The Locked Window

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"The tiles were cold beneath my bare feet as I padded through the kitchen, my fingers tracing the edges of the cabinets. Leo had called it a ‘cleansing ritual,’ something to ‘open the way’ for answers about Mom’s illness. I wasn’t sure I believed it, but when your older brother is desperate and your mother […]"

The tiles were cold beneath my bare feet as I padded through the kitchen, my fingers tracing the edges of the cabinets. Leo had called it a ‘cleansing ritual,’ something to ‘open the way’ for answers about Mom’s illness. I wasn’t sure I believed it, but when your older brother is desperate and your mother is fading, you try anything. He handed me a list of instructions: crack every closet you can reach, leave windows ajar, play soothing music. ‘It’s all about intention, Mira,’ he’d said. ‘Make it positive.’ So I did.

I moved through the house like a secret agent, careful not to disturb the dust motes dancing in the afternoon light. The cats, three of them—Miso, Soba, and Nori—were already twitchy, their ears rotating at every creak. The puppy, Biscuit, had to be watched constantly or he’d bolt through the first gap. I left the hall closet open by three inches, the kitchen pantry by a sliver. In the living room, I cranked the window, but it stuck. I pushed harder, and it slid open with a groan. The window in the guest bedroom had a lock that wouldn’t budge. I jimmied it, and just as it clicked open, I heard the garage door rumble. My stomach dropped. The window slid closed with a soft click, the lock engaged. I sprinted to the front door, breathless, as Mom and Dad stepped inside.

‘What’s with the music?’ Dad asked, setting down groceries. I shrugged, still shaky. ‘Just trying something new.’ He raised an eyebrow but said nothing. Mom drifted past me, her eyes distant, and I felt a chill that had nothing to do with the draft. That night, I couldn’t sleep. The house felt wrong, like the air had thickened. At 3 AM, I heard a faint scratching at the window in the guest bedroom. I tiptoed in and saw the latch slowly turning, from the inside. My breath hitched. There was no wind. I walked closer, and the latch stopped. The window was shut, locked, but I could see tiny frost patterns blooming on the glass, even though the room was warm.

The next morning, I told Leo. He paled. ‘You didn’t close that window, did you?’ ‘I had to,’ I whispered. ‘They were coming.’ He shook his head. ‘The ritual requires all windows to stay open for the full cycle of the moon. You locked one, and now something is stuck in between.’ I stared at him. ‘What do you mean, in between?’ He didn’t answer. Instead, he grabbed his keys. ‘I’ll get more supplies. Keep everything else open.’

I spent the day watching every opening. The cats were fixated on the guest bedroom door, hackles raised. Biscuit whined, pawing at the wood. I opened the door a crack, and the room was freezing. The window was glazed over with ice. In the center of the glass, a handprint, small like a child’s, was slowly melting. I backed away, heart hammering. I called Leo, but it went to voicemail. I tried again, nothing. The house seemed to hum, a low vibration that pulsed through my feet.

By evening, the ice had spread to the hallway. Leo still wasn’t picking up. I found Mom in the living room, standing in front of the open window, staring out. ‘There’s a little boy out there,’ she said, her voice dreamy. ‘He wants to come in.’ I grabbed her arm, pulled her back. ‘No, Mom. It’s not a boy.’ She looked at me, eyes suddenly sharp. ‘He’s been here before. He says the lock was his.’ I felt ice run down my spine. The lock on that window—I’d forced it, breaking years of rust. What if it wasn’t just a lock? What if it was a seal?

The lights flickered. The music on the stereo turned to static, then a faint, childish giggle. The cats scattered, hissing. Biscuit hid under the couch. I ran to the guest bedroom, threw open the door. The window was open. The latch hung loose, broken. A cold wind swept through, and I could see the handprint now, smeared on the inside. Something was in the house. I could feel it watching from corners, breathing in the dark. I tried Leo again, but the line was dead.

Then I heard the front door slam. Not the wind—a deliberate slam, like a child throwing a tantrum. I ran to the foyer, and there, standing in the doorway, was a boy, no older than seven, soaked to the bone. He smiled, but his eyes were wrong, too white. ‘You opened my window,’ he said, his voice hollow. ‘Now I can stay.’ I stepped back, and he advanced. ‘Where’s your brother?’ he asked, tilting his head. ‘He tried to close it again. I fixed his reach.’ I felt a scream clogging my throat. He reached out a wet hand, and I saw it wasn’t water that soaked him—it was frost. ‘Don’t worry,’ he said, stepping closer, ‘I’ve been waiting for someone to let me in. My mother locked me out, years ago. It was cold. So cold.’

I don’t know how long we stood there, but eventually, the house grew silent. The boy was gone, but so was Mom. I found her in the guest room, sitting by the open window, humming a lullaby. Her skin was pale and cool, but she smiled, her eyes clear for the first time in months. ‘He’s happy now,’ she said. ‘He found a home.’ I looked at the window, frost creeping up the walls. I tried to close it, but my hand wouldn’t obey. I stepped back, and the latch clicked shut on its own. The room warmed, but a single pane of ice remained, perfectly shaped like a handprint.

Now, every night, I feel him watching. The cats won’t enter that room. Biscuit growls at nothing. And I haven’t heard from Leo since. The police searched, but found nothing. I still live in the same house, because where would I go? But I can’t shake the feeling that the lock wasn’t the only thing I broke. Somewhere in the walls, something breathes, and it’s waiting for me to make another mistake. Last night, I saw a small handprint on my bedroom window, on the inside. The boy is learning to unlock other doors. And I fear, one day soon, he’ll find the one I keep locked inside myself.

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