The Floor Above

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"My family had flown to San Felipe for my grandfather’s funeral, but I’d stayed behind. My mother had insisted, saying, ‘He’s gone, and losing your job won’t bring him back.’ So I stayed, with the house creaking around me like an old ship. The first night alone was uneventful. I sat in the living room, […]"

My family had flown to San Felipe for my grandfather’s funeral, but I’d stayed behind. My mother had insisted, saying, ‘He’s gone, and losing your job won’t bring him back.’ So I stayed, with the house creaking around me like an old ship.

The first night alone was uneventful. I sat in the living room, scrolling through my phone, while my dog, Biscuit, dozed on the rug. I heard a few pops from the radiator, and once, a thump from the attic, but I shrugged it off as the house settling. Biscuit didn’t even lift his head.

The second night, though, was different. I’d put on an old horror movie, something about a flesh-eating creature, and was half-watching, half-dozing on the couch. Around 9 p.m., Biscuit’s ears perked up. He stared at the ceiling, then let out a low growl. ‘What is it, boy?’ I asked, but he just kept staring.

I tried to ignore it, but then I heard it: footsteps. Slow, deliberate, coming from the room directly above the living room, which was my parents’ bedroom. I knew it was impossible—they were hundreds of miles away. But I heard them clearly, the creak of floorboards under weight. I told myself it was the wind, or the house contracting. Yet the steps were rhythmic, like someone pacing.

I turned up the TV volume, trying to drown it out. But then I felt it: a presence behind me. Not a sound, but a weight in the air, as if someone were standing just out of sight, watching. Biscuit whined and hid under the coffee table, his tail between his legs.

I wanted to look, but I was frozen. My heart pounded in my ears. I strained to listen, and then I heard it: a slow, deliberate breath, right behind the couch. It was deep, too deep for a human, like something was savoring the air.

I finally forced myself to turn. There was nothing there. But the room felt colder, and the shadows in the corner seemed thicker. Biscuit started to howl, a long, quivering sound. I scrambled to turn on all the lights, but the darkness outside the windows pressed in.

The footsteps started again, this time coming down the stairs. I backed into the kitchen, grabbing a knife from the block. I waited, heart in my throat, as the steps grew closer. But they stopped just beyond the living room doorway.

Then, my phone buzzed. It was my mother. I answered, trembling. ‘Hi, honey,’ she said. ‘We’re at the wake. How are you doing?’

I whispered, ‘Mom, I think there’s something in the house.’

She laughed nervously. ‘Don’t be silly. It’s just the wind. Did you check the attic door? It might have blown open.’

But I had checked. Everything was locked.

As I hung up, I heard another sound. This time from the hallway, the one leading to the bedrooms. A floorboard creaked. Then another. And then, a soft, muffled voice, almost like a child’s, said, ‘Don’t worry. I’m just visiting.’

I dropped the knife and ran out the front door, not stopping until I reached my car. I drove to a motel and didn’t come back until morning.

When I finally returned, with the sun high and the house bright, I found everything exactly as I’d left it. But on the kitchen counter, there was a note, written in a shaky hand: ‘I missed you.’

I called my mother immediately, but she said she hadn’t written it. And when I asked if there was any way someone could have been in the house, she went silent for a long moment.

Then she said, ‘Your grandfather used to say the house was built on an old burial ground. We always thought it was just his stories.’

I never stayed another night alone in that house. And I still don’t know who—or what—was pacing the floor above me, taking those deep breaths, waiting for me to leave.

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