The Locked Sunroom

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"The summer before my junior year, my parents announced we were moving forty miles north to a town called Harrow Creek. It wasn’t far in miles, but for me, it was another universe. My school, my friends, my whole life—left behind because Dad got a job transfer and Mom wanted a bigger garden. The house […]"

The summer before my junior year, my parents announced we were moving forty miles north to a town called Harrow Creek. It wasn’t far in miles, but for me, it was another universe. My school, my friends, my whole life—left behind because Dad got a job transfer and Mom wanted a bigger garden. The house we bought was a sprawling Victorian with a wrap-around porch and a sunroom that hadn’t been used in years. The previous owners, a couple going through a nasty divorce, had sold it cheap and moved to different states. I never met them, just their realtor, a man with a perpetually sad smile who kept mentioning the ‘character’ of the house.

From the first night, I felt it. Not a presence, exactly, but a weight. The house seemed to watch me. My room was at the end of a long hallway, and the door to the sunroom was at the other end, always slightly ajar. I’d push it shut, but it would creak open again within minutes. I told my parents, but they chalked it up to a draft. The realtor had said the sunroom had been sealed off for years because of a leaky roof, but when I peeked inside, the room was dry, dusty, and filled with old wicker furniture and a single, wilted fern in a ceramic pot.

One night, I couldn’t sleep. I got up for water and passed the sunroom door. It was wide open. I know I’d shut it before bed. I stepped inside, and the air was cold, much colder than the rest of the house, even in late August. The fern, which had been brown and brittle that afternoon, was now a lush green. I touched a leaf, and it was damp, like it had just been watered. That’s when I heard the lock click behind me. I spun around, and the door was shut. I rushed to it, but the handle wouldn’t turn. I was trapped.

I pressed my ear to the door and heard muffled voices, my parents arguing? No, the voices were too young. A boy and a girl, whispering. ‘She’s in there now,’ the girl said. ‘Doesn’t she know better?’ the boy replied. Then they laughed, a sound that was too sharp, like glass breaking. I pounded on the door, shouting for help. My parents didn’t come. I was in there for hours, it felt like. The room grew darker, and shadows seemed to gather in the corners, forming shapes that didn’t make sense. I huddled in the corner, trying not to breathe, listening to the whispers that seemed to come from inside the walls.

Just before dawn, the door unlocked with a soft click. I stumbled out into the hallway, gasping. My parents were in the kitchen, having coffee as if nothing had happened. I told them about being locked in, but my mom said, ‘You probably fell asleep and had a dream, sweetie.’ I wanted to scream, but I knew they wouldn’t believe me. The next day, I tried to show them the fern, but it was brown and withered again, and the door to the sunroom was firmly shut. I didn’t open it again.

But the house wasn’t done with me. I started finding things. A child’s drawing of a three-eyed cat under my bed. A pair of old glasses in the attic, the lenses cracked. And sometimes, at night, I heard a soft tapping on my window, even though my room was on the second floor. I never looked. I was too afraid of what I’d see.

One afternoon, I was in the living room when I saw a figure pass the window. It was a girl, maybe fourteen, with long dark hair. She didn’t look in, but she waved at someone. I ran to the window, but no one was there. My heart pounded. I asked my dad if there were any neighbors with kids, and he said the house next door had been empty for years.

I decided to investigate the sunroom’s history. I sneaked into the garage and found a old family album in a box marked ‘junk’. It belonged to the previous owners. I flipped through it, and there were the usual family photos, but near the back, I found a photo of a girl with long dark hair, smiling in front of the sunroom. On the back, in faded handwriting, it said, ‘Sarah, age 14, summer before she left.’ I felt a chill. I recognized that smile. It was the same wave from the window.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I heard that tapping again, but this time I forced myself to look. I pulled back the curtain, and there was the girl, floating just outside my window, her face pressed against the glass, her lips moving silently. I couldn’t hear her, but I could read the shape of the words: ‘Let me in.’ I slammed the curtain shut and dove under my covers, shaking.

The next day, I confronted my parents with the album. I showed them Sarah’s picture and told them about the tapping. My mom’s face went pale. She looked at my dad, and they exchanged a look I didn’t like. Finally, my mom said, ‘We should have told you. The previous owners had a daughter who ran away before they sold the house. They never found her. They said she might have been kidnapped.’ I felt a knot in my stomach. ‘But she wasn’t kidnapped, was she?’ I asked. My dad shook his head, looking grim. ‘The police found her diary. It mentioned a ‘room that keeps her’ and ‘the fern that never dies.’ They never found her body.’

I realized then that I hadn’t been locked in that sunroom by accident. Sarah was trapped in there, or her spirit was, and now she’d latched onto me. The house wasn’t haunted; it was a prison. And I was the new warden.

That evening, I steeled myself and went to the sunroom. The door was unlocked, as if waiting for me. I stepped inside, and the fern was green again. I felt a presence, a coldness by my side. I spoke, my voice trembling, ‘Sarah, I want to help you.’ The room was silent. But then I heard a faint crying, coming from the walls. I put my hand on the wall, and it was cold as ice. ‘I know you’re there. Tell me what happened.’

The crying stopped. And then, a whisper, so faint I almost missed it: ‘He buried me here. He said I was a burden. He locked the door and left.’ I felt a wave of horror. ‘Who?’ But there was no answer. Just the sound of something being dragged across the floor above me.

I ran upstairs, heart racing. The attic door was open. I’d never been in the attic. My parents had said it was empty. But now, I saw a trapdoor in the floor, hidden under old boxes. I pulled it open, revealing a small crawlspace. Inside, there was a bundle of old cloth. I unwrapped it and found a child’s hairbrush, a locket, and a letter. The letter was from Sarah’s father. It said, ‘I’m sorry, my darling. This is the only way.’

I felt sick. I grabbed my phone and called the police. They came, and I led them to the sunroom, where I had seen the rotting floorboards. They pulled them up, and underneath, they found human remains. It was Sarah. Her father had killed her and hidden her body in the sunroom, then sealed it when they sold the house. He was arrested, and he confessed.

After that, the house felt lighter. The fern turned brown and died. The door to the sunroom stayed shut on its own. But sometimes, I still feel a cold spot in that hallway, and I think I hear a faint, sad thank you. I know they never found her body, but I like to think she’s free now. The house is still the same, but the weight is gone. And every night, before I sleep, I check the lock on my window. Just in case.

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