The Hollow Cot

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"In the humid stillness of Dammam, where the Gulf’s salt breath clung to every wall, I had lived for nineteen years without a single shiver of the unnatural. Our villa, a low-slung block of beige concrete, had been home since I was seven. It was a place of routine: the call to prayer from the […]"

In the humid stillness of Dammam, where the Gulf’s salt breath clung to every wall, I had lived for nineteen years without a single shiver of the unnatural. Our villa, a low-slung block of beige concrete, had been home since I was seven. It was a place of routine: the call to prayer from the nearby mosque, the scent of cardamom coffee, the hum of air conditioners fighting the relentless sun. Nothing strange had ever breached those walls—until last month, when my parents finally gave me the room at the end of the hallway, a space that had been used for storage for as long as I could remember.

It was a plain room, bare as a bone, with a single window that looked out onto the neighbor’s empty yard. The walls were a dull white, scuffed from years of stacked boxes. My father, a practical man, bought a metal cot—the kind you’d find in a hospital or army barracks, with a thin mattress and a frame that sang with every shift. I was grateful for it, for my own space, a teenage luxury in a house of five. But the first night I lay on that cot, I felt a wrongness, a subtle resonance, as if the springs were tuned to a frequency just below hearing.

At first, it was only the dreams. Each night, I’d sink into a restless sleep, and there I’d find myself in a vast, empty desert, the dunes stretching to a black horizon. The sky was a bruised purple, and the stars were wrong—they pulsed and shifted like eyes. In the dream, I was always walking, my feet sinking into the sand, my lungs burning. Behind me, I’d hear a creaking, rhythmic, like a swinging gate. And then I’d wake, drenched in sweat, my heart hammering, the metal cot shuddering beneath me as if it had just settled.

My younger sister, Maya, who shared the wall, complained of the same. She’d wake in the middle of the night, her room filled with a low, groaning sound that seemed to come from the pipes, but when she pressed her ear to the wall, it was as if something on my side was breathing. We tried to ignore it, but the days grew worse. I study at a desk placed opposite the cot, and every time I sat down to work, the cot would creak—a long, drawn-out sound, like a sigh of relief. I checked for drafts, for the window rattling, but the window was sealed, and the door was heavy. The creak came from the cot itself, and only when I was present.

One Thursday afternoon, when the house was empty and the heat outside made the air shimmer, I decided to end it. I closed all the windows in my room, drew the curtains, and locked the door. I sat at my desk, a notebook open, and waited. For minutes, nothing. Then, a single creak, sharp and clear, from the cot. It was as if someone had lain down on it, testing the springs. I stood, my heart in my throat, and approached the cot. The mattress was smooth, untouched. But as I stood over it, the frame groaned again, a low sound that seemed to come from within the metal itself. I placed my hand on the cold rail, and the cot went silent, but I felt a vibration, like a distant earthquake, running up my palm.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay on the cot, my eyes wide in the dark, and listened to the house settling. Around 2 a.m., the creaking began, soft at first, then louder, as if something was turning over. I felt a pressure on my chest, not painful but suffocating, as if a great weight was pressing down on my ribs. I tried to move, but my limbs were frozen. The dream came then, not as a vision, but as a memory: I was seven years old, playing in this very room when it was still storage. I had found an old, rusted metal crib, tucked behind boxes, and I had rocked it, imagining a baby. But the crib moved on its own, swinging back and forth, and I had run away, never telling anyone.

I woke with a gasp, the pressure gone. The cot was still, but I knew then that the metal was not merely a material—it was a vessel, a hollow body that had been waiting. The old crib had been taken away years ago, but perhaps its essence had remained, infusing the new cot with a hunger for motion, for the sound of a sleeper’s weight. My sister said that her room felt colder now, and that she saw the shadow of a person, small and twisted, under the door. I began to sleep on the floor, but the cot creaked louder, as if mocking my flight.

Now, I avoid my room during the day, but at night, the creaks have moved into the hallway. I hear them outside my door, pacing, like footsteps of a man with a limp. My father has told me I’m imagining it, but he doesn’t see the way the cot’s sheet is always rumpled in the morning, even though I haven’t slept in it. Maya says she heard a voice last night, a child’s voice, calling her name. I’m afraid to look under the cot, but I know something is there, something that was never meant to be new. The metal is cold, but when I touch it, I feel a heartbeat—slow, steady, and increasingly stronger.

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