as if it had been waiting for us.

Inside, a single bulb flickered, casting its sickly yellow light on desks that had been obsolete for decades. At the back, a small bathroom with a graffiti-scarred door. We pushed it open. The room was tiny, with a cracked porcelain sink and a mirror that looked like it had been punched. The taps were rusted, but Marcus twisted them on, and water sputtered, then ran full force, steam beginning to rise. ‘See? Nothing to it. Evelyn Crane. Evelyn Crane. Evelyn Crane.’ He spoke the name with a mocking cadence, meeting his own reflection in the glass. For a moment, nothing happened. Then the water in the sink began to swirl, forming a spiral, and the mirror started to frost at the edges—not from the steam, but from an unnatural cold. I saw a shadow move behind Marcus in the glass, a shape that wasn’t him. But Marcus just laughed. ‘Told you it was stupid.’ He turned off the taps, and the mirror cleared as if nothing had happened. We left, feeling a mix of relief and unease, and returned to the gym as if we’d never left.

That was when the change began. Over the next hour, Marcus started to act strange. He kept glancing at his reflection in the dark windows, muttering to himself. Jenna tried to engage him in a game of Truth or Dare, but he just sat rigid, his eyes wide and glassy. Then, without warning, he stood up and walked to the water fountain in the corner, turned it on, and stared at the metal surface, whispering something we couldn’t hear. I grabbed his shoulder. ‘Marcus, you okay?’ He turned to me, and for a split second, I could have sworn his eyes were not his own—they were hollow, like the bottom of a drained well. He blinked, and it passed. But the unease settled in my stomach like lead.

The teachers eventually corralled us to the sleeping area, but I couldn’t sleep. I lay awake, listening to the soft breathing of forty kids, when I heard a rustling sound. I lifted my head. Marcus was standing in the aisle, silhouetted against the emergency exit light. He was staring at the gymnasium’s mirrored wall—a long, polished band that ran along the side of the room. In the dim light, I could see his reflection, but it wasn’t matching his movements. While he stood perfectly still, his reflection was lifting its hand and raising a finger to its lips in a ‘shh’ gesture. My blood froze. I nudged Jenna, who was awake too. She gasped, and we both watched in horror as Marcus’s reflection slowly turned its head and looked directly at us, a grin spreading across its face. Then it mouthed: ‘I see you.’

Marcus snapped out of his trance, looking around in confusion. ‘What’s going on?’ he asked, his voice small and frightened, as if he had just woken from a nightmare. But we knew something had followed him back from Room Seven. The next morning, Marcus was different. He was quiet, jittery, and refused to look at any mirror. When we asked him about it, he said he had a headache and would be fine. But he wasn’t fine. The following week, his parents pulled him out of school, and we heard rumors that he had started talking to himself, that he claimed ‘Evelyn’ was always in the mirror, waiting to trade places with him. Jenna and I never spoke of that night again, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that I had left a part of myself in that bathroom—a reflection of me that never returned. And sometimes, when I catch my own reflection in a darkened window, I see a flicker of movement behind my eyes, as if someone else is using my gaze to look out at the world. I know now that the mirror in Room Seven wasn’t just a piece of glass. It was a doorway, and Marcus, poor Marcus, was the first to walk through. And I’m terrified that one day, it will be my turn.

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