Last October, I decided to take a breather from the city and visit my cousin’s cabin on the edge of the Ponderosa Pines. The air was crisp with the scent of pine and decay, and I thought a long walk would clear my head. I found a trail that snaked up a steep, rocky outcrop called Dead Man’s Drop, a local nickname for a cliff that overlooked a dried-up riverbed. I climbed to the top, about fifty feet up, to get a better view of the autumn colors. I was fiddling with my pocketknife, trying to pry a splinter from my palm, when something slammed into my back, hard enough to knock the wind out of me. I spun around, but there was nothing—just the wind and the rustling leaves. My shoulder ached for days, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that I wasn’t alone up there.
A week later, I was walking with my cousin’s son, a lanky teenager named Eli. We took the same trail, and as we rounded a bend, we spotted a man standing motionless on the path ahead. He wore tattered coveralls, stained dark with something that could have been oil or blood, and his boots were caked with mud. His face was obscured by a wide-brimmed hat. Eli called out to him, but the man didn’t respond. We quickened our pace, but when we reached the spot, he was gone. The path was straight and open—there was nowhere to hide. Eli swore he saw the man flicker, like a bad signal on a TV, before dissolving.
The next day, I returned with my friend Maya. We hiked to the base of Dead Man’s Drop, and there he was again, standing near the cliff’s edge, staring down at the dried mud below. Maya grabbed my arm, and we crept closer, but as we approached, he turned his head slightly—and vanished. Not a step behind a tree, just gone. I felt a cold spot in the air where he had been, and the hair on my arms stood up.
About three weeks later, I borrowed my cousin’s four-wheeler to run an errand down a logging road. The forest was quiet, and I was humming to myself when I saw him up ahead, blocking the path. I slammed on the brakes, the ATV skidding to a halt. He was closer than ever before, and I could see the details now: the frayed cuffs, the missing buttons, and the pale, angular jaw beneath the hat. He stared at me—I felt it—then he turned and evaporated, leaving a swirl of dust. I didn’t breathe until I was back at the cabin.
The encounters became more frequent. One afternoon, I was back on Dead Man’s Drop, scouting for a good spot to take photos. I spotted him near a gnarled oak at the edge of the cliff, and this time he wasn’t alone. A large black dog, lean and silent, sat at his heels. I shouted to my cousin who was below, pointing, but when I looked back, they were both gone. A split second later, I felt a hand press against my spine—cold, firm, and unmistakably there. I yelped and stumbled, nearly falling off the cliff. When I turned, nothing. The pressure lingered on my skin like a phantom touch.
That night, I couldn’t sleep. I kept thinking about the stories the locals whispered—about a miner who had disappeared in these woods over a century ago, after a cave-in at the old silver mine. They said his body was never found, and that he was still searching for his brother, who had died in the collapse. They called him the Hollow Man because, in the one grainy photograph that survived, his eyes seemed empty, like spaces scooped out of a pumpkin. I had dismissed it as folklore, but now I wasn’t so sure.
A few days later, I decided to confront the presence. I went to Dead Man’s Drop at dusk, hoping to see him one last time and demand he leave me be. The sun bled orange through the pines, and I stood where I was first hit. I waited. I felt a chill, and then I saw him, emerging from behind the oak tree, the black dog at his side. This time, he walked toward me, his steps leaving no prints in the soft soil. I held my ground, my heart hammering. When he was ten feet away, he stopped. He raised a hand—not to harm, I think, but to reach out. And then the dog tipped its head back and let out a sound that was not a bark, but a whispering of my name, over and over, echoing in my skull.
I woke up on the ground, the stars wheeling overhead. My back ached, and when I felt it, my shirt was cold and wet. I stumbled back to the cabin, and I haven’t gone near the woods since. But sometimes, when I close my eyes, I see the Hollow Man standing at the edge of the cliff, and I feel that phantom touch on my back, reminding me that some things are better left buried in the Ponderosa Pines.