The Grip of the Deep

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"The house on Mulberry Lane had always felt like a compromise. Not quite a home, but a place we could afford after the city drove us out. The pipes groaned like an old man’s bones, and the basement smelled of damp earth and rust, but the rent was low, and the landlord never asked questions. […]"

The house on Mulberry Lane had always felt like a compromise. Not quite a home, but a place we could afford after the city drove us out. The pipes groaned like an old man’s bones, and the basement smelled of damp earth and rust, but the rent was low, and the landlord never asked questions. I’d grown used to the creaks and the drafts, the way the floorboards settled at night like something was shifting its weight. But I hadn’t gotten used to the bathroom.

It was small, with a claw-foot tub that had been painted over at least three times, and a shower curtain that clung to you like a wet shroud. The window above the toilet was frosted, but it let in a sickly green light from the overgrown laurel tree outside. I tried not to spend more time in there than necessary, but hygiene demanded it. So one Thursday evening, I stepped in, let the water run hot, and reached for the soap I’d just bought that afternoon. I had placed it on the little wire rack beside the shampoo, a fresh bar of oatmeal and honey, still in its wrapper.

I lathered my face, my chest, my arms, and then I reached up for the soap again. It wasn’t where I’d left it. It was on the floor of the tub, wedged between the drain and the back wall. I picked it up, and my fingers closed over cold, wet grooves. The bar was misshapen, not smooth from a few seconds of use, but compressed into a twisted lump. On its surface, distinct as a fossil, was the impression of a hand. Not a child’s hand, not a woman’s hand, but a hand with thick, splayed fingers and a palm that had driven deep into the soap as if it had been squeezed in a single, violent motion. I dropped it. The water was still running, but I felt a chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. I yelled for my husband, but he was in the garage, working on some project.

When he finally came up, I was standing there, wrapped in a towel, shivering. I held out the soap, my hand shaking. He took it, turned it over, and frowned. ‘That’s weird,’ he said, but he didn’t laugh. He pressed his own hand against the impression. His fingers were long, but they barely covered the mark. The print was bigger than his, and the fingers were longer. He turned it over, feeling the smooth back, and then he looked at me. ‘It’s probably just a manufacturing defect,’ he said, but his voice was flat. He tossed it in the trash can by the sink. I think we both wanted to believe that. We went to bed without saying much, and I left the bathroom light on.

I tried to forget about it. I told myself it was a strange coincidence, a trick of the light. But two nights later, I was in the shower with the radio blasting some old rock station. The music was loud enough to vibrate the tiles, and I was singing along, off-key, trying to drown out the lingering unease. The phone buzzed on the counter, and I stuck a wet arm out, grabbed it, and pulled it back inside the curtain to check the message. The screen was blurry with condensation, but I read it: ‘You almost done?’ from my sister. I was about to text back when the water suddenly went ice cold. I gasped and fumbled with the knobs, but the cold didn’t last. It turned scalding hot in a second, and I dropped the phone, which landed in the puddle at my feet with a splash.

I cursed and knelt to pick it up, my fingers scrambling in the soapy water. And that’s when I saw it. In the corner of the tub, behind the drain, was a small, dark shape. I reached for it, thinking it was a hair clump or a piece of wrapper, but it was smooth and solid. It was a bone. A small finger bone, maybe. I screamed and scrambled out of the tub, slipping and nearly hitting my head on the tile. My husband came running in, and I pointed, unable to speak. He looked at the tub, saw the bone, and for a moment, he didn’t move. Then he carefully picked it up with a washcloth and held it up to the light. It was yellowed, polished, like it had been in the water a long time. ‘There’s a finger bone,’ he said, his voice shaky. ‘In our bathtub.’

We called a plumber the next day. He came with a camera and snaked it down the drain. He found the skeleton of a hand, wedged in the pipe just below the tub. Not a human hand, he said, but the hand of something like a primate, but with fingers too long and a thumb that was almost vestigial. The bones were old, maybe decades, and they were crushed, as if they’d been squeezed with incredible force. He pulled out fragments and laid them on a towel. He had no explanation. He said he’d never seen anything like it. He charged us extra for the trauma.

I stopped using that bathroom. I started showering with a bucket and a ladle in the kitchen sink, using the sprayer to wet my hair while leaning over the counter. My husband said it was irrational, but he also started using the gym’s showers at work. Our marriage grew tense, filled with silences and quick, shallow conversations about anything but the bathroom. The house felt heavier, like it was leaning in, listening.

Then, one night, I woke to a sound. It was a faint, rhythmic thumping, coming from the wall behind the bed. I lay still, my heart pounding, and the thumping grew louder, more deliberate. It was a sound like knuckles tapping on wood, but not random. It was a pattern. Three taps. A pause. A soft scraping. I reached for my husband, but he was already awake, his eyes wide in the dark. ‘It’s coming from the bathroom,’ he whispered. We didn’t move. The taps continued for a few minutes, then stopped.

We moved out a week later. We broke the lease and paid a penalty. We left most of our furniture. We didn’t want to carry anything out of that house, especially the memories. We rented a new place on the other side of town, a sunny apartment with modern plumbing and no history. But I still can’t shake the feeling that something followed us. Last night, I was unpacking a box in the bedroom, and I found a bar of soap, the same oatmeal and honey brand, that had somehow been packed. It was in the box, unwrapped, and it was dented. Not a full handprint, but a small, distinct depression in the center, like a thumb pressing down. I dropped it and backed away. My husband saw it and paled. He took it, wrapped it in a garbage bag, and threw it in the dumpster outside. But I know it won’t be the last. I have a feeling that wherever we go, the soap will find us, and whatever was in that tub will never let go.

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