The Pale Figure in the Half-Bath

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"The new trailer park sat on the edge of a town that had given up on itself, near a canal that would choke on algae every summer. My family moved into unit 14, a shiny silver box that smelled of new carpet and desperation. I was eight, and I shared a room with my mother, […]"

The new trailer park sat on the edge of a town that had given up on itself, near a canal that would choke on algae every summer. My family moved into unit 14, a shiny silver box that smelled of new carpet and desperation. I was eight, and I shared a room with my mother, a narrow space with a single window that looked out onto the gravel path and the neighbor’s rusting swing set.

One night, I woke with a start. The room was dark, but a weak glow from the streetlamp leaked through the sheer curtain, casting long shadows across the bed. I sat up, my heart thumping for no reason. I scanned the room: the dresser, the stacks of boxes we hadn’t unpacked, the open door to the tiny half-bath. Just as I was about to lie back down, I saw it.

It stood in the bathroom doorway, a column of pale grey, translucent like frosted glass. It had the vague shape of a man, but its features were smeared, as if someone had wiped a thumb across a damp painting. It didn’t move, didn’t breathe, but it was there, solid in a way that shouldn’t exist. I wanted to scream, but my throat was frozen. I squeezed my eyes shut and yanked the covers over my head, willing it to be a dream. When I finally dared to peek, it was gone.

The next morning, I tried to tell my mom, but she just laughed and said I had a bad dream. But I knew better. The haunting didn’t end there. It became a presence that lingered in the corners of our trailer, a chill that followed me from room to room. It would appear in my peripheral vision, always at the edge of the bathroom mirror, or standing in the kitchen doorway, watching me eat my cereal. My brothers said I was crazy, but my sister, who was two years younger, started waking up with scratch marks on her arms.

A month later, our dog, a mutt named Gus, refused to enter the half-bath. He would growl and back away, his hackles raised. Then the toilet started flushing by itself in the middle of the night. My mom finally called a paranormal investigator, a skinny man with thick glasses who carried a bag of gadgets. He set up cameras and listened, but his voice recorder picked up nothing but static. He left after two days, saying it was just the pipes.

But I knew. One night, I woke to find the figure standing at the foot of my bed. This time, it was closer, and I could see it had no face, just a smooth, grey oval. It reached out a hand, its fingers tapering into wisps like smoke. I shut my eyes and prayed. When I opened them, it was gone, but the bathroom door was open, and the light was flickering.

We moved out a week later. The new apartment was clean, quiet, and none of us spoke about the trailer. But I still feel it sometimes, a cool draft on the back of my neck, a subtle shift in the air. And I know it’s not done with me. It’s just waiting for me to slip, to let my guard down, to step into its silent, pale world again.

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