The Frilled Figure in the Parlor

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"The wind moaned through the bare branches of the elm trees lining our street, and the snow fell in a relentless, silent curtain. Inside our modest farmhouse, the only sounds were the crackle of the wood stove and the occasional click of plastic bricks as my eight-year-old son, Lucas, built a castle on the braided […]"

The wind moaned through the bare branches of the elm trees lining our street, and the snow fell in a relentless, silent curtain. Inside our modest farmhouse, the only sounds were the crackle of the wood stove and the occasional click of plastic bricks as my eight-year-old son, Lucas, built a castle on the braided rug. I was nestled in my worn armchair, a book of maritime history open on my lap, the warmth lulling me into a shallow doze.

Outside, the storm had been building all day, and the weatherman had warned of a whiteout. My wife, Clara, was a nurse at the county hospital, and her shift rarely ended on time when the roads were bad. My daughter, Emma, had been invited to a sleepover at a friend’s farm a few miles down the road, and I’d dropped her off earlier, her small face pressed against the frosty window, waving as I drove away. So it was just Lucas and me, the house creaking and settling around us like an old ship in a storm.

At around quarter past eight, I heard it: the crunch of tires on the gravel driveway, followed by the familiar rattle of Clara’s old pickup. The porch light flickered on, casting a jaundiced glow through the frosted windowpanes. Lucas’s head snapped up, a grin spreading across his face. He loved Clara’s game—the one where she’d come in, stamping off snow and jangling her keys, pretending to be a monster searching for him. He dropped his lego figure and scrambled to his feet, his socks slipping on the hardwood as he dashed toward the small coat closet by the front door.

I smiled and put my book down, expecting the usual routine. But as Lucas rounded the corner into the parlor, I caught a glimpse of something else—a flash of white, like a frilled petticoat, darting after him. I blinked, and it was gone. I told myself it was just a trick of the light, the snow reflecting off the window, but a cold knot tightened in my stomach. I rose from my chair, my heart thumping a nervous rhythm against my ribs.

‘Lucas?’ I called out, my voice sounding thin and reedy. There was no answer. The parlor was dark, the only light coming from the hallway. I stepped forward, my boots heavy on the floorboards. As I reached the doorway, I saw Lucas standing in the middle of the room, frozen, staring at the far corner. His face was pale, his eyes wide.

‘Dad,’ he whispered, ‘there’s a girl in a white dress.’

I followed his gaze, and my blood ran cold. There, in the corner, stood a figure—a young girl in an old-fashioned white dress, the kind with lace and puff sleeves, her dark hair hanging in limp ringlets. She was translucent, like a faded photograph, and she was staring at Lucas with hollow, black eyes. I opened my mouth to scream, but no sound came out. The girl lifted a pale, slender arm and pointed a finger directly at Lucas, then at the floor, as if commanding him to join her.

‘Who are you?’ I managed to choke out. The girl tilted her head, a sickening crack accompanying the motion, and then she vanished, leaving only a faint scent of mothballs and decay.

Lucas broke into sobs, and I rushed to him, scooping him into my arms. His little body was trembling, and he clutched my shirt. ‘She was here, Dad. She wanted me to play.’

I carried him to the kitchen, away from the parlor, and tried to calm him with hot chocolate and soothing words. But in the back of my mind, I couldn’t shake the image of that girl, and I knew she wasn’t done with us. The rest of the evening passed in a blur. Clara came home an hour later, covered in snow, and she found us huddled in the kitchen, Lucas refusing to let go of my hand. She listened to my story with a skeptical frown, but when she saw the terror in Lucas’s eyes, she didn’t press. She just insisted that we all sleep in the living room, with the lights on.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay on the couch, listening to the house settle, my eyes fixed on the doorway to the parlor. And then I heard it: a faint, childish giggle, drifting from that room. Then the sound of small feet pattering across the floor. I rose, my heart hammering, and crept toward the parlor. The door was ajar, and through the crack, I saw the girl again, now standing in the center of the room, her back to me. She was wearing the same white dress, and she was slowly rotating, like a music box ballerina, until she faced me. Her mouth opened in a silent scream, and her black eyes seemed to suck the light from the room.

I stumbled back, and the door slammed shut with a deafening bang, rattling the old glass. Clara woke with a jolt, and Lucas started crying. I didn’t sleep for the rest of the night, and the next morning, I called a local historian. She told me that the house was built on the site of an old orphanage that had burned down in the 1920s, and several children had perished in the fire. The girl in the white dress, she said, matched the description of a child named Eleanor, who was never found.

We moved out a month later, and we never spoke of the incident again. But sometimes, when I’m alone and the house is quiet, I still hear that giggle, and I see that frilled figure in the corner of my mind, waiting for me to come and play.

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