The Hollow Hayloft

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"Last autumn, my cousin Mara and I decided to track down the old Kellerman place, nestled in the fading farmlands of eastern Saskatchewan. The Kellerman farm was notorious in our county, not for a poltergeist, but for a different kind of haunting — a ‘hollow’ that seemed to swallow sound and light. The story went […]"

Last autumn, my cousin Mara and I decided to track down the old Kellerman place, nestled in the fading farmlands of eastern Saskatchewan. The Kellerman farm was notorious in our county, not for a poltergeist, but for a different kind of haunting — a ‘hollow’ that seemed to swallow sound and light. The story went that in 1947, the Kellerman family vanished without a trace, leaving behind a barn with a hayloft that never creaked, never swayed, and always felt colder than the rest of the world. Local legend said that if you stood in that loft at midnight and listened carefully, you’d hear the faint, rhythmic scrape of a shovel, digging deep into packed earth — a sound that had no source.

Mara and I had grown up with this tale, and like every other teenager in the region, we’d dared each other to visit. Finding the place was a rite of passage. We drove down a gravel road that seemed to get narrower and darker with each mile, the ditches filled with dried thistles and rusted farm equipment. The GPS gave out, but we followed the rumors: past the lone grain elevator, turn at the dead oak with the tire swing, then down a driveway choked with weeds. Finally, we saw it — a two-story farmhouse with peeling white paint, its windows dark and blank, and behind it, a massive red barn, its roof sagging in the middle like a tired spine.

We parked at the edge of the property, the engine ticking as it cooled. The air was thick with the smell of dust and something faintly metallic, like old blood. Mara, ever the skeptic, laughed nervously. ‘Ready to hear the ghost shovel?’ I shrugged, but my heart hammered. We made our way to the barn, the doors yawning open, held by warped hinges. Inside, it was dim, but our flashlights cut through the gloom, revealing old hay bales stacked in rows, a rusty tractor, and in the far corner, a wooden ladder leading up to the hayloft. The loft was a dark rectangle, like a mouth waiting to swallow.

We climbed, the ladder groaning under our weight, and hoisted ourselves onto the loft floor. The hay was decades old, brittle and dusty, and the air was chillier than it had been below. I checked my phone — it was 11:58 PM. Mara walked to the center of the loft and stood, her arms crossed. ‘Okay, I’m here. Where’s the shovel?’ I laughed, but the sound seemed to die in the air, absorbed by the stillness. Then I heard it — a faint scrape, like metal on stone, coming from beneath the floorboards. I froze, but Mara rolled her eyes. ‘It’s just the wind, or a rat.’ But the scrape was rhythmic, steady, as if someone was digging with a purpose.

We both fell silent, listening. The scraping grew louder, more deliberate, and then I noticed that the hay around my feet was beginning to shift, as if something was moving underneath. Mara looked down, her face white in the beam of my flashlight. ‘That’s not wind,’ she whispered. A fine dust rose from the cracks between the planks, and the loft began to feel like it was closing in on us. The ladder we’d climbed up was suddenly gone. In its place was a gaping hole in the floor, perfectly round, like a well shaft carved into the barn’s heart. A cold draft rose from it, carrying the scent of moist earth and decay.

I grabbed Mara’s arm, pulling her back. ‘We need to get out of here.’ But every step we took seemed to draw us closer to that hole. It was as if the floor was tilting, ever so slightly, funneling us toward the center. I could see something at the edge of the hole — a shovel, old and rusted, standing upright as if waiting. And then, a voice, from deep below, a muffled, hollow voice that seemed to come from the earth itself: ‘Don’t leave. We’re almost done.’

Mara screamed, and suddenly the walls of the barn were no longer wood, but packed dirt, and the ceiling was gone, replaced by a starless black sky. We were in a pit, a circular grave lined with roots and earth, and in the center stood a figure — gaunt, with skin like cracked mud, swinging a shovel. It didn’t look at us, but I knew it was the remnant of old man Kellerman, who had dug his own family’s grave and then vanished, condemned to dig forever in the hollow.

I pulled Mara with all my strength, and we scrambled up the dirt walls, clawing our way out. We burst into the cool night air, coughing and shaking, and ran to the car without looking back. As we raced down the gravel road, the headlights caught the barn in the rearview mirror — and I swear I saw the silhouette of a man standing in the open loft door, watching us go.

We never spoke of that night to anyone. There are no stories to tell, because the ones you can tell aren’t real. The Kellerman farm is still there, and the barn still stands, but now we know the truth: the hollow isn’t a haunt — it’s a door, and some doors should never be opened. The scrape of that shovel still lingers in my ears every time I’m in silence, and I know, deep down, that old man Kellerman is still digging, waiting for someone to come back and finish the job.

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