The Hollow Night

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"It was the last October before the mill shut down for good, and the whole town of Ashford had turned out for the Harvest Burn. My family’s farm, the old Whitmore place, sat at the end of a dirt road that forked into two lesser paths, one leading to the abandoned quarry and the other […]"

It was the last October before the mill shut down for good, and the whole town of Ashford had turned out for the Harvest Burn. My family’s farm, the old Whitmore place, sat at the end of a dirt road that forked into two lesser paths, one leading to the abandoned quarry and the other to the Parson’s Pond. The burn was our tradition, a way to give thanks for the season and ward off the long winter. But my grandfather had added something else to the tradition, something he never explained, only said it was ‘to keep the balance’—an offering at the fork, a small cloth bundle of tobacco and apples left at the base of the old oak that grew right in the V of the road.

That year, I was twenty, and the duty fell to me. It was around 11:30, the fire burning low, the bottle of cider passed around twice. I took the lantern, not the flashlight (granddad insisted on a lantern), and walked the quarter mile down the rutted lane. The air was sharp with the smell of turning leaves and woodsmoke. The oak stood like a sentinel, its leaves a sickly yellow in the lantern light. I knelt, placed the bundle at the base, and whispered the words granddad had taught me, words that felt like they should be in a language I didn’t know.

As I straightened, I heard hooves. Not on the dirt road, but on something harder—like stone. Two horses, at a trot, moving at a good clip. The sound came from the direction of the quarry path, which ended in sheer cliffs and went nowhere, so it was bizarre. I swung the lantern toward the sound, but the beam didn’t penetrate far. The hooves grew louder, the rhythm unhurried, steady. Then I heard another sound, a high-pitched squeak, like unoiled wagon wheels. That made no sense—no one used wagons anymore, and the quarry had been sealed off for a decade.

I stepped off the road, into the tall grass, my heart thudding. The hooves and squeaking were almost on top of me, but I saw nothing. The noise seemed to swirl around the fork, passing through the spot where I had just stood. I felt a cold draft, even though the night was still. The sound moved past me, and I caught a whisper, not words, but the rustling of many leaves at once, and the smell of turned earth and something metallic, like old blood. Then it faded, as if it had gone down the path to the pond.

I stood frozen, my breath fogging the cold air. I wanted to believe it was a couple of kids with a noise prank, but the quarry path was a dead end, and no one could have passed without me seeing them. I hurried back to the fire, my legs shaking, and I told granddad. He didn’t say anything for a long moment, staring into the flames. Then he said, ‘That was no horse. That was a blessing, and a warning.’ He wouldn’t say more, but the rest of the night, the fire seemed to cast no warmth, and the faces of my cousins looked pale and hollow.

The next morning, I walked down to the fork in daylight. The offering was gone, but there were no hoof prints in the dirt, not even a pressed leaf. The grass where I had stood was bent, but not trampled. I checked the quarry path—it ended in a barbed wire fence and a crumbling cliff edge. No horse could have gotten through. I went to the pond, and the water was still, but on the bank was a single black feather, larger than any bird I knew.

That winter, the mill shut down sooner than expected, and a blizzard blanketed the town for two weeks, the worst in a century. My grandfather died in his sleep the night the snow finally stopped. In his room, I found a journal with a drawing of the fork and a single sentence: ‘The hollow ones ride at the change of the year. They take the offering or a life, whichever comes first.’ The feather I had kept was gone from my pocket, but on my windowsill was a stone, worn smooth, with a shape like a hoof print carved into it.

I’ve never spoken of it again, but every year on Halloween, I walk to the fork and leave a bundle of tobacco and apples, and I listen. Sometimes I think I hear the squeaking, far off. But I never look back.

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