The Last Doorbell

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"It was a gray October afternoon in 2003, and I was fifteen, walking home from school in the quiet suburb of Maplewood. The streets were lined with identical houses, their lawns turning brown, and the only sound was the crunch of dead leaves under my feet. I had grabbed a burger from the local diner, […]"

It was a gray October afternoon in 2003, and I was fifteen, walking home from school in the quiet suburb of Maplewood. The streets were lined with identical houses, their lawns turning brown, and the only sound was the crunch of dead leaves under my feet. I had grabbed a burger from the local diner, not McDonald’s, because our town didn’t have one, and I was looking forward to watching a new TV show about people who investigate haunted houses. The show was called ‘Spectral Seekers,’ and I’d been obsessed with the paranormal since I was in third grade, ever since my grandmother died and I’d started wondering if there was life after the grave.

As I unlocked our front door, I noticed the house felt unusually still. My parents were both at work, and our neighbors, the Hensons, were on vacation in Florida. I kicked off my shoes, dropped my backpack, and settled onto the couch with my burger, flipping through channels until I found the show. The hosts were in some old asylum, waving EMF meters around, and I was engrossed, munching on fries.

Then I heard it: footsteps upstairs. Slow, heavy, deliberate. They moved from the hallway into my parents’ bedroom. My heart skipped a beat. I knew no one else was home, and our house had never creaked like that before. I muted the TV and listened. The footsteps stopped. I called out, ‘Hello?’ No answer. I crept to the bottom of the stairs and peered up. The hallway was dim, but nothing moved. I called again, ‘Mom? Dad?’ Still nothing.

I decided it was just the house settling, or maybe my imagination, so I went back to the couch and turned up the volume. But then I heard a sound that made me freeze: the front door lock clicked, as if someone had just unlocked it. I looked at the door, but it was still closed. My pulse pounded in my ears. I got up, my legs shaky, and went to the door. I opened it, expecting to see someone, but the porch was empty. The street was deserted. I closed the door and locked it, then turned the deadbolt for good measure.

I went back to the living room, but I couldn’t focus on the show anymore. I felt a presence, like eyes on me. I decided to go to my room, hoping to shake it off. I walked down the hallway, past the staircase, and as I passed the coat closet, I saw something out of the corner of my eye: a dark shape sliding out from the wall. It was a hand, but not human. It was long, with gnarled fingers and sharp claws, like something from a nightmare. It reached out as if to grab me, and I let out a yelp, jumping back.

I ran up the stairs to my room, my heart racing. I slammed the door and locked it, pressing my back against the wood. I could hear the footsteps again, this time coming up the stairs. They stopped outside my door. I held my breath. A shadow passed under the doorjamb, blocking the light. Then, slowly, the doorknob began to turn. I grabbed my baseball bat from the corner, ready to swing. But then the shadow receded, and the footsteps walked away.

I stayed in my room, shaking, for what felt like hours. I didn’t know what to do. My parents wouldn’t be home for another three hours. I called my dad, but he didn’t answer, probably driving. I called my mom, but she was in a meeting. I was alone.

As the afternoon wore on, I heard more noises: the sound of a door slamming, then the water turning on in the bathroom. I crept out of my room, bat in hand, and made my way to the bathroom. The door was slightly open, and I could hear the faucet running. I pushed the door open, and the water was running, but no one was there. I turned it off, and as I did, I saw a reflection in the mirror: a tall, gaunt figure with hollow eyes staring back at me. I spun around, but the room was empty.

That’s when I noticed the condensation on the mirror had formed words: ‘GET OUT.’ I dropped the bat and ran out of the house, not stopping until I reached the corner store. I called my parents from there, and they came home early.

When they arrived, the house was quiet. They found me at the store, and I told them everything, but they thought I was just being dramatic. The next day, we moved out. I never found out what that thing was, but ten years later, I got a call from the new owners. They said the house had a presence, and they found old letters in the walls, including a deed from the 1800s showing that the house had been built on the site of a forgotten grave. And on the back of the deed, scrawled in a child’s handwriting, was the message, ‘They come from the walls.’

I never went back. But sometimes, even now, I catch a shadow moving out of the corner of my eye, and I remember that hand reaching for me, and I know that whatever it was, it’s still waiting.

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