The late October air had a bite to it, but we kept the porch door cracked open, letting in the smell of wet leaves and distant woodsmoke. I was sprawled on the floor of our rented bungalow, idly flipping through a comic book while my older brother, Mason, slouched on the sagging sofa, nursing a beer he’d been nursing for two hours. Our mother, Doris, was in the kitchen, the clatter of dishes a familiar rhythm. We’d moved to the coast a year ago, trying to outrun the memories of my father’s accident, but the fog seemed to carry them right back.
At 10:17, the porch light flickered – the old wiring again. I glanced up, and through the warped glass of the door, I saw something pale drift past. It was tall, impossibly thin, and seemed to glide just above the wooden slats of the porch, moving toward the side yard where the garbage cans stood. I assumed it was our neighbor, Mrs. Kowalski, out for one of her late-night walks, but then I realized she always used the front gate, and she was short. This figure was at least six and a half feet.
My skin prickled. I turned to call Mason, but he was already asleep, an empty bottle dangling from his fingers. Doris was still in the kitchen, humming something off-key. The thing outside passed by the window, its silhouette distorting the dim glow from the porch lamp. I decided I was being paranoid – probably a trick of the light, or a deer. But when I looked back, the figure had stopped at the back corner of the house, its head tilting as if it were looking at something on the ground.
I grabbed the heavy flashlight from the hook by the door – not a bat, because I wasn’t a hero – and stepped out. The air was colder than I expected, and the fog had rolled in thick, muffling the sound of the waves crashing a block away. The figure was gone. I swept the light across the yard, past the bare rose bushes, over the overturned wheelbarrow, and up the side of the house. Nothing. I laughed at myself, shaking my head, and was about to go back inside when I noticed the garbage can lids were off, and something was scattered around them – not trash, but crumpled white pages, like the pages of a book.
I walked over, my boots crunching on fallen acorns. The pages were dry, as if they’d been there for a long time, but the garbage had been collected that afternoon. I picked one up. It was covered in handwriting – thin, spidery letters, so tight they almost interlocked. It was a list of names, some crossed out, some not. At the top, in larger letters, was my father’s name: Frank. A chill went down my spine, but I told myself it was a prank, probably kids.
I heard a snap behind me. I spun, but there was nothing. The fog had grown so dense I could barely see the porch steps. I grabbed a handful of the pages and rushed back inside, locking the door behind me. Mason was still asleep. Doris had come out, wiping her hands on a dish towel.
‘What’s that?’ she asked, nodding at the pages in my hand.
I hesitated. ‘Found them by the garbage. Looks like Dad’s name.’
Her face went pale. She snatched the pages from me, her fingers trembling. ‘Where did you get this?’ Her voice was sharp, scared.
‘Outside, near the cans. There were dozens of them.’
She dropped the pages on the coffee table as if they were hot. ‘We need to leave. Now.’
‘Mom, it’s just a prank,’ Mason slurred, stirring. ‘Calm down.’
‘You don’t understand,’ she said, her eyes darting to the window. The fog pressed against the glass, and for a moment, we all saw it – a pale shape, darker than the fog, moving along the fence line. ‘That’s the same thing that took your father.’
I felt the blood drain from my face. ‘What are you talking about?’
She sat down heavily, pulling the pages toward her. ‘Your father wasn’t in an accident. He was walking home from the bar one night, and he saw something in the fog. He came home raving about a ‘pale man’ that followed him. He said it left pages for him, pages that wrote his name on them. He was never the same after that. Two weeks later, he walked into the ocean.’
Mason was fully awake now, his face grim. ‘You never told us any of this.’
‘I didn’t want to scare you.’ She picked up one of the pages, her eyes tracing the ink. ‘But now it’s back. And it’s got Danny’s name on it.’
I looked down at the page in my hand. My name – Daniel – was scrawled in the middle, not crossed out, but written in fresh ink that gleamed moistly. The hair on my arms stood up. ‘We have to go,’ I said.
We didn’t get far. The fog was so thick that the car’s headlights were swallowed, and the road disappeared. We sat in the driveway, engines running, the pages burning in the ashtray. Mason was cursing, trying to reverse. Then the driver’s side window frosted over, and something tapped on the glass – three deliberate taps, like knuckles.
I looked up, and there it was, pressed against the glass. Its face was long and bone-white, with features that seemed to be etched in shadow – a mouth that was too wide, eyes that were empty holes. It peered in at me, and I swear it smiled. It raised a hand – too many fingers, all of them impossibly long – and placed it on the window. Frost spiraled outward from its touch, cracking the glass.
‘Drive!’ Doris screamed.
Mason floored the accelerator. The tires screeched, and the car lurched forward. The pale man slid off the window, but in the rearview mirror, I saw it standing in the middle of the road, watching us, its head tilting at a wrong angle. The fog swallowed it, and we drove for what felt like hours, but the road kept looping back to our bungalow. Every time we passed, the door was ajar, spilling warm light onto the porch, and in the window, there was a silhouette – tall and thin, waiting.
We finally abandoned the car on a side street, deep in the fog, and took shelter in an abandoned lighthouse on the cliff. We huddled in the cold, the wind howling outside. I clutched a page that had blown back onto my lap – my name was still there, but now it was smudged, as if a thumb had rubbed it. Below it, a new line of text had appeared, in that same spidery hand: ‘Not yet. Soon.’
Doris was weeping, her face buried in her hands. Mason was pacing, checking the rusted door every few minutes. I sat in the corner, watching the fog roll past the broken windows. I knew, with a certainty that chilled me more than the wind, that it was still out there. And it was patient. It had followed my father, and now it had found me.
As the first pale light of dawn bled through the fog, I heard a soft scraping against the lighthouse wall – like someone dragging a hand across the brick. I looked up at the circular window, and there, in the glass, was a word, written in condensation: ‘Come.’
I turned to tell Doris and Mason, but they were gone. The door was open, swinging in the wind, and the lighthouse was empty. Only a stack of white pages remained on the floor, neatly piled, with my name on the top sheet, now underlined.
I stepped outside, into the thinning fog, and saw the pale man standing at the edge of the cliff, its back to me. It raised an arm and pointed to the sea below, where the water churned against the rocks. I walked toward it, not because I wanted to, but because my legs moved without my permission. The fog closed in behind me, and I heard a voice – soft, like dry leaves – whispering my name: ‘Daniel.’
I didn’t look back.