The Nailed Windows

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"I was twenty-one when I played bass for a small bluegrass gospel band called the Hollow Creek Singers. We weren’t famous, not even close, but we had a following in the tri-state area, mostly church functions and county fairs. So when an invitation came to perform at a homecoming service in a tiny town called […]"

I was twenty-one when I played bass for a small bluegrass gospel band called the Hollow Creek Singers. We weren’t famous, not even close, but we had a following in the tri-state area, mostly church functions and county fairs. So when an invitation came to perform at a homecoming service in a tiny town called Parson’s Bend, nearly eight hundred miles from our home in eastern Kentucky, we were thrilled. I’d never been that far west, and the thought of seeing the Mississippi River and the flatlands of Tennessee was enough to make me pack my old upright bass and my best Sunday shirt.

The drive took two days in our beat-up Ford van, and the July heat was relentless. By the time we rolled into Parson’s Bend, the asphalt was shimmering, and the air felt thick as molasses. The town was barely a speck—a few houses, a post office, a general store, and at the edge of the main street, a white clapboard church with a steeple that seemed to pierce the hazy sky. The church was an old converted farmhouse, with a wide porch and tall windows that had been painted over many times. It looked charming, if a bit run-down, and we were welcomed by a portly deacon named Brother Eli, who shook our hands vigorously and led us inside to escape the sun.

The interior was cool and dark, smelling of old wood and lemon polish. The pews were straight-backed, worn smooth by generations of worshippers. There was a simple altar at the front, and behind it, a large wooden cross that had been carved with intricate patterns. On the walls hung faded quilts and framed Bible verses. I noticed that all the windows were shut tight, and as my eyes adjusted, I saw the glint of nails—brand new, shiny nails—driven into the frames, each one sunk deep into the wood. I pointed this out to our guitarist, Tommy, who just shrugged and said, ‘Maybe they don’t like drafts.’ I didn’t press the matter, but something about it unsettled me.

We were told there would be five groups performing that afternoon, and we were third on the lineup. The other groups arrived shortly after, musicians in starched suits and floral dresses, all friendly and eager to share the stage. As we set up our instruments, I kept glancing at the nailed windows. The sunlight struggled through the dusty panes, casting long, distorted shadows across the floor. The heat outside was oppressive, but inside it felt oddly cool, almost cold, and I shivered despite myself.

A few hours later, the service began. The first group, a family quartet, sang a lively rendition of ‘I’ll Fly Away,’ and the congregation clapped and swayed. The second group, a trio of sisters, performed a haunting version of ‘Wayfaring Stranger,’ and I noticed a few old women dabbing at their eyes. Then it was our turn. We launched into our usual set—’Amazing Grace,’ ‘The Old Rugged Cross,’ and a lesser-known tune called ‘The Church in the Wildwood.’ I played my bass with practiced ease, letting the vibrations of the strings travel through my fingers.

As we sang, I felt a strange sensation, like something was crawling up my spine. I glanced at the windows again—they were sealed, save for the nails. But the curtains stirred, as if a breeze had passed through the room. I looked at Tommy, who was strumming his guitar, his brow furrowed. He gave me a quick nod, and we finished the song to polite applause.

After our set, we stepped down and took seats in the front row. The fourth group, a choir from a nearby church, began to sing a powerful arrangement of ‘Sweet Hour of Prayer.’ That’s when I heard it—a faint, high-pitched whine, like the sound of a mosquito trapped in the rafters. At first, I thought it was just the heat, but then the whine grew into a cacophony, a discordant hum that seemed to come from the walls themselves. I looked around, but no one else seemed to notice. The choir sang on, unaware.

The sound subsided as quickly as it had come, and I dismissed it as my imagination. But then I caught a glimpse of the windows. The nails—they were moving. They were being pushed out, slowly, from the inside, as if something was trying to get in. I blinked, and they were still, just rusted metal wedged into wood. I felt a cold dread pool in my stomach.

The final group was a soloist, an elderly man named Brother Ezekiel, who sang with a voice cracked with age. He performed a song I had never heard before, a slow, dirge-like melody about a shepherd who lost his flock and wandered into the wilderness, never to return. As he sang, the temperature in the room dropped dramatically. My breath formed small clouds, and I noticed the other musicians were rubbing their arms. The pastor, a young man with a nervous smile, seemed to be sweating despite the cold.

When Brother Ezekiel finished, there was a long, heavy silence. Then, without warning, one of the windows shattered. Glass sprayed across the floor, and a dark shape fluttered in, settling on the back of a pew. It was a bird—a huge, black crow. Its eyes were not bird-like; they were amber, and they seemed to fix on each of us in turn. The congregation gasped, and Brother Eli rushed forward, brandishing a Bible. ‘Get it out!’ he shouted. But the crow simply hopped from pew to pew, until it reached the altar, where it perched on the corner, staring at the cross.

Then it spoke. Its voice was low and gravelly, like stones grinding together, and it said, ‘You were not invited.’ The room fell into chaos. People screamed, some fell to their knees, and others bolted for the doors, only to find them locked. The crow spread its wings, and the windows—all of them—burst inward at once, a thousand tiny shards flying like shrapnel. The cold air rushed out, replaced by a stench of decay and sulfur.

I grabbed Tommy’s arm, and we huddled behind a pew, watching in horror as the crow grew, its feathers morphing into a dark, shapeless mass that filled the front of the room. The walls began to bleed—a thick, black liquid oozing from the nail holes. The pastor was on his knees, praying frantically, but his words were drowned out by a low, guttural chant that seemed to come from everywhere at once.

Then, as suddenly as it had begun, it stopped. The crow was gone, the windows were intact—the glass whole, the nails firmly back in place. The congregation was scattered, some weeping, some staring blankly. The pastor stood, his face pale as death, and whispered, ‘It’s not over.’

We left that church as fast as we could, throwing our instruments into the van and driving away without a word to anyone. It was only when we were miles down the road that I noticed the back of my hand was bleeding, a long, thin cut that hadn’t been there before. I traced it with my finger, and I could have sworn I saw tiny letters forming in the blood, spelling out a name—a name I did not recognize but felt deep in my bones.

We never spoke of Parson’s Bend again. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I still feel that cold air on my face, and I hear that voice—low and gravelly—sliding through the cracks of my mind, saying, ‘You were not invited.’ And I wonder if we ever truly left at all.

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