The Gardener’s Promise

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"At thirteen, I’d already learned that houses with cheap rent come with secrets. Ours was a crooked Victorian wedged between a swamp and a cemetery so old the headstones leaned like drunkards. Mom said it was a steal. I said it was a steal because nobody wanted to live next to a bone orchard. But […]"

At thirteen, I’d already learned that houses with cheap rent come with secrets. Ours was a crooked Victorian wedged between a swamp and a cemetery so old the headstones leaned like drunkards. Mom said it was a steal. I said it was a steal because nobody wanted to live next to a bone orchard. But we had no choice after Dad left and the landlord of our old apartment gave us the boot.

My room faced the graves, and I’d gotten used to the view of mossy angels and chipped crosses. The first few weeks were quiet, almost peaceful. But in October, the air turned damp and heavy, and I started feeling like someone was watching me from the cemetery, even with the blinds shut. I’d lie in bed, staring at the ceiling, telling myself it was nothing. Then the scratching started.

It was a soft, rhythmic scrape against the windowpane, like a fingernail dragging across glass. I’d freeze, my heart hammering, and after a minute it would stop. I never had the guts to pull back the curtain. I just buried my head under the pillow and waited for daylight.

One night, the scratching was louder, more insistent, and I heard a voice, low and raspy, like gravel being stirred. ‘Let me in,’ it said. ‘I’ve been patient.’ I squeezed my eyes shut, my breath shallow. ‘It’s just the wind,’ I whispered. ‘Just the wind.’ But the voice came again, closer, right next to my ear. ‘You promised.’

I didn’t know what it meant, but the next morning I noticed a handprint on my window, but it was on the inside. The grime was smeared, like someone had pressed their palm against the glass from my room. I tried to wipe it off, but it wouldn’t budge. It was like the print was etched into the glass itself.

Over the next week, things changed. My reflection in the mirror seemed a second slow, like it was imitating me just a beat late. Shadows in the hallway stretched longer than they should. And every night, the voice grew clearer. ‘Remember the promise,’ it said. ‘You were just a child, but you knew.’

I started having dreams. I was six, playing in the yard of our old house, when a gardener with a dirt-caked face and hollow eyes knelt beside me. He had a metal box in his hands, rusted and dented. ‘You must keep this for me,’ he said. ‘Hide it where the dead sleep. When you’re thirteen, you must return it. That’s the deal.’ I remembered taking the box, its weight surprising, and burying it in the back corner of the cemetery, right beneath a cracked angel.

I woke up in a cold sweat. The dream was too vivid to be a lie. I knew what I had to do, but I was terrified. The gardener wasn’t a man; he was something that wore a man’s skin. And I had made a pact with it as a stupid kid.

That night, I grabbed a flashlight and snuck out, my heart pounding. The cemetery was dead silent, the air thick with the smell of wet earth and rot. I found the angel, its face worn smooth, its wings broken. I knelt and started digging with my hands, the dirt cold and clumping under my nails. After a few minutes, my fingers hit metal.

I pulled out the Rusted Box, just like in the dream. It was heavier than I remembered, and it hummed faintly, like a trapped fly. As I held it, the voice spoke from behind me, so close I could feel its breath on my neck. ‘Open it,’ it said. ‘You owe me.’

I turned, and there he was, the gardener, but worse. His skin was like cracked leather, and his eyes were black pits that seemed to swallow the moonlight. ‘Open it,’ he repeated, ‘and I’ll grant your family peace.’ I didn’t believe him for a second, but I was frozen, my hands shaking.

I opened the box. Inside was a tarnished locket and a piece of paper. The locket was cold, and when I opened it, I saw a photo of a woman who looked like my mother, but with the same hollow eyes as the gardener. The paper had a message in my own handwriting, but I didn’t remember writing it. It said, ‘I promise to stay with you forever.’

Suddenly, I understood. The gardener wasn’t a stranger. He was something that had attached itself to my family, and my childhood self had made a bargain to keep it away from my mother. But I had broken the deal by hiding the box instead of opening it on my thirteenth birthday.

‘You’re too late,’ the gardener snarled, his voice cracking like ice. ‘You broke the promise.’ He reached for me, and I stumbled backward, dropping the box. The locket fell to the ground, and the woman in the photo began to move, her eyes tracking me.

I ran. I didn’t look back. I slammed the back door of the house and locked it, pressing my back against the wood, gasping. For a long moment, there was silence. Then the scratching started again, but this time it was on the roof, and I could hear the gardener’s voice, barely a whisper: ‘I’ll wait. I’m good at waiting.’

Now, I never leave the house after dark. I keep every light on, and I never, ever look out the window. But last night, I saw a new handprint on the glass, pressed from outside, right where I would sit to read. And my reflection winked at me. I know he’s coming back for me. And I’m terrified I’ll keep my promise.

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