The Ironwood Hollow

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"I’m writing this because I need to get it out, and you’re the only one who might understand without thinking I’ve lost my mind. Things have been… off, ever since we moved to Ironwood Hollow. I know I’ve been quiet, and I’m sorry. My laptop was packed away for weeks, and then the Wi-Fi has […]"

I’m writing this because I need to get it out, and you’re the only one who might understand without thinking I’ve lost my mind. Things have been… off, ever since we moved to Ironwood Hollow. I know I’ve been quiet, and I’m sorry. My laptop was packed away for weeks, and then the Wi-Fi has been spotty, which should’ve been the first sign.

It started about two weeks ago, on a Tuesday. I was home alone; my husband, Mark, was on a late shift, and the kids were at their friends’ houses. The house was too quiet, the kind of quiet that presses on your ears. I decided to lie down in our bedroom for a bit, just to rest my eyes. I must have drifted off, because the next thing I knew, I was paralyzed, stuck in that state between sleep and waking. I’ve had sleep paralysis before, off and on since my teen years, but this was different. I could move my eyes, and I could feel the sheets against my skin, but I couldn’t lift a finger. And there was a weight on my chest, not like a cat or a person, but like the whole house was pressing down on me.

Usually, in my paralysis episodes, I see or sense a black dog in the yard, just standing in the road, watching. It’s been a fixture of my sleep paralysis for years, no matter where we lived. But this time, there was no dog. Instead, I heard a sound I can’t properly describe—a wet, rhythmic thumping, like something large and soft being beaten against a wall. It was coming from the hallway, just outside our door. I tried to call out for help, but my throat was closed, and all I could manage was a faint whimper.

The thumping stopped, and I heard a voice, low and gravelly, as if it were speaking from deep inside a well. It said, ‘You’re not supposed to be here.’ Then the weight lifted, and I could move again. I sat bolt upright, gasping, and the room was empty. The hallway was dark, but I could see the nightlight casting a faint glow. I checked the time on my phone: 3:07 AM. I didn’t go back to sleep.

The next morning, I told Mark about it, but he just chalked it up to stress from the move. I tried to let it go, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong. The house itself felt off, like it was watching me. I started noticing things: the floorboards creaking in places where no one was walking, the smell of damp earth in rooms that were dry, and the way the corners of my vision seemed to flicker with motion that vanished when I looked directly at it.

Then, about a week ago, my middle daughter, Lily, who’s thirteen, started acting strange. She’s at that age where she’s questioning everything, but this was different. She began refusing to enter the basement, saying it ‘smelled like rot and iron.’ She also started talking about a man in a long coat who stood at the edge of the woods behind our house, just watching. At first, I thought she was being dramatic, but her fear was real. She’d have nightmares and wake up screaming, saying that something was pressing on her chest, and she couldn’t move.

I didn’t know what to do. My own episodes started happening more frequently, always at the same time: 3:07 AM. I’d wake up paralyzed, and I’d hear that voice again, sometimes whispering, sometimes shouting, but always the same phrase: ‘You’re not supposed to be here.’ One night, I managed to turn my head just enough to see the doorway, and there was a figure standing there—tall, thin, with arms that hung too low, almost touching its knees. It had no face, just a smooth, grey void where features should be. It spoke again, and this time, I could see its mouth moving, if you could call it that: a dark slit that opened and closed like a fish.

I finally snapped out of it and woke Mark up. He was furious about being disturbed, but I begged him to check the house. He grumbled and did a sweep, but found nothing. He said I was letting the move get to me, that I should see a doctor. But I knew it wasn’t just in my head. The house was old, built in the 1800s, and the real estate agent had been oddly eager to sell it. She’d mentioned something about ‘a history’ but had waved it off.

Last night, the kids were at a sleepover, and Mark was on night shift again. I was determined not to fall asleep, but exhaustion took over. I was in the living room, curled up on the couch, when I felt the familiar paralysis creep over me. I couldn’t move, but this time, I was fully conscious. The clock on the wall read 3:07. The air grew cold, and I heard the thumping sound again, louder this time, coming from the basement stairs. Then the voice spoke, close to my ear, as if it were right behind me: ‘You brought her here. She cannot stay.’

I realized it was talking about Lily. I managed to whisper, ‘Who are you?’ The pressure on my chest increased, and I felt something like fingers pressing into my shoulders. The voice said, ‘I am the keeper of this place. You are all guests, but the girl—she has the sight. She sees me, and she must not speak of it. You must leave, or she will be taken.’

Then I was free. I gasped and sat up, drenched in sweat. The house was silent, but I could feel a presence, like being watched. I called Mark and begged him to come home. He did, but he was annoyed. I told him we need to move, that something is wrong with this house. He said we’d talk about it in the morning.

But this morning, Lily woke up with scratches on her arms, three parallel lines on each, as if she’d been clawed. She said she didn’t remember anything. I’m terrified. I don’t know what to do. We can’t afford to break the lease, but I can’t let this thing near my daughter. I’m writing this in the dark, with every light on, while the house creaks around me. And I just heard the thumping start again from the basement. I’m not sure if I’ll be able to leave. I’m not sure if it’ll let us.

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