The Painted Window

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"I had been dating Marcus for just over a year when he invited me to spend a long weekend at his family’s property in the countryside. He’d always been a bit cagey about the place, saying it was ‘a work in progress’ and that his parents had a habit of collecting odd things. I chalked […]"

I had been dating Marcus for just over a year when he invited me to spend a long weekend at his family’s property in the countryside. He’d always been a bit cagey about the place, saying it was ‘a work in progress’ and that his parents had a habit of collecting odd things. I chalked it up to his eccentric family and agreed, excited for a quiet getaway from the city.

The property was nestled at the end of a winding gravel road, surrounded by dense pine forest. As we pulled up, I saw two structures: an older, weathered house with peeling white paint and a newer, boxy one with raw wood siding, still smelling of sawdust. Marcus explained that the old house was the original farmhouse, now used as a sort of annex, and the new one was where his parents actually lived. They’d just finished construction two weeks ago.

We entered the new house through a heavy oak door that swung open with a groan. The living room was sparse, with a few mismatched chairs and a large window facing the forest. To the left, a compact kitchen with gleaming stainless steel appliances. To the right, a door led to a small enclosed yard where, Marcus said, they kept the bathroom and a tool shed because they hadn’t yet bothered to connect the plumbing from the new house to the old septic system.

Upstairs, the floor plan was tighter. The stairs opened into a small landing with two wicker chairs and an enormous window that overlooked a clearing. Marcus said his mother loved to sit here and watch the deer. There was also a tiny bedroom, just big enough for a double bed and a dresser, with a window that faced the old house.

The first night was uneventful. His parents were warm and welcoming, and we had a home-cooked meal in the new kitchen. But as I lay in bed that first night, in the little bedroom, I noticed something odd. The window in the bedroom was clean, but across the glass, almost invisible, was a faint smudge of paint, like someone had wiped a brush there and missed. I thought nothing of it and drifted off to sleep, the crickets a gentle lullaby.

The next morning, I was the first awake. I wandered into the living room, barefoot on the cold floor, and saw that the big window overlooking the forest was fogged up with condensation. In the middle of the fog, a perfect circle had been wiped clear, as if a face had pressed against it. I chalked it up to morning temperature differences and went about my day.

But throughout the day, I kept noticing small things. A tool left in the middle of the yard that I was sure I saw in the shed the day before. The faint smell of turpentine in the living room, though no painting was being done. Marcus’s mother, Elsie, was a quiet woman with a faraway look. At dinner, she mentioned that the new house felt ‘lighter’ than the old one, and that she sometimes saw reflections of people in the windows who weren’t there. She laughed it off, but Marcus shot me a worried glance.

That night, unable to sleep, I got up for a glass of water. From the landing, I saw a light flicker in the old house. I knew his parents were in the new house with us, so I was puzzled. I crept down the stairs and through the yard to the old house’s back door, which was unlocked. Inside, the air was musty. The old house was cluttered with generations of furniture, boxes, and draped sheets. The light came from a small room at the end of the hall, which I recognized as Marcus’s old room. I pushed the door open.

The room was mostly bare, except for a metal bed frame and a dresser. On the wall opposite the window, a huge painting hung, covered with a white sheet. I pulled the sheet away. It was a landscape, dark and brooding, of the same forest around us. In the foreground, a small figure stood, facing away from the viewer, but the paint was wet, as if just finished. I touched a corner of the canvas. The paint came off on my fingertip, clogged with dust.

I heard a sound behind me and spun. Elsie stood in the doorway, her nightgown ghostly pale. She said, ‘Don’t touch that. It’s the keeper.’ She explained that her great-grandmother had been a painter, and she’d made a pact with something in the woods to ensure the family’s prosperity. Every new building, she would paint a window onto a canvas and place it in the old house, as a ‘door’ for the spirit. The new house’s windows were never real windows but just paintings, which was why they hadn’t installed proper ones everywhere. She’d finished the last one today.

I backed away, my skin crawling. I looked out the window of that old room, and the new house’s windows glittered. And in the largest window, the one on the landing, I saw a humanoid shape, impossibly elongated, staring down at me. As I watched, it raised a hand and pressed it against the glass. The smear it left was identical to the one I’d seen on the bedroom window that morning.

I grabbed Marcus, but he only shrugged, saying his mother had always been strange. But I couldn’t shake the feeling. That night, I lay awake, staring at the window, and I saw the paint on the glass shift, forming a face. Not mine, not Marcus’s. A sunken, hollow face with empty eyes. It pressed closer until the glass creaked. I closed my eyes, and when I opened them, it was gone.

The next morning, I told Marcus I had to leave. He was reluctant, but I insisted. As we drove away, I looked back at the property. The new house’s windows were dark, but in the biggest one, I saw the figure again, watching. And I knew, deep in my bones, that I had left something behind. Or that something had now come with me. The first time I looked out my apartment window after returning, I saw a faint streak of white paint on the glass. And when night fell, I saw a shape in the reflection that wasn’t there. I never told Marcus, but I understood what his mother meant. The painter had found a new canvas. And I was the window.

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