The Mud-Stained Slippers

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"The old farmhouse sat at the edge of the mustard fields, its whitewashed walls gleaming in the afternoon sun. My grandmother, Ammi, lived there with my mother, who was barely seven. The house was sprawling, with deep verandas and high ceilings that trapped the heat and the silence. One evening, the air was thick with […]"

The old farmhouse sat at the edge of the mustard fields, its whitewashed walls gleaming in the afternoon sun. My grandmother, Ammi, lived there with my mother, who was barely seven. The house was sprawling, with deep verandas and high ceilings that trapped the heat and the silence.

One evening, the air was thick with the scent of earth and ripening crops. Ammi sat in her room, her hands busy with a spool of thread. She called for her maid, Zainab, who had been with the family for years. ‘Zainab! Bring my shoes, the ones with the brass buckles.’

A few moments later, a figure appeared at the door. She was dressed in Zainab’s familiar grey shalwar kameez, but something about her was off. Her movements were too smooth, her face a blank mask. She placed the shoes on the floor without a word and left, her footsteps unnervingly silent on the tiles.

Ammi shrugged and reached for the shoes. They were her Sunday best, but the soles were caked with mud, and the leather was damp, as if they had been soaked in a stream. She wiped them clean and put them aside, but the unease lingered like a cold draft.

Later that night, as the village settled into sleep, Ammi mentioned the incident to her husband. He frowned. ‘Zainab went to her sister’s village for a week. She left this morning.’ A chill ran down Ammi’s spine. The woman who had come was not Zainab.

The next morning, the house was abuzz. Ammi gathered the other servants and asked if anyone had seen the stranger. The cook, a wiry old man named Karim, hesitated. ‘Begum, I saw someone going to the well at dusk. She walked like she was gliding, and she didn’t cast a shadow.’ The gardener, Bhola, nodded. ‘And I found marks near the back wall, like bare feet, but they were too long.’

That day, Ammi kept the children close. My mother, a curious girl, wandered into the courtyard where the shoes had been. She found the brass buckles lying in the dust, the leather gone as if eaten by acid. She cried out, and Ammi came running.

The rest of the week, the house seemed to breathe unease. Doors creaked open on their own, and the smell of wet earth followed Ammi wherever she went. On the third night, Ammi woke to the sound of water dripping. She followed it to the bathroom, where the tap was dripping into a basin. In the basin lay the shoes, now pristine and dry, but the mud on the soles had formed into a shape—a single footprint, impossibly long, pointing toward the mirror.

Ammi’s blood ran cold. She remembered the old stories of jinn who could mimic the living, wearing their faces like borrowed clothes. She began to recite verses from the Quran, and the dripping stopped. The shoes were thrown into the oven and burned. The ashes were buried under the neem tree at the corner of the field.

Years later, when my mother told me this story, we were sitting in that same farmhouse, now crumbling and half-deserted. I was seven. She pointed to a patch of bare earth beneath the neem. ‘Nothing grows there,’ she said. ‘And sometimes, in the summer, when the air is heavy, you can still smell the mud.’

I shivered, staring at the spot. In the distance, I thought I saw a figure in grey, walking toward the well. It stopped, turned, and for a fleeting second, I saw its face—a perfect copy of my mother’s, but with eyes that were empty. It smiled, and I felt the ground beneath me turn cold and wet, as if the mud from the shoes had seeped up through the soil to claim my feet as well.

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