The Mirror’s Debt

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"In the autumn of 1987, when I was twelve, my family moved to a creaking farmhouse in the hills of Vermont, a place my parents had inherited from a distant uncle. The house was a labyrinth of drafty rooms and narrow staircases, but the heart of it was the upstairs study, a room my mother […]"

In the autumn of 1987, when I was twelve, my family moved to a creaking farmhouse in the hills of Vermont, a place my parents had inherited from a distant uncle. The house was a labyrinth of drafty rooms and narrow staircases, but the heart of it was the upstairs study, a room my mother turned into a sewing parlor. It had a tall, arched window that faced the woods, two deep closets, and a single, massive mirror in a gilded frame that dominated one wall. I felt an inexplicable dread whenever I passed that mirror, my reflection seeming to lag a half-second behind my movements.

My only solace was the old barn cat, a scruffy orange tabby named Marmalade, who had adopted me on our first day. He was a skittish creature, but he would follow me everywhere except into that study, hissing and arching his back at the threshold. I thought it was just his nature, but soon I began to notice other things. In the dead of night, I’d hear a faint rustling from the study, like dry leaves skittering across the floor, and sometimes a low, guttural murmur that seemed to come from behind the walls.

One evening in late September, my parents had gone to a town meeting, leaving me alone with my younger sister, Emily. We were playing cards in the kitchen when the wind picked up, rattling the windows. Emily complained of a chill, and I volunteered to fetch a quilt from the hall closet. As I climbed the stairs, I noticed the door to the study was ajar, though I was sure it had been closed. A pale, sickly light spilled from within.

I should have gone back, but curiosity got the better of me. I crept to the doorway and peered inside. The mirror reflected not the room, but a dense, swirling fog. In the center of that miasma, a shape was taking form—a tall, gaunt figure with elongated limbs and a featureless face. It raised a hand, and from its fingertips, a tendril of orange mist reached out, wrapping around the leg of a chair and pulling it closer. I stumbled back, but the creak of the floorboards gave me away.

The figure turned—if it could be said to turn—and its eyeless gaze fixed upon me. I tried to move, but my legs were frozen. The mist coiled toward me, icy and suffocating, and I felt a pressure at my chest, as if it were squeezing the breath from me. Just as I was about to pass out, Marmalade darted between my legs, his fur bristling, and let out a yowl that pierced the silence. The mist recoiled, and the door slammed shut.

I fled downstairs, my heart racing, and found Emily shaking on the kitchen floor. She looked up at me with wide eyes. ‘The window,’ she whispered. ‘There was a face pressed against the glass, but it had no eyes.’ I didn’t sleep that night, and I refused to go near the study again.

The next morning, my father decided to investigate. He found the mirror intact, but the glass was cold to the touch, and the room smelled of burnt sugar. He noticed a small, brass key that had appeared on the windowsill, which unlocked a hidden drawer in the old desk. Inside was a journal belonging to my great-uncle, a man who had disappeared decades ago. His writing was erratic, filled with ramblings about ‘the debtor’ who came through the mirror when one took what was not theirs.

My great-uncle had been a collector of antique coins, and he had stolen a rare gold piece from a traveling merchant. He wrote that he had heard a knocking on the mirror that night, and a voice demanding repayment. He tried to return the coin, but it was too late. The last entry was simply: ‘It takes what it is owed. I am its debt.’

As I read those words, the study door creaked open behind me. I turned to see the mirror’s surface ripple like water, and from it stepped a woman in a tattered dress, her skin gray as ash. She held out a withered hand, palm up, and whispered, ‘You brought the cat.’ I looked down, and Marmalade was gone. In his place was a small, tarnished bell.

I didn’t wait to see more. I grabbed Emily and ran out of the house, carrying only that bell. We drove to the nearest neighbor’s place and called our parents, but when they came back, they found the house empty—no furniture, no mirror, no sign of our lives. The only trace was a lingering smell of burnt sugar and a single orange hair on the doorstep.

To this day, I keep that bell with me, though I’ve never had the courage to ring it. Sometimes, in the dead of night, I hear a faint creaking, and I see a wisp of orange fog curling under my door. I know it’s still watching, waiting for me to forget. But I won’t. I can’t. Because in the mirror, I saw my own reflection, and it was wearing that woman’s smile.

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