The Portrait in the Parlor

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"I never believed in ghosts until I moved into my grandmother’s house in the quiet town of Ashford. The house was a Victorian relic, with creaking floorboards and drafty rooms that smelled of old paper and dust. My great-great-grandmother had built it, and it had stayed in our family ever since. I was fourteen, eager […]"

I never believed in ghosts until I moved into my grandmother’s house in the quiet town of Ashford. The house was a Victorian relic, with creaking floorboards and drafty rooms that smelled of old paper and dust. My great-great-grandmother had built it, and it had stayed in our family ever since. I was fourteen, eager for a fresh start after my parents’ divorce, so I didn’t mind the peeling wallpaper or the cold spots. But the house had a secret, one that would surface every night at 11:47 PM, like clockwork.

My room was at the top of the stairs, next to the parlor. The parlor was a room we never used, filled with antique furniture and a large oil painting of a stern-faced man named Mr. Alistair Blackwood. He was the original owner, a wealthy merchant who had died in the house under mysterious circumstances in the early 1900s. According to local lore, he was found at the bottom of the basement stairs with a broken neck, and his wife, Eleanor, was suspected but never charged. She sold the house to my great-great-grandmother and left town, leaving the painting behind.

My first night, I woke to a sound like a muffled thud from the parlor. I sat up, heart pounding, and listened. The old grandfather clock in the hallway struck midnight. Then I heard it again, a slow, rhythmic thumping, as if someone was knocking on the walls from inside. I crept to my door and peered out. The parlor door was slightly ajar, and a sliver of light spilled from within, though I knew for a fact the lights were off. I pushed the door open, and the room was bathed in a sickly orange glow from a flickering gas lamp that hadn’t worked in decades.

And there, standing in front of the painting, was a man in a top hat and a black waistcoat. He was turned away from me, but I could see his reflection in the glass of the painting: his face was gaunt, with hollow eyes, and he was staring directly at me. I tried to scream, but my throat seized. He turned slowly, and his lips moved, but no sound came out, only a whisper that seemed to curl around the room. ‘You shouldn’t have come.’ I slammed the door and ran back to bed, pulling the covers over my head.

The next morning, I told my grandmother about what I saw. She looked at me with a strange, knowing sadness and said, ‘He’s been waiting for a child to come home. He’s drawn to the young, the restless.’ She then told me the full story: Alistair Blackwood didn’t die by accident. He was murdered by his wife after he discovered she was poisoning him for his fortune. As he lay dying, he cursed the house, vowing that no family would ever find peace until his portrait was destroyed and his remains properly buried. But no one ever believed the story, and the painting was left to hang.

That night, I tried to stay awake, but fatigue dragged me under. I woke at 11:47 PM to a cold presence in my room. The man from the painting was standing at the foot of my bed, his top hat dripping with something dark. He pointed a long, bony finger at the wall, and I saw a crack forming, spreading like a web. ‘You will join me,’ he hissed, though his lips didn’t move. ‘The house demands a blood price for the betrayal.’ I scrambled away, but he vanished into the wall, leaving a faint, mildewed scent.

I ran to my grandmother’s room, but she was sleeping soundly. I didn’t dare wake her, so I went back to my room and lay awake, staring at the wall where the crack was. As the night wore on, the crack grew wider, and I could hear a faint scratching inside it, like nails on wood. I pressed my ear to the wall, and a voice whispered, ‘Let me out.’ I knew it was him, and I knew that if I let him out, something terrible would happen. But the voice was so pleading, so human, that my resolve wavered.

The next night, I decided to confront the painting. I took a hammer from the basement and stood before the portrait. The eyes seemed to follow me, and the face contorted in anger. ‘You think you can destroy me?’ the voice boomed, echoing in my mind. I raised the hammer, but my arm froze. The painting’s eyes turned black, and the room grew freezing cold. From the portrait, a black mist seeped out, forming into a shadowy figure. It lunged at me, and I dropped the hammer, stumbling back.

As I fell, I saw the figure reach out to touch my face. But just as its fingers grazed my skin, a loud crash came from downstairs. The front door had burst open, and in walked a policewoman, her gun drawn. ‘Stop!’ she shouted, and the figure dissipated. She introduced herself as Officer Hale, who had been investigating the house’s history after receiving anonymous tips about strange occurrences. She found the basement stairs and, sure enough, a hidden compartment with Alistair’s skeleton, along with a journal detailing his wife’s betrayal.

With the skeleton exhumed and the portrait burned, the house fell silent. The crack in my wall sealed overnight, and the gas lamp never flickered again. I still wake at 11:47 sometimes, but there’s no presence, no voice. Just the memory of a man in a top hat and waistcoat, and the knowledge that some secrets shouldn’t be left to rot in the dark. As for the house, we sold it soon after, but a part of me will always wonder if he’s still waiting, in some other parlor, for another child to listen.

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