The Pale Prisoner

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"My name is Elias, and for three years, I thought I was being tormented by a demon. My nights were filled with the sound of scratching—like nails on slate, but deeper, more desperate, coming from the walls, the floor, even from inside my own skull. Objects would slide off tables when I wasn’t looking. I’d […]"

My name is Elias, and for three years, I thought I was being tormented by a demon. My nights were filled with the sound of scratching—like nails on slate, but deeper, more desperate, coming from the walls, the floor, even from inside my own skull. Objects would slide off tables when I wasn’t looking. I’d wake with bruises shaped like fingerprints on my arms, as if something had gripped me and held on. My gifted friend, Clara, a woman with eyes that seemed to see through to the other side, had been my anchor. She performed cleansing rituals, burned sage, and drew protective circles that I never fully understood. Finally, she said she had trapped the entity in a glass sphere, about the size of a cricket ball, and sealed it with lead and wax. She kept it in a velvet pouch, which she kept in a small iron box, which she kept in the deepest corner of her basement. ‘It’s safe now, Elias,’ she’d say, her hand on my shoulder. ‘It can’t hurt you anymore.’ But she always added, ‘It scratches to get out.’ I’d shudder, imagining the thing clawing at its prison, and I’d thank her, never questioning why she never let me see it, never asked to hold the box.

A month ago, I found Clara’s diary in the attic of my own house—she’d stayed with me during the worst of it, and she’d left it behind by accident. I shouldn’t have read it, but I did. The pages were filled with cramped handwriting, and I skipped past the early entries about cleansing salts and banishing rites. Then I found a section dated after she’d ‘captured’ the thing. It read: ‘I told him it was a demon. It was easier. But I’ve never seen anything like this. It’s not malevolent, not in the way the books describe. It’s something older, something that doesn’t belong here. It’s white—not the pale of bleached bone, but a soft, luminous white, like moonlight captured in a jar. I’ve shielded it because I’m afraid, not of what it will do to Elias, but of what it is. It seems to… want something. It scratches because it’s lonely, not because it’s angry. But I can’t let it out. I don’t know what it wants.’ I read on, but the entries grew sparse, and the last one was just a line: ‘It knows I’m lying to him. It asked me to tell him the truth. But I can’t. It’s too dangerous.’ My hands shook as I closed the book. Clara had lied to me for years. The thing wasn’t a demon. And I had to know the truth.

I didn’t call Clara. I drove to her house, a small cottage on the edge of a willow marsh, where the trees hung low and the air smelled of stagnant water. She wasn’t home—probably at the market, a note on the door said. I knew where the box was; she’d shown me once, jokingly, saying she’d buried it ‘six feet under’ metaphorically. The basement door was unlocked, and I descended the creaking wooden steps into the damp, dim room. There were shelves of old jars, bundles of dried herbs, and that iron box, the size of a shoebox, sitting on a workbench. My heart pounded as I took it. It was heavier than I expected. Inside, the velvet pouch felt soft, and within that, the sphere was cold, almost icy. I brought it into the light of the single bulb overhead. The glass was black, opaque, but I could feel something moving inside, a faint vibration. I held it up, and as I did, the scratching sound I knew so well started—but it was coming from inside the sphere, not from my walls. And then, for the first time, the thing spoke. Not in words, but in a feeling, a wave of loneliness and longing that washed over me like a tide. I almost dropped it. It was then that I realized the truth: Clara had not shielded it from me. She had shielded it from the world—and from herself.

I had to know what it was. I took the sphere home, not to release it, but to study it. I sat in my study, the sphere on my desk, and I asked it questions aloud, feeling its responses as emotions. ‘What are you?’ I asked. The response was a sensation of vastness, of starlight, of being a traveler from a place of silence. ‘Why do you scratch?’ The answer was a picture in my mind: a child knocking on a door, hoping someone would open it. ‘What did you want from me?’ The answer was overwhelming: a desperate need to be seen, to be acknowledged, to have its story told. I realized then that all the paranormal events—the scratches, the bruises—were not attacks. They were attempts to communicate. The thing had been trying to reach me, and Clara had misinterpreted it, or maybe she’d known and was too afraid. I looked at the sphere. The black surface seemed to pulse, and for a moment, I swear I saw a faint white glow from within. I felt a pull, a curiosity, and also a fear. What if Clara was right? What if it was dangerous? But the loneliness I felt from it was so profound that it broke something in me. I made a decision. I would release it.

I waited until midnight, the hour when the veil is thin. I took the sphere to the willow marsh, to the heart of the wetlands where the water was black and still. I stood on a small wooden dock, the sphere in my hands. The moonlight was thin, but I could see the glow from the sphere, brighter now, pulsing like a heartbeat. I spoke words I didn’t fully understand—words from Clara’s diary, a releasing ritual she had written but never used. As I spoke, the sphere grew hot, then cold, and the scratching inside became frantic. Then there was a sound like glass shattering, but not sharp—rather, like a sigh that became a gale. The sphere burst into a cloud of fine white dust, and from the dust, a shape emerged. It was tall, humanoid, but made of pale, shimmering light, like a film of frost on a window. It had no face, but I felt its gaze. It stood before me, and I felt its gratitude, and its sorrow. It reached out a hand, and I felt an icy touch on my cheek, so gentle. Then it dissolved into the air, leaving only a faint glow that drifted into the marsh, and was gone.

I stood there for a long time, the dust settling on my clothes. I expected to feel relief, but instead, I felt a terrible weight. The loneliness I had felt from it didn’t vanish; it transferred to me. I walked home through the mist, and when I entered my house, the silence was oppressive. The scratching was gone, and in its absence, I heard only my own heartbeat. I never told Clara what I did. She came by the next day, panicked, asking if I’d been to her basement. I lied and said no. But she knew. She looked at me with fear in her eyes, and she said, ‘Elias, what have you done?’ I didn’t answer. I just stood in the doorway, feeling the emptiness around me, feeling the vast, cold space that was now inside me. I like to think that thing is out there, free, perhaps finding its way home. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I hear a soft scratching at my window. And when I look, there’s nothing there. But I know it’s the memory of what I released—or maybe, it’s something else. Maybe it was never meant to be set free. Maybe it was meant to stay trapped, because the world was too small for its presence. And now, I carry that vastness inside me, and I don’t know if I can hold it. The scratches have become my own, as I try to claw my way out of the loneliness I’ve inherited. And I wonder, if anyone will ever hear me.

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