The Mirror’s Empty Orbit

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"When I was seven, I found my mother’s locket tucked beneath a pile of silk scarves in her dressing room. It was a small, tarnished thing with a clasp that resisted my fumbling fingers. I stood before her oval mirror, the one with the gilded frame that always felt too ornate for our modest apartment, […]"

When I was seven, I found my mother’s locket tucked beneath a pile of silk scarves in her dressing room. It was a small, tarnished thing with a clasp that resisted my fumbling fingers. I stood before her oval mirror, the one with the gilded frame that always felt too ornate for our modest apartment, and finally pried it open. Inside was a faded photograph of a woman I didn’t recognize, her face partially obscured by a crack in the glass. As I squinted at it, a movement caught my eye in the mirror’s reflection. The room behind me was empty, but in the corner, where the shadows pooled like spilled ink, a figure was taking shape.

She was a girl, no older than me, with hair the color of old straw and a dress that might have been white once, now gray and ragged, torn at the hem. She stood perfectly still, facing me, but her gaze wasn’t on my face. It was on the mirror, on my reflection, on me. And her eyes were wrong. They weren’t eyes at all, but two perfect circles of absolute black, like voids that swallowed light. They were so deep and empty that I felt I could fall into them, that I might tumble forever and never find my way out. I dropped the locket, the clatter snapping the spell, and when I looked again, she was gone. But I never forgot those holes, those perfect, endless pits that seemed to hold the absence of everything.

Two years later, we traveled to my mother’s hometown in the Carpathian Mountains for the summer. The village was a cluster of ancient stone houses huddled around a church with a crooked spire, and our ancestral home sat at the edge, a sprawling structure with creaking floors and windows that seemed to stare. On the first night, the neighbors gathered in the yard, their lanterns casting dancing shadows. My older sister Mira and I stood with a group of teenagers, listening to their excited chatter in a language I barely understood. But I caught a phrase that made my blood go cold: ‘the house is haunted.’ They lowered their voices, glancing at me, and I felt a chill that had nothing to do with the mountain air.

I wandered away from the group, drawn to the front of the house, where an old well stood half-hidden by overgrown ivy. The moon was full, casting a silver light that made the stones look like bones. I peered into the well’s dark mouth, imagining the water far below, when I heard a sound behind me. A soft, rhythmic scuffing, like bare feet on flagstones. I spun around. There, in the shadow of the porch, stood the same girl from my mother’s mirror. Her dress was tattered now, more so, and her black eyes were fixed on me. They were not just empty; they were hungry. I opened my mouth to scream, but no sound came.

She raised a hand, pointing a finger at the well, then at me, then back at the well. I understood. She wanted me to look deeper. I tore my gaze away and fled back to the safety of the lights and voices, my heart pounding. For the rest of the summer, I never went near the well again, and I avoided mirrors, covering them with cloths at night. But I felt her watching, always, from the corners of my vision.

Years passed, and I grew up, convincing myself it was a child’s imagination. But the image of those perfect black circles never faded. In my twenties, I returned to the village after my mother’s death, to settle her affairs. The house was as I remembered, musty and cold. I walked through the rooms, touching the furniture, and found myself in front of a dusty mirror in the hallway. I stood there, my reflection staring back at me, and I saw her again. She was older, as if she had aged with me, but her eyes were the same bottomless voids. She smiled, a slow, terrible grin that stretched too wide, and I realized the truth: she wasn’t a ghost haunting the house. She was something else, something that had chosen me that day in the mirror, and she had been waiting all these years for me to return. She pointed again, this time to the mirror, and I saw my own reflection begin to change. My eyes were slowly blackening, becoming perfect circles, and I knew I could not run from her any longer. She was a part of me now, and in the mirror’s empty orbit, I was falling into her forever.

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