The Hiss in the Pipes

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"Dinner at my sister’s place was a weekly ritual, a loud, chaotic affair that I usually welcomed. But that October evening, I was grateful for the noise, because it masked the sound that had been following me around the house all day. I’m not superstitious by nature, but there was something about the empty spaces […]"

Dinner at my sister’s place was a weekly ritual, a loud, chaotic affair that I usually welcomed. But that October evening, I was grateful for the noise, because it masked the sound that had been following me around the house all day. I’m not superstitious by nature, but there was something about the empty spaces in that old Victorian, the way the floorboards creaked under my weight, and the cold drafts that seemed to have no source, that made my skin prickle.

I was in the living room, trying to focus on the television, when a thirst hit me. My sister, her husband, and their two kids were in the kitchen, their voices a comfortable background hum. I padded down the hallway, the worn carpet muffling my steps. As I neared the kitchen’s archway, a whisper curled into my ear, deep and hoarse, like gravel being dragged over iron. It was so close, I felt a breath on my neck, though no one was there.

I chalked it up to the TV or a trick of the old house, but the whisper followed me as I entered the kitchen. It didn’t stop when I opened the fridge, nor when I filled a glass with water. It seemed to intensify, the words a low, rhythmic hiss, almost like a leak in the pipes, but with a cadence that felt too deliberate. I walked back and forth, pretending to be casual, but my heart was racing.

My sister, Ellen, was at the stove, stirring a pot. Her husband, Max, was telling the kids a story. I asked, ‘Do you hear that? A whispering sound?’ They all paused, listening. The room fell silent, the only sound the simmer of the sauce. Max shook his head. ‘I don’t hear anything.’ The whisper was still there, but now it felt like it was coming from inside my own skull. I decided to ignore it, but it followed me back to the living room.

That night, I couldn’t shake the feeling. I lay in my bed, staring at the ceiling, and the whisper was there, a constant, low murmur. It sounded like it was trying to say something, but I couldn’t make out the words. I thought about leaving, but it was late, and I didn’t want to seem rude. So I tried to sleep, but every time I closed my eyes, the voice grew louder, until it was a drone that seemed to vibrate through the walls.

I got up, determined to find the source. I checked the plumbing, the heating vents, even the attic door, but found nothing. The whisper was coming from everywhere and nowhere. As I stood in the hallway, I realized something: the whisper had a pattern. It repeated every few seconds, like a phrase I couldn’t quite catch. I focused, and behind the hiss, I thought I heard my own name, ‘Mara.’

A chill ran down my spine. I shook my head, trying to convince myself it was my imagination. But the next day, the whisper was still there, and I started to notice other things. The way my sister’s cat would hiss at the corner of the hallway, as if something was hiding there. The way the house would groan at odd hours, like something vast turning over in its sleep.

I began to research the house’s history, and I discovered that it was built in the late 1800s by a man named Edward Thorne, a railroad magnate who had died in a suspicious fire. The house had been vacant for decades afterward. I couldn’t shake the feeling that the whisper was his voice, seeking revenge or trying to communicate something.

One night, as I was about to leave, I heard the whisper more clearly than ever. It said, ‘Mara, don’t go.’ I froze, my hand on the doorknob. The voice was desperate, pleading. I turned around, and the hallway was empty, but I felt a presence, a cold pressure against my back. I ran out, not stopping until I was in my car.

I never went back to that house. But sometimes, in the quiet of my own apartment, I hear that hiss in the pipes, and I know it’s not just the plumbing. It’s the voice of a man who isn’t ready to let go of the living, and he’s found a new home in me.

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