The Grate in the Floor

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"When I was twelve, my mother bought a sprawling Victorian house in the town of Coldwater Hollow. It had a wraparound porch, a turret, and enough rooms for our blended family to get lost in. It was perfect, except for the occasional flicker of lights or a door that would creak open on its own. […]"

When I was twelve, my mother bought a sprawling Victorian house in the town of Coldwater Hollow. It had a wraparound porch, a turret, and enough rooms for our blended family to get lost in. It was perfect, except for the occasional flicker of lights or a door that would creak open on its own. We chalked it up to old house quirks.

A few years passed, and the house began to show its age. My stepfather, Greg, decided to renovate the bathroom adjacent to my room. One afternoon, he started tearing up the old linoleum and pulled up the floorboards, revealing a metal grate in the subfloor. He grumbled about the plumbing and left to get supplies, telling me to keep an eye on things before he drove off.

The house fell silent. I lay on my bed, half-dozing in the afternoon heat. A thud came from the bathroom. I sat up. Another thud, followed by a scraping sound, like something being dragged across the floor. I assumed Greg had returned and was already working. I padded to the bathroom door and pushed it open.

No one. The room was empty, the grate still exposed, tools scattered. I shrugged, thinking I must be hearing things. Back in my room, I lay down again. This time I heard heavy, rhythmic clomping, like boots on the wooden floor. But the bathroom had a concrete subfloor. I crept back and peered in, but still no one. A cold draft seeped from the grate, and I felt an unexplainable urge to look down.

I knelt and grasped the cold metal, lifting it with a squeal. Below was a dark crawlspace, barely a foot deep. Dust swirled in the weak light. And then I heard breathing. Not mine. It echoed up from the pit, slow and deliberate. I slammed the grate shut and ran to the window, hoping to see Greg’s truck. Nothing.

That night, I told my mother and Greg about the sounds. Greg laughed it off, saying the wind and the old pipes played tricks. But he frowned when he mentioned that he’d left the grate up to air out the crawlspace. We agreed to ignore it.

The next day, I was alone again. I sat in my room, reading, when a metallic clatter came from the bathroom. I found the grate flipped open, resting against the wall. Strange, I thought. I didn’t do that. I looked down into the pit. Two eyes blinked back at me, milky and unblinking. I scrambled away, my heart hammering.

This time, I didn’t tell anyone. I started sleeping with the light on. But the eyes followed me. I’d see them in the bathroom mirror, in the shadows of my closet. I began to hear my name whispered from the drain, from the air vents. It grew worse.

One night, I woke to a weight on my chest. Greasy hair brushed my face. A voice, brittle like dead leaves, hissed, ‘You let it out.’ I couldn’t scream. When the morning light crept in, there was nothing there. But on the floor beside my bed, there was a trail of wet dirt leading to the bathroom.

The grate was wide open. I was too afraid to close it. Greg came in, frowning at the mess. ‘We need to seal this up,’ he said. ‘I’ll get some cement tomorrow.’

But that night, I heard the clomping again. Only it wasn’t in the bathroom. It was in the hallway, coming closer to my door. The doorknob rattled. Then a pounding, rhythmic, like a fist. Then silence. I dared to open the door a crack. The grate lay in the hallway, glowing faintly like the embers of a fire. And from the gaping hole, a long, pale arm reached out, fingers grasping at the air.

I slammed the door and pushed my dresser against it. I heard scraping, a dragging sound, and then a thud as something heavy fell into the crawlspace. The next morning, the grate was back in place, but there was a fresh, deep scratch on the floor beside it.

Greg never got the cement. He said the house was settling and that we were just imagining things. But I knew better. I’ve since moved out, but I still dream of that house, of that bathroom, of the grate. And in my dreams, I hear the clomping boots, the rattling of the metal, and a voice from below that whispers, ‘You let it out. Now let me in.’ I wake up screaming every time. Some things you can’t escape, especially when they’re waiting under the floorboards, right outside your door.

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