The Keeper of Tombs

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"It was a cold October evening when my friend Mara and I pulled up to the old Weston Asylum, a sprawling, decaying complex on the outskirts of a dying town in upstate New York. The asylum had been closed for decades, but local legend said the spirits of the patients who had been mistreated there […]"

It was a cold October evening when my friend Mara and I pulled up to the old Weston Asylum, a sprawling, decaying complex on the outskirts of a dying town in upstate New York. The asylum had been closed for decades, but local legend said the spirits of the patients who had been mistreated there still wandered the halls. We had signed up for one of those overnight paranormal investigations, the kind where you get a brief tour, some basic equipment, and then are left to your own devices in the dark.

As we stood outside, listening to the guide explain the rules, I felt an unmistakable weight pressing on me from the building. It wasn’t just the cold air; it was a presence, a focused attention that seemed to zero in on me. I glanced up at the third floor, where a single, grimy window seemed darker than the rest, as if something was blocking the faint moonlight behind it. ‘Are you feeling that too?’ I whispered to Mara. She nodded, her breath visible in the chill.

The guide handed us EMF detectors and digital voice recorders, then led us inside. The air was thick with dust and the smell of decay. Our footsteps echoed on the worn linoleum as we passed the old reception desk, its wood cracked and peeling. We were instructed to explore but to avoid the basement and the third floor, which were considered unsafe. Of course, that’s where we knew we’d be drawn.

We started in the main hall, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was being watched from above. Every time I looked up, a shadow seemed to dart behind the railing. ‘Let’s go to the third floor,’ I said, ignoring the guide’s warning. ‘I think something wants us there.’

We climbed the creaking stairs, each step groaning as if the wood itself was in pain. At the top, the corridor stretched before us, lined with doors that had been painted over many times, their handles rusted. The air grew colder, and our breath fogged up as we moved. I felt a tug on my sleeve, but when I turned, Mara was behind me, her eyes wide. ‘Did you feel that?’ she asked. I nodded.

We stopped at a door that had a strange symbol scratched into it, a spiral with a line through it. The EMF detector in my hand spiked to red, the needle quivering. I pushed the door open, revealing an old patient’s room. The bed frame was bare, with rusty springs exposed. On the wall, someone had scrawled ‘Tombs’ over and over in a dark, greasy substance.

Suddenly, I felt a presence behind me, so close that I could feel a cold, stale breath on my neck. I spun around, but there was nothing. Yet the feeling of being watched was now overwhelming. I heard a faint whisper, like a woman’s voice, from the corner. ‘He sees you. The Keeper does.’ I turned to Mara, who was pale as the moonlight streaming through the window. ‘Did you hear that?’ I asked. She shook her head, but her eyes were fixed on the corner.

Then the door slammed shut. We rushed to it, but the handle wouldn’t budge. We were trapped. Panic began to rise in me as I banged on the door, but the sound was muffled, as if the room had swallowed us. Mara started to cry. ‘Why did we come here?’ she sobbed.

I pulled out my recorder and pressed play, hoping to catch any evidence. But when I played it back, all I heard was a low, rhythmic scraping, like something being dragged across the floor. It grew louder and louder until it seemed to come from inside the walls. I dropped the recorder, and it shattered on the floor.

Then the writing on the wall began to change. The word ‘Tombs’ started to glow faintly, a sickly green. The room grew darker, as if the light was being absorbed. I clutched Mara’s hand. ‘We need to get out,’ she whispered. I looked around for anything to pry the door open, but then I noticed a small, hidden panel in the wall, barely visible behind a loose piece of wallpaper.

I pried it open with my fingers, revealing a narrow passage. It was pitch black, but I could feel a cold draft coming from it. Without a second thought, I crawled in, urging Mara to follow. The passage was tight, and I had to squeeze through, my heart pounding. As we moved, I began to hear a sound from behind us, a slow, dragging footstep, and a low, guttural breathing. Whatever it was, it was following.

I crawled faster, scraping my elbows on the rough walls. The passage turned and then ended at a grate overlooking the main hall below. I could see the other investigators moving like ants under the dim light. I glanced back at Mara, tears cutting tracks through the dust on her cheeks. ‘We have to jump,’ I said. She nodded.

I kicked the grate loose and dropped down, hitting the floor with a jolt that sent pain up my legs. Mara landed beside me, but as I helped her up, I saw something in the corner of my eye. The symbol from the room was painted on the wall right next to me, but it was fresh, still wet. And then I heard a voice, clear as day, in my ear: ‘The Keeper knows you now.’

We didn’t wait for anything else; we ran out of the asylum, not stopping until we reached the car. That night, I couldn’t sleep. Every time I closed my eyes, I saw the symbol, and I felt that cold breath on my neck again. The next morning, I received a text message from Mara, but it was just a single character: a spiral with a line through it. I tried to call her, but it went straight to voicemail.

I never saw Mara again. The police found her car abandoned on the side of the road, her phone lying on the seat with the same symbol scratched on the screen. I moved away, but sometimes, when I pass a window, I see a dark shape standing in the reflection, watching me. And at night, I hear a faint, rhythmic scraping from my closet, as if something is waiting for me to open the door.

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