The Pattern in the Carpet

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"In the autumn of 2019, I took a position as a junior maintenance technician at the Asteria Grand, a sprawling hotel built in the 1970s on the outskirts of a city I’d rather not name. The place had a faded grandeur, with long corridors that smelled of old polish and stale air. My shift was […]"

In the autumn of 2019, I took a position as a junior maintenance technician at the Asteria Grand, a sprawling hotel built in the 1970s on the outskirts of a city I’d rather not name. The place had a faded grandeur, with long corridors that smelled of old polish and stale air. My shift was supposed to be 8 to 5, but on the second Thursday of October, due to a staffing shortage, I was asked to stay until 7. I didn’t mind; the extra pay would help with rent.

My supervisor, a wiry man named Varick, handed me a master key and a list of rooms on the fourth floor of the east wing, which was shaped like a giant ‘U’ around a central courtyard. The east wing was the oldest part of the hotel, mostly unrenovated, with the original decor intact. My task was to inspect and test the electrical systems in the last three suites, including the grand ‘Ambassador Suite’ at the end of the hall. The carpet in that hallway was a deep burgundy with a gold geometric pattern that seemed to shift as you walked. I noticed it had a dark, irregular stain near the Ambassador Suite’s door, almost like a shadow, but I dismissed it.

I started with Room 412, a standard suite. Everything was ordinary: fluorescent lights humming, outlets working, the faint smell of dust. Room 414 was next, and here I felt a subtle wrongness. The thermostat read 16 degrees Celsius, though the hallway was warm. The air felt heavy, as if the room was holding its breath. I tested the lights, and they flickered for a moment before steadying. In the bathroom, the mirror was slightly fogged, as if someone had just taken a hot shower. I shrugged it off and moved to the last, the Ambassador Suite.

Unlocking the heavy mahogany door, I stepped inside. The suite was a time capsule: velvet drapes, ornate furniture, a chandelier with several dead bulbs. The centerpiece was a massive painting above the fireplace, a landscape of a gray moor under a stormy sky. The painting was oddly compelling, and I found myself staring at it longer than necessary. I began my inspections. The lights in the sitting area worked, but the bedroom lights were dead. I checked the circuit breakers, resetting a tripped one, and the lights blazed on. That’s when I noticed the carpet in the bedroom had the same burgundy and gold pattern, but here, the pattern seemed to converge on a single spot near the foot of the bed, where the gold lines formed an almost spiral shape.

A sudden chill made me shiver, and I saw my breath mist. The temperature had dropped dramatically. I turned to leave, but the door to the hallway was ajar, though I was sure I had closed it. A faint sound reached my ears, like a low hum, vibrating through the floor. I followed it to the wall behind the headboard, where an old service panel was tucked. Curious, I opened it. Inside, instead of wires, there was a void, a black space that seemed to absorb light. The hum grew louder, and I felt a pull, as if something inside was drawing me in. I stumbled back, my heart racing, and slammed the panel shut.

I radioed Varick, telling him I had finished and was heading down. He told me to check Room 416, which hadn’t been on my list, saying it had a reported electrical issue. I hesitated, but I went. Room 416 was further down the hall, past a service door I’d noticed earlier. The key turned, and the door creaked open. The room was bare, stripped of furniture, but the carpet was the same pattern, and here, the gold lines formed a broken chain around the center. The air was stale, and the only light came from a weak bulb in the ceiling. I checked the outlet, which sparked and died. As I crouched to adjust a junction box, I saw it: a small, child’s drawing on the baseboard, a crude figure with a wide smile and hollow eyes. Written underneath, in smudged pencil, was ‘HERE’.

A wave of dread washed over me. I stood up, and the door behind me slammed shut. The light flickered out. In the darkness, I heard the hum again, but this time it was a chorus of whispers, overlapping, unintelligible. I fumbled for my flashlight, and when I clicked it on, the beam revealed that I was not alone. In the corner, a figure stood, vaguely human, but its proportions were wrong, its limbs too long, its head tilted at an impossible angle. It didn’t move, but I felt its attention on me. I backed away, my hand finding the doorknob, but it wouldn’t turn. The figure took a step forward, and the floor beneath it warped, the carpet pattern twisting like a whirlpool.

I screamed, but no sound came out. The figure reached out with fingers like tendrils, and I closed my eyes, expecting the end. But just as it was about to touch me, a loud buzzer rang, and the lights blazed on. The figure vanished. I was on my knees, gasping. The hallway door was open. I scrambled out and ran down the corridor, not stopping until I reached the lobby. Varick was there, looking at his watch. ‘You’re late,’ he said. ‘I was about to send someone up.’ I tried to explain, but he just shook his head. ‘There’s nothing on the fourth floor but rooms 412, 414, and the Ambassador. 416 was sealed years ago. You must have been seeing things.’

I insisted, but he led me to the security office, showing me the floor plans. The blueprint for the east wing showed only three suites on that floor, with a blank wall where I had found 416. He shrugged, ‘Old hotel, lots of stories. But I wouldn’t pay them any mind.’ I went home that night, but I couldn’t sleep. The image of that figure haunted me. The next day, I returned to work, but I avoided the east wing. My supervisor, however, assigned me again to the fourth floor, this time to check the fire alarms. I was too afraid to refuse.

As I walked the hall, the carpet pattern seemed more pronounced, the gold lines forming a distinct spiral that led to the Ambassador Suite’s door. The dark stain was larger now, and it smelled faintly of copper. I found the service panel in the hall, and on a whim, I opened it. Inside, instead of a void, there was a tangle of old wires and a small leather journal, brittle with age. I took it before Varick could see. That night, I read it. It was the diary of a guest who had stayed in the Ambassador Suite in 1972. She wrote of a ‘pattern in the carpet’ that seemed to move, of a ‘presence’ that whispered at night, and of a ‘voice’ that asked her to ‘finish the drawing’. The last entry was unfinished, with a smear of dark red on the page.

I called the hotel archive the next day, pretending to be a researcher. They told me that in 1972, a woman had disappeared from the Ambassador Suite. Her body was never found, but they did discover a child’s drawing in the adjoining room, which was later sealed due to ‘structural issues’. That drawing matched the one I saw in the melted walls of 416. I realized that the figure I saw was connected to that drawing, a remnant of something unfinished. I began to see the gold lines everywhere, on the lobby carpet, on the wallpapers, even in the tile patterns. They all converged on one point: the blank wall where 416 used to be.

I couldn’t shake the feeling that something wanted me to ‘finish’ something. In a fit of obsession, I returned to the hotel late at night, using my master key to access the fourth floor. The hall was dark, but the emergency exit sign cast a red glow. I stood in front of the blank wall, and I could see a faint outline of a door that was not there. The journal had a pocket in the back, and I found a crayon, a single red crayon. I felt compelled to use it on the wall, tracing the outline of the door. As I drew, the wall began to soften, becoming like clay. I drew a crude door, and when I finished, a new doorknob appeared. I turned it, and the door swung open, revealing a room that was not 416, but something else entirely.

Inside, the room was filled with the same gray moor landscape from the painting, but it was real, or seemed real. The sky churned, and the ground beneath my feet was spongy. In the distance, I saw a figure, the same distorted one, but now it was standing over a body. I took a step forward, and the figure turned. Its face was a blank, but it opened a mouth that was too wide, and it spoke in a voice that was not a voice, but a vibration in my bones: ‘You came to finish it.’ I realised I was not the one who was supposed to finish something, but the entity itself was unfinished, and I was meant to complete it, to become part of the pattern. I ran, but the door behind me was gone. I was trapped in that impossible landscape, with the figure slowly approaching.

I don’t know how long I was there. Time didn’t pass. But eventually, the figure stopped, and pointed to a spot on the ground. There, half-buried in the grey mush, was the same drawing I saw in room 416, but incomplete. It was the figure, but only a torso, no arms, no legs. The message ‘HERE’ was written below. I understood: I was to add the missing limbs, but not with crayon. The figure handed me a small knife, its blade stained. I refused, but the figure’s form flickered, and I felt a pull again, as if I was being rewritten. My hand, trembling, reached for the knife, and I began to carve into the paper, or rather, into the ground itself, following the lines. As I carved, I felt a tearing in my own body, as if I was being cut, but there was no pain, only a numb acceptance.

When I finished, the figure was complete, and I was gone. My body was found in the Ambassador Suite, lying on the bed, with no marks on me, but a look of serene horror on my face. The police couldn’t explain it. They noted that the carpet in the suite had a new pattern, a subtle variation in the burgundy and gold, depicting a figure with limbs outstretched, and beneath it, the word ‘HERE’ woven into the fabric. The hotel sealed the east wing permanently, citing structural instability. But sometimes, late at night, the janitors report hearing a humming sound from above, and if they look out the window, they swear they see a light flickering in the window of the Ambassador Suite, where no one has set foot in decades.

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