The Man in the Cloth Cap

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Story Premise 2 min read (356 words)

"Marla first noticed him during the demolition phase of their kitchen remodel, a tiny figure barely reaching the height of the counter stools, dressed in old-fashioned work clothes and a flat cloth cap. He would shuffle from the closed patio door, across the tile, and vanish into the wall where the new pantry was going. […]"

Marla first noticed him during the demolition phase of their kitchen remodel, a tiny figure barely reaching the height of the counter stools, dressed in old-fashioned work clothes and a flat cloth cap. He would shuffle from the closed patio door, across the tile, and vanish into the wall where the new pantry was going. She laughed it off as a trick of the light, maybe a stray shadow from the hanging work lamps, but her husband, Derek, swore he saw the same little man, once by the breakfast nook, another time near the laundry room. They were in the middle of a historical district, after all, their house built in the 1920s, so maybe it was some residual energy from a long-ago worker. That theory crumbled one evening when Marla, alone in the house, heard a soft thud from the bedroom. She crept up the stairs, heart hammering, and found the attic door ajar—a door she was certain she’d closed. A faint shuffling sound came from within, and when she peered up into the dusty gloom, she saw a small form crouched by the old cedar chest, its head turning toward her with a sickening, deliberate slowness. This was no imprint. This was something present, something aware. Over the next weeks, the presence grew bolder. Small tools would go missing, only to reappear in impossible places. Derek started sleeping with a baseball bat by the bed. Then one night, Marla woke to the sensation of being watched. She turned on the lamp and saw the little man standing by the footboard, his cloth cap shading his face, but she could feel his eyes on her. He took a step toward the closet, then paused, and in a voice like dry leaves, he whispered, ‘You’re in my place.’ The next morning, they found the attic door wide open, a cold draft spilling down the stairs, and on the bedroom floor a single, old-fashioned button, its thread still intact. They moved out that week, but Marla still feels him sometimes, standing just at the edge of her vision, waiting for them to leave for good.

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