The Hollow’s Grunt

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"In the autumn of my seventh year, we drove three hours to visit my aunt and her family in the dusty outskirts of Bakersfield. Their apartment complex squatted beside a vast, overgrown cemetery, and a weather-beaten elementary school crouched behind the chain-link fence. The playground was a rusted maze of metal and chipped paint, and […]"

In the autumn of my seventh year, we drove three hours to visit my aunt and her family in the dusty outskirts of Bakersfield. Their apartment complex squatted beside a vast, overgrown cemetery, and a weather-beaten elementary school crouched behind the chain-link fence. The playground was a rusted maze of metal and chipped paint, and the air smelled of dry weeds and old rain. My cousin Mira, who was my age, led me there while my older brother, Derrick, dribbled a basketball on the cracked court nearby.

I was halfway up the jungle gym, the iron bars cold through my thin jacket, when Mira stopped mid-step. Her face went blank, and she muttered, ‘I forgot something,’ and then she ran. She didn’t look back. I called after her, but she vanished around the corner of the apartment building. I sat on the top platform, my legs dangling, watching Derrick toss the ball at a bent rim. The slide beside me was still, and the wind carried a low hum from the cemetery.

Then the grunt came. It was not loud, but it was close—so close I felt the vibration in my chest. Two voices, one on each side, like they were standing right beside my ears. The sound was a low, guttural exhale, not human, not animal. I turned my head left, then right, but no one was there. The air got thicker, and my heart hammered so hard I thought I would black out. I wanted to call for Derrick, but my throat seized. The grunt came again, this time in unison, and I felt a cold breath on my neck.

I finally screamed, a raw, piercing cry that echoed off the empty schoolhouse. Derrick dropped the ball and ran to me, his sneakers pounding the asphalt. By the time he reached the jungle gym, the presence was gone, but I couldn’t stop shaking. I told him what I heard, and he laughed, saying it was just the wind or my imagination. But as we walked back, I saw Mira watching from the apartment window, her face pale and her eyes wide. She didn’t speak to me the rest of the visit.

That night, I lay in the unfamiliar bed, listening to the hum of the city and the distant bark of dogs. Just before sleep, I heard it again: two grunts, one on each side, right outside my window. I pulled the covers over my head and didn’t emerge until morning. From that day, I understood that some places are not just haunted—they are hollow, and they hunger for a voice to answer them.

Now, twenty-five years later, I still hear that grunt when the house is quiet. And last night, I woke to find my own daughter standing at the foot of the bed, her head tilted, and she whispered, ‘Daddy, someone is grunting in my ear.’ I knew then that the hollow had followed me, and it had found a new voice to call.

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