Six months ago, my friends Lena, Marcus, and I took a trip to the coastal city of Valshira, a place renowned for its ancient temples and vibrant festivals. We had a guidebook titled ‘Echoes of the East’ and spent our days visiting pagodas and museums, marveling at the intricate carvings and faded murals.
One afternoon, after a heavy lunch of spiced noodles, Marcus pointed at a faded map in our guidebook. ‘There’s an old gambling house, the Gilded Serpent, built over a hundred years ago. It’s said to be haunted,’ he said with a grin. Lena and I exchanged glances, but the thrill of adventure won, and we set off.
The Gilded Serpent stood on a narrow street, overshadowed by modern hotels and neon signs. Its facade was peeling, and the golden serpent emblem above the entrance had long lost its luster. Yet, as we stepped inside, the air was thick with the scent of incense and old wood. The lobby was surprisingly busy—tourists posed for photos, and a few elderly locals sat in dark corners, playing cards.
We wandered through the ground floor, admiring the chandeliers and mahogany pillars. Then, Marcus noticed a narrow staircase leading downward, roped off with a velvet cord. ‘Restricted,’ he said, but his eyes sparkled with curiosity. We waited until no one was looking, then slipped under the rope and descended.
The basement was unlike anything above. The walls were lined with shelves of dusty ledgers and strange artifacts—jade statues, bronze bells, and rows of paper lanterns with faded characters. A single bulb flickered, casting dancing shadows. In the center stood a large wooden table with a thick, leather-bound book open on it. Its pages were yellowed and filled with cramped handwriting, names, and dates.
‘This must be an old record of patrons,’ Lena whispered, flipping through the pages. I noticed some entries were crossed out, and next to them were symbols like a sun with an eye inside. Marcus leaned in, his fingers tracing a name—’S. R.’—written in red ink. He joked, ‘Maybe it’s a ledger of the dead.’ We laughed nervously, but then the lanterns on the shelves began to sway, as if a breeze had passed through.
We froze. The door at the top of the stairs slammed shut, and the bulb went out. A cold, hollow voice echoed from the walls: ‘The keepers see all. You have disturbed the registry.’ We fumbled for our flashlights, but the beams only revealed dust motes. The voice continued, ‘You must be recorded.’
Panic set in. We rushed to the stairs, but they seemed to stretch endlessly, and the steps grew slick with a dark, viscous liquid. Behind us, shadows coalesced into a tall figure with an elongated neck, its head adorned with a lantern that glowed with a sickly green light. It held a quill and gestured toward the ledger.
Marcus, in a moment of desperation, grabbed a nearby brass incense burner and hurled it at the figure. It passed through and shattered against the wall, but the figure recoiled, and a gust of wind extinguished the lantern. The darkness swallowed us. We scrambled up the stairs, and after what felt like an eternity, burst into the lobby, gasping.
The tourists and staff stared at us, and a security guard asked if we were alright. We nodded and quickly left, not looking back. Later that night, in our hotel, we compared notes. We each had a strange mark on our right wrist—a small, faded symbol of a sun with an eye, identical to those in the ledger.
Over the following weeks, we tried to rub it off, but it remained. And then, the dreams started. Each of us dreamt the same thing: a lantern-lit corridor, a massive ledger, and a voice saying, ‘Your name is written. Accept your fate.’
Last week, I received a package with no return address. Inside was a copy of an old newspaper from 1923. The headline read: ‘Three Tourists Vanish from the Gilded Serpent.’ The names were not ours, but the date… it was exactly one hundred years to the day before our visit. I dropped the paper, and as I did, I noticed the mark on my wrist was darker, and a new line had appeared under my name in a cramped handwriting: ‘In the keeper’s ledger, all debts are paid.’
Now, as I sit in my apartment, the walls seem to close in, and I hear a soft scratching, like a quill on paper. I know the lantern’s glow will appear at my doorstep soon. My name is already written. The keeper always collects.