I’ve seen things most folks would call impossible. As a student of the old ways, I keep the veil thin—not that I could shut it if I tried. Living in the pine barrens of northern Michigan, the woods themselves hum with old magic. But this house, this hollow ridge of a place, held something I’d never met before. I cleansed it with sweetgrass and cedar, sang the old songs, and filled every room with smoke so thick you couldn’t see the walls. It didn’t care. Music didn’t soothe it either.
My fiancé Grant and I moved into the old farmhouse a month ago. The realtor warned us the previous tenants were a rowdy bunch, left in a hurry. She said to change the locks because the man had given keys to friends who might come sniffing around. From the look of the place—needle caps in the corners, a mattress with strange stains, a scorch mark on the kitchen floor—it had been a trap house. The first week, we replaced the locks, scrubbed every surface, and tried to make it ours. But the house felt wrong, like a watchful predator holding its breath.
It started with small things. Doors would creak open on their own, a cupboard would bang shut at 3 a.m., and we’d find our shoes arranged in a line in the hallway—something we never did. Grant laughed it off as old house settling. But I knew better. The air was thick with something, a weight that pressed on my chest. I’d see faint outlines of a hulking figure in my peripheral vision, but it would vanish when I turned. One night, I woke to find Grant standing at the foot of the bed, staring at the closet door, mumbling, They’re still here, they’re still here. I shook him, and he blinked, confused, saying he didn’t remember getting out of bed.
Then the whispers started. Not in any language I knew—a dry, scraping sound, like leaves skittering across gravel. It seemed to come from the walls, especially in the bedroom. I tried smudging again, this time with copal and a protective charm, but the whispers only grew louder. I could almost make out words, like a name being repeated. One evening, I found a phrase scratched into the baseboard near the closet: The hollow man waits. I hadn’t written it. Grant was just as puzzled and frightened.
We decided to learn more about the house. A neighbor, old Mr. Hetrick, told us the place had a dark history. Before the drug den, a man named Elias had lived there with his wife. He was a recluse, a trapper, and he kept to himself. One winter, his wife disappeared. The police searched, but found nothing. A few years later, Elias was found dead in the woods, a hole in his chest where his heart should have been. They ruled it a bear attack, but some folks whispered he’d made a deal with something in the hollow ridge. There was a legend of a ‘hollow man,’ a spirit that must consume the warmth of the living to stave off the cold.
That night, determined to end it, I performed a banishing ritual with salt and iron. I drew protective circles around the doors and windows, but the entity seemed to mock me. The salt would be scattered each morning, and the iron would be found tarnished and cold. And then, the dreams began. I dreamt of a hollow man—a figure with a gaping void where his chest should be, filled with swirling white fire. He would stand by the bed, watching, and whisper, I need warmth. I need the fire within. Grant started sleepwalking more frequently, and once I found him in the barn, holding a hunting knife, his eyes glassy, walking toward the shed where we kept the animals.
I tried to exorcise the house, but it was like wrestling smoke. The entity seemed to feed on my fear and Grant’s vulnerability. Finally, a local elder in the Wiccan community heard of our plight. She gave me a special charm—a small pouch of graveyard dust, rowan wood, and a piece of flint, and told me to place it in the darkest corner of the house and pray to the old god of the crossroads. I did that. For two days, silence. I thought it was over. But on the third night, I woke to the sound of scraping, and a smell like ozone and decay. I found Grant in the kitchen, standing over a saucepan of water, his hands shaking, whispering, I can’t hold him, he’s eating me from the inside. I pulled him away, and he collapsed, sobbing.
I knew then I had to confront it directly. The next day, I took a crowbar and pried up the floorboards in the closet where the message was. Deep beneath them, I found a child’s skeleton, brittle as twigs, with a heart-shaped hole in the ribs. Beside it lay a moldy, handwritten page of a sermon. The words were barely legible, but I made out: And the hollow man shall take the warmth of the children to fill his cold chest. I realized in horror the entity had been attached to this house long before Elias—it was a curse, older, bound to the land. The bones were of a child from a century ago, and the hollow man had been feeding on the life force of anyone who stayed too long.
I performed a final rite, using the bones as a catalyst to break the curse. I chanted over the skeleton, demanding the spirit to return to the earth, to let the dead rest. The house shook, windows rattled, and a wind erupted from the closet, howling. Then silence. I felt a release, a lightness. But as I gathered the bones, Grant began to convulse. His eyes rolled back, and he spoke in a deep, guttural voice: You think you can banish me? I am the land. I am the hollow. You will leave, or you will become me. I sprinkled the bones with salt and buried them under the threshold, praying to the spirits of the ancestors. The voice faded.
Grant was taken to the hospital, but the doctors found nothing. Over the next weeks, he recovered, but he was never the same. He would sometimes stare at walls for hours, or shiver even in the heat. And I knew the hollow man had left a mark on him, a crack in his soul. We moved out a month later, leaving the house to the wind and the pines. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I still hear that scraping, and a voice that whispers, I need warmth. I need the fire within. And I wonder if it followed us, or if it waits for the next family to call that hollow ridge home.