The Hollow Man of Kettle Falls

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"On the first Tuesday of October, just before dawn, the fog rolled off the river and wrapped itself around Kettle Falls like a wet shroud. I had been living in that town for three years, working the night shift at the grain silo, and I thought I knew every creak and groan of the old […]"

On the first Tuesday of October, just before dawn, the fog rolled off the river and wrapped itself around Kettle Falls like a wet shroud. I had been living in that town for three years, working the night shift at the grain silo, and I thought I knew every creak and groan of the old place. That morning, I woke with a start, my heart hammering against my ribs, and a name burning in my throat: Malachi. I didn’t know where it came from, but I knew it was the name of the thing that had been chasing me through a dream that felt more real than the sweat-soaked sheets beneath me.

In the dream, I was standing in a field of dead sunflowers, their heads bowed and black. The sky was the color of a bruise, and a wind that smelled of rust and cold iron rattled the stalks. And there he was: Malachi. He was over eight feet tall, with skin the color of old concrete and a face that seemed to have been sculpted by a blind hand—no nose, just two pits, and a mouth that stretched too wide. He wore no shirt, and his chest was a map of scars, as if he had been stitched together from pieces of other things. He held a long rod of black iron, its end twisted into a hook, and he dragged it through the dirt as he walked, leaving a furrow behind him.

I tried to run, but my feet were glued to the earth. I threw a punch at his midsection, but my fist passed through him as if he were smoke, and he laughed—a wet, gurgling sound that made my skin crawl. He raised the rod, and I knew he was going to hook my throat, and there was nothing I could do. But just as the hook descended, I woke up.

I tried to shake off the dream, but something was wrong. The air in my small apartment felt thick, and the shadows in the corners seemed to have a weight to them. My clock read 7:58, and I had to be at the silo by 8:30, but my body wouldn’t move. It was as if a hand was pressing down on my chest, and the harder I tried to rise, the heavier it became. Then I heard it: a scraping sound, like iron being dragged across concrete, coming from the hallway outside my door.

The scraping grew louder, and then it stopped right outside my bedroom. I held my breath, waiting. The door, which I always kept locked, began to bulge inward, the wood groaning as if something massive was pressing against it. I saw the metal hook slide through the gap between the door and the frame, and it began to pry the door open, splintering the wood. I tried to scream, but my voice was a thin, reedy thing. Then, just as the door shattered, I heard a whisper in my ear, soft and female, like a mother’s lullaby: ‘Not yet, Leah. Not yet.’

And with that, the pressure on my chest vanished, and I lurched out of bed, gasping. The door was intact, the hallway empty, and the only sound was the hum of the refrigerator. I told myself it was a panic attack, a bad dream bleeding into reality. But I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was waiting, and that the woman’s voice had saved me.

That day at work, I couldn’t focus. I kept glancing at the grain silo’s metal roof, expecting to see a massive silhouette against the gray sky. My coworker, a grizzled old man named Earl, noticed my trembling hands and said, ‘You look like you’ve seen a ghost.’ I almost told him everything, but I didn’t. I just shook my head and grabbed a shovel.

That night, I didn’t sleep. I sat by the window, watching the street, and I saw a man standing under the flickering streetlamp at the end of the block. He was tall, impossibly tall, and he wore no shirt despite the cold. His head was smooth and pale, and he was just standing there, looking up at my window. I know it was Malachi. I didn’t need to see his face to know it was him.

I called my sister, Anna, who lived in the next town. I didn’t tell her about the dream or the man; I just said I was having a rough time and needed to talk. She said she’d come over the next day. That’s when I remembered the woman’s voice, and a fragment of a dream I’d had as a child: a woman in a white dress, standing in a field of sunflowers, her face kind but her eyes burning like coals. She had told me, ‘One day, the Hollow Man will come for you, and you must not fight him alone. You must make a circle of salt and a fire of ash, and you must speak my name: Seraphine.’

I didn’t know if any of it was real, but I was desperate. So the next night, I drew a circle of salt on my floor and placed a small bowl of ash in the center. I lit a match and set the ash ablaze, and I spoke the name: ‘Seraphine.’ The flames flickered and grew, and for a moment, I saw her face in the smoke—beautiful and terrible, with eyes that held the sky. She said, ‘He will come at the hour of your birth, Leah. You were born at midnight, and so he will come at night. He is the hunger of the earth, the rage of the forgotten. To defeat him, you must face him in the mirror of your own soul.’ Before I could ask what that meant, the smoke dissipated, and the circle of salt was scattered, as if by a wind.

The clock read 11:58. My heart seized. I ran to the bathroom, the only mirror in the apartment, and I stared at my reflection. My own face looked back at me, pale and terrified. But then the mirror rippled, like water, and Malachi stepped out of it. He filled the small room, his head brushing the ceiling, and he smiled with too many teeth. ‘Little Leah,’ he said, his voice like grinding stones. ‘Your angel cannot save you here.’

I should have run, but I was frozen. He reached out with his hook, and I saw my reflection in its black surface—and I saw something else: a woman in white, standing behind me in the reflection, but not in the room. She was there, in the mirror, and she was shaking her head. ‘Not yet,’ she said. ‘You must face him with what you love most.’

Love? The only thing I loved was my grandmother’s locket, which I wore around my neck. It had her photo inside. I clutched it, and as Malachi’s hook came down, I held up the locket. The moment the hook touched it, there was a flash of white light, and I heard Malachi scream. He recoiled, and his form began to crumble, like dried clay. ‘It burns!’ he shrieked. ‘It burns!’ And he sank back into the mirror, which cracked from corner to corner, and then shattered.

When the chaos settled, I was on the floor, covered in glass, but unharmed. The locket was hot in my hand, and I opened it. The photo of my grandmother was now blank, and on the back, in a familiar handwriting, was a single word: ‘Seraphine.’ I realized then that my grandmother had known—she had always told me stories of a guardian angel, but I thought they were just fairy tales. She had given me the locket on her deathbed, saying, ‘This will protect you, but only if you believe.’

The next day, Anna arrived, and I told her everything. She didn’t laugh. She said, ‘I had a dream last night, too. A woman told me you were in danger, and that I needed to bring you this.’ She handed me a small wooden box, and inside was a feather, pure white, and glowing faintly. ‘Seraphine,’ I whispered. And the feather burst into a soft flame, leaving a fine ash behind. I sprinkled the ash around my apartment, and I felt a sense of peace, as if a watchful presence had settled over the place.

Now, I still get dreams of Malachi sometimes, but he’s always distant, as if he’s watching from the edge of a cornfield. And sometimes I see a tall, pale figure at the edge of town, but he never approaches. I keep the locket and the ash jar by my bedside, and I’ve started wearing white, in honor of Seraphine. I don’t know if she’s an angel or just a figment of my fractured mind, but she’s real to me. And as long as I believe in her, I think I can face the hollow things that lurk in the dark.

But I know he’s still out there, waiting. And one day, he might find another way to reach me. Until then, I sleep with the light on, and I keep my grandmother’s photo close—because sometimes, the only weapon you need is a reminder of who you’re fighting for.

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