The Porcelain Visitor

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"It was the summer of 2021, and my family had decided to make the long drive from Ohio to the sunbaked plains of western Kansas. My grandfather, a retired farmer named Harlan, had remarried a no-nonsense woman named Edith, and they lived in a small, clapboard house that had been in the family for generations. […]"

It was the summer of 2021, and my family had decided to make the long drive from Ohio to the sunbaked plains of western Kansas. My grandfather, a retired farmer named Harlan, had remarried a no-nonsense woman named Edith, and they lived in a small, clapboard house that had been in the family for generations. The house was old, creaking with age, and filled with the smell of dust and dried flowers. We visited every couple of years, not out of love, but out of duty, because Harlan was getting too old to travel, and Edith made it clear she preferred her solitude. My mother, Rachel, had always been uneasy around her stepmother, but she never said why. She just said that Edith was ‘a cold woman’ and that the house ‘kept secrets.’

On the second day of our visit, we were gathered around the dining table for lunch. Edith had made a pot of bland chicken soup, and we ate in near silence, the only sounds being the clink of spoons and the whistle of wind outside. Harlan, who usually ate with his head down, suddenly looked up, his eyes unfocused and distant. He hadn’t been himself lately, drifting in and out of lucidity. He put down his spoon and said, in a low, measured voice, ‘I saw her again today. The porcelain woman.’

I exchanged a glance with my mother. She had told me that Harlan had been having ‘episodes’ but always brushed them off as old age. Edith, though, stiffened visibly, her jaw tightening. She set her spoon down with a clatter and said, ‘Harlan, you’re not starting that nonsense again. You’re scaring the children.’

But Harlan ignored her. He stared at the wall behind Edith, as if seeing something beyond it. ‘She stood in the archway between the kitchen and the hall,’ he said. ‘Dressed in that old-fashioned white dress, like from a photograph. She was smiling, but her eyes were black, like empty sockets. She didn’t say a word. Just stared at me, with that smile, and then she faded, like smoke.’

My mother’s face went pale. She gripped her glass of water, knuckles white. ‘Dad,’ she said, her voice shaky, ‘what did she look like? Did she have a birthmark… a small, heart-shaped mark on her cheek?’

Harlan turned to her slowly, a strange smile playing on his lips. ‘Yes. Yes, she did. And her hair was black, just like yours when you were young.’ My mother let out a small gasp and whispered, ‘It’s her. It’s Mom.’

Edith slammed her hand on the table, making the plates jump. ‘That is enough! Your mother is dead, Harlan. She’s been dead for thirty years. You’re just seeing things. There is no woman.’ Then she turned to us, her face a mask of forced calm. ‘It’s just the heat. You should go outside, get some fresh air.’

I wanted to believe that. I wanted to think Harlan was just confused. But that night, something happened that I can’t explain.

I was in my old room, the one that used to belong to my mother’s sister, who had died as an infant. The room was small, with floral wallpaper peeling at the corners, and a narrow bed that creaked if you moved too much. I couldn’t sleep, so I sat by the window, watching the moon cast long shadows across the yard. That’s when I saw her.

She was standing at the edge of the cornfield, just beyond the fence. A woman in a white dress, pale as moonlight, her hair falling in dark waves. She was too far away to see her face clearly, but I could feel her staring at me. I felt a cold dread seep into my bones, and I couldn’t move. She started to walk toward the house, her steps silent, her dress not rustling with the wind. As she got closer, I saw that her smile was too wide, a slit in a face that seemed smooth like porcelain. And her eyes were black, like empty pits.

I wanted to scream, but my throat was frozen. She stopped right below my window and tilted her head, as if studying me. Then she raised a hand, fingers pale and thin, and beckoned me to come down. I shook my head, tears streaming down my face, and she lowered her hand. For a moment, she looked almost sad, and then she began to fade, dissolving into the air like a puff of smoke.

I ran to my parents’ room and burst in, sobbing. I told them what I saw. My mother held me, but she was trembling. She said, ‘I’ve seen her too, honey. She comes to me in dreams. She wants something.’ My father, a pragmatic man, looked between us, his face etched with worry. ‘We’re leaving tomorrow,’ he said. ‘We’ll drive through the night.’

But before we could leave, Edith found us in the kitchen. She seemed agitated, her hands twisting her apron. She said, ‘You can’t go. She’ll follow you. She always follows.’ My mother demanded to know what she meant. Edith’s eyes darted around the room, then she whispered, ‘I know who she is. I’ve known since the first time Harlan mentioned her. She’s your mother, Rachel, but she’s not here to protect you. She’s here to claim a debt.’

My mother stepped back, shaking her head. ‘What debt? She was a good woman. She died in pain.’ Edith gave a bitter laugh. ‘A good woman? She made a pact. When she knew she was dying, she begged me, her sister, to take care of her family. But I refused. I loved Harlan, and I saw my chance. So she cursed me, with her dying breath. She said that my line would never have peace, that she would return to steal away the firstborn of my new family. I thought it was just the ramblings of a dying woman. But then you were born, Rachel, and I knew she meant it.’

My mother’s face contorted in horror. ‘You’re her sister? But you never said… you married Dad after she died. Why would you do that?’ Edith shook her head. ‘I didn’t. I married him because I wanted to, but I didn’t know about the curse until after. And now, she’s come back to take your child.’

As Edith spoke, the lights flickered. The air grew cold. And from the hallway, we heard footsteps, slow and deliberate. A woman’s voice, soft and melodic, called out, ‘Rachel, come to me.’ My mother clutched me, and I felt my heart pounding. The footsteps grew closer, and the door to the kitchen creaked open. There she stood, the porcelain woman, her smile so wide it seemed to split her face. She reached out a hand, and I felt a force pulling me toward her. My mother screamed, and my father grabbed me by the arm, and we ran.

We made it to the car just as the woman stepped onto the porch. She didn’t chase; she just stood there, smiling, as we drove off down the dirt road. I looked back through the rear window, and I swear I saw her raise a hand in a wave. And then she was gone.

We never spoke of it again, not out loud. But now, every time I look in the mirror, I see a small, heart-shaped mark on my cheek that wasn’t there before. And at night, sometimes, I hear a whisper in the dark: ‘I’m coming for you, firstborn.’

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