The Levitating Comb

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Story Premise 4 min read (722 words)

"It was the summer I turned fifteen, and the heat in our apartment on the top floor of a creaking brownstone was unbearable. I spent most afternoons sprawled on my narrow bed with a notebook, trying to finish a tedious history paper. The air was thick and still, and the only sound was the distant […]"

It was the summer I turned fifteen, and the heat in our apartment on the top floor of a creaking brownstone was unbearable. I spent most afternoons sprawled on my narrow bed with a notebook, trying to finish a tedious history paper. The air was thick and still, and the only sound was the distant hum of the city below and the occasional groan of the old building settling. My mother had gone to visit her sister for the weekend, so the apartment felt cavernous, the rooms holding their breath.

I had been staring at the same paragraph for an eternity when the pressure in my bladder demanded attention. I swung off the bed, my bare feet slapping against the warm floorboards. The hallway to the bathroom was short, but it always felt longer in the dim light filtering through the frosted window at the end. I did my business, and as I went to brush my teeth, pulling the comb from my pocket (I had taken to carrying it, a nervous habit), I placed it on the edge of the sink. But my hand was sweaty, and it slipped, clattering into the ceramic basin.

I reached to pick it up, but it rose. The comb, a simple black plastic thing with a few broken teeth, lifted vertically, as if suspended from an invisible string. It hovered about a foot above the sink, rotating slowly, catching the light in a way that made the scratches on its surface glint like tiny eyes. I watched, frozen, my breath caught in my throat. It hovered for what felt like an eternity, though I know it was only five seconds. Then it lowered itself gently back into its place on the sink’s edge, as if it had been placed there by an unseen hand.

My heart hammered against my ribs. I looked around the tiny bathroom, but there was no one, nothing. The air was still. I grabbed the comb, half-expecting it to be cold, but it was warm, warmer than it should have been. I shoved it in my pocket and stumbled back to my room, convinced I had imagined it. But the memory was too vivid, the sensation of my hand closing on empty air where the comb had been too real.

That evening, with the sun sinking and the shadows stretching across my room, I tried to lose myself in my toys, a collection of model soldiers and a plastic castle I had built over the years. I was reenacting a siege, muttering battle cries, when a chill ran down my spine, deep and icy, as if a window had been thrown open in the dead of winter. The air around me seemed to drop ten degrees. My breath misted in front of my face.

I stopped, my hand hovering over a small cannon. The soldiers, arranged in their meticulous rows, began to shiver. Not from an external force, but from within, their tiny plastic limbs trembling as if they were alive. One by one, they toppled over, not in a cascade, but in a deliberate, staggered fashion, as if an invisible hand was picking them off. The last one, a mounted knight, swayed on its horse for a moment before crashing to the floor.

The chill deepened, and I heard a whisper, not from my ears but from inside my head. It was a woman’s voice, soft and broken, saying, ‘Why do you fight?’ I spun around, but the room was empty. The door was closed, the window shut. But on my desk, the comb I had pocketed was lying there, though I didn’t remember placing it. It was moving, sliding across the wood in small, jerky movements, as if trying to write something. I watched, hypnotized, as it traced a single word in the dust: ‘HELP.’

I grabbed the comb, threw it in the trash, and ran out of the apartment. I didn’t stop until I reached the street, gasping for air under the flickering streetlamp. I never told my mother, and I moved out as soon as I could. But sometimes, late at night, I feel a chill in my room, and I find my personal items have shifted, just slightly, in the night. And I know, wherever I go, the comb is not done with me.

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