The Hollow of Bed 14

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"The motel stood at the edge of a dying town, its neon sign sputtering the name ‘The Pines’ in burnt-out letters. My partner, Lena, and I had booked the last available room for Christmas week, a decision that felt less like a holiday and more like a sentence. The room, number 14, was on the […]"

The motel stood at the edge of a dying town, its neon sign sputtering the name ‘The Pines’ in burnt-out letters. My partner, Lena, and I had booked the last available room for Christmas week, a decision that felt less like a holiday and more like a sentence. The room, number 14, was on the ground floor, right beside the ice machine and a door that clanged shut with a sound like a gunshot. Inside, the layout was an afterthought: a queen bed tucked against the left wall, a bathroom door that stuck, and a radiator that coughed out lukewarm air.

On the morning of Christmas Eve, at 3:47 AM, I woke with my heart slamming against my ribs. No dream, no noise, just a primal terror that made my skin crawl. I lay frozen, my eyes fixed on the crack of light under the bathroom door. The radiator hissed, and then I heard it: footsteps. Not from the hallway, but from the narrow gap between the foot of the bed and the dresser, circling toward the bathroom. They were deliberate, heavy, as if someone were pacing, waiting. I reached for Lena, but my hand met only cold sheets. She was still asleep, her breathing steady, oblivious.

I listened, counting each footstep. They stopped at the foot of the bed. Then a sound like a sniff, wet and close. I didn’t dare move. The footsteps resumed, moving up the right side of the bed, toward the bathroom. Then silence returned, so thick I could taste it. I didn’t sleep again, and when the first gray light crept through the curtains, I told Lena I had a nightmare. She smiled, tossed a pillow at me, and said, ‘You’re too old for ghosts.’

But the following night, I was awake again at the same hour, the terror a second skin. This time, Lena was awake too, gripping my arm. ‘Something’s here,’ she whispered. We both heard it: the same footsteps, circling the bed, pausing at the bathroom. Then the bathroom door creaked open a few inches, emitting a shaft of yellow light. We threw on clothes and fled to the lobby, but the night clerk, an old man with watery eyes, just stared at us. When we told him about room 14, he blinked slowly. ‘No one’s stayed there since last year,’ he said. ‘The guest, Mr. Hibbs, he died in his sleep. They found him at the foot of the bed, standing, like he was waiting for something.’

We demanded a new room, but the motel was full. So we spent the next night in our car, shivering, watching the window of room 14. At 3:47 AM, the bathroom light flickered on, and through the gap in the curtains, we saw a silhouette—a tall, thin figure standing at the foot of the bed, facing the door, as if it were looking directly at us. It raised a hand and made a slow, beckoning motion.

On Christmas morning, we packed our bags and left without checking out. I never looked back, but ever since, I’ve had a recurring dream: I’m in room 14, and I’m the one pacing, waiting, unable to leave the foot of the bed. And the worst part is, I’m not alone. Something else is in the room, something that wants me to turn around. I always wake up before I do, but last night, I felt its breath on my neck, and I heard my own voice whisper, ‘The hollow is patient.’

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