The Linen Gap

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"The house on Wattle Street was a relic of another time, a towering wooden structure with wide verandas and a corrugated iron roof that sang when the rain came. It had a way of holding heat, of creaking at night like old bones, and I knew every inch of it, every loose floorboard and hidden […]"

The house on Wattle Street was a relic of another time, a towering wooden structure with wide verandas and a corrugated iron roof that sang when the rain came. It had a way of holding heat, of creaking at night like old bones, and I knew every inch of it, every loose floorboard and hidden corner. That summer, when I was twelve, my Aunt Pearl and Uncle Gus came to visit with their four kids—Marnie, the eldest at fourteen, then the twins, Pete and Polly, who were nine, and little Rosie, just six. The grown-ups settled on the back deck with their drinks, their laughter drifting through the screen door as the sky turned a deep purple.

Us kids, we decided to play hide and seek in the dark. The house was perfect for it, all those shadowed rooms and narrow passageways. Marnie was the seeker, and she stood in the hallway with her hands over her eyes, counting to fifty. I knew the best hiding spot, a little nook I’d discovered weeks before: between the linen cupboard and the bathroom wall. The cupboard door, when swung open wide, created a cramped triangle of space, just big enough for me to squeeze into. I slid in, pulled the door shut, and held my breath.

The game went on for what felt like hours. I could hear the others getting caught one by one—Pete’s giggle, Polly’s shriek, Rosie’s patter of feet down the hall. Their voices would rise and then fade as they were led to the ‘base,’ a spot on the living room rug. But no one found me. I waited, listening to the echoes of footsteps and whispers, feeling the musty scent of old sheets and towels that surrounded me.

Then, the house went quiet. Not the quiet of everyone holding their breath, but a deep, unnatural stillness, as if the very air had thickened. I heard the floorboards creak in the hallway, a slow, deliberate pace, not Marnie’s quick steps. It stopped right outside the cupboard. I froze, my heart thudding against my ribs. The crack of light under the door was blocked by something. A shadow, perhaps, but it was too dark, and the shadow seemed to breathe.

I saw the door begin to move, not swinging open, but the gap widening as if pushed by an unseen force. A sliver of cold air slipped through, and then a voice, not Marnie’s, not anyone’s, whispered my name. It wasn’t coming from outside the door; it was inside, in the cupboard with me, a low, rasping murmur right next to my ear. I couldn’t see anyone, but I felt the presence—a crushing weight of age and sorrow, like the house itself had opened its throat to speak.

I screamed, shoved the door open, and stumbled into the hallway. The house was empty. The lights were on in the kitchen, and I could hear the others laughing in the living room. I ran to them, shouting that I’d heard something, but they just looked at me, puzzled. Marnie said she’d given up looking for me and hadn’t even come down that hall. The adults came in, asking what the fuss was about. I tried to explain, but the words sounded ridiculous, even to me. They patted my head and said it was just an old house playing tricks.

That night, long after everyone was asleep, I couldn’t shake the feeling. I crept back to the hallway, to the linen cupboard. The door was ajar, just as I’d left it. I pushed it wider, and in the dim light from the bathroom, I saw something I hadn’t noticed before: a thin, dark line running vertically down the back wall, almost invisible against the wood grain. It looked like a crack, but it was too straight, too deliberate. I ran my fingers along it, and the wall gave slightly, like a door.

I never told anyone. But I never hid in that spot again, and I always kept a light on in the hallway after that. Years later, when we sold the house, the new owners had the linen cupboard torn out during a renovation. They found a hollow space behind it, large enough for a person to stand in, and on the floor, a child’s toy—a small, wooden horse with its legs worn down from years of use. They asked if it was mine, but I shook my head. I’d never seen it before. They threw it away, but I thought of that voice, and I knew, somehow, that the house had kept a secret for a hundred years, and I had been the only one to ever hear it breathe.

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