The Fire That Ate the Rain

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"The wet season had overstayed its welcome, turning the red dirt of the Northern Territory into a rust-colored mire. My partner Lena and I had been hauling a trailer-load of secondhand furniture from Darwin to Kununurra, a job that paid just enough to cover diesel and the occasional slab of beer. We pulled off the […]"

The wet season had overstayed its welcome, turning the red dirt of the Northern Territory into a rust-colored mire. My partner Lena and I had been hauling a trailer-load of secondhand furniture from Darwin to Kununurra, a job that paid just enough to cover diesel and the occasional slab of beer. We pulled off the main road at a free camp near a dry creek bed, the ground slick with recent rain, the air thick with the smell of eucalyptus and decay.

We managed to coax a fire out of a pile of half-rotten branches, using a bit of my old trick of stuffing dry grass and bark into the heart of the pile. The flames caught, spitting and hissing as they fought the damp. We cracked open two beers and watched the sky turn from grey to a bruised purple. That’s when we saw the headlights. A dusty four-wheel drive with New South Wales plates pulled up a hundred meters away. A figure peeled off from the vehicle and trudged toward us, a tall, lanky kid in a university hoodie, despite the humidity.

He introduced himself as Benji. He had an American accent, sharp and out of place. He explained, with a sheepish grin, that his friends from the city had no idea how to start a fire in the bush, and the wood they’d gathered was soaked. He looked at our small pyre with a mix of envy and curiosity. Lena laughed and offered him a beer. He hesitated but took it. Then he asked if he could bring his friends over. We said sure, always happy to share a fire.

Minutes later, three more figures emerged from the vehicle: two women and another man, all wearing designer outdoor gear that had never seen a real trail. They introduced themselves as Chloe, Marcus, and Dana. They were all graduate students from Sydney, on a ‘gap year’ adventure, and they were clearly out of their depth. They complimented our fire, asked how we got it going, and we told them about the dry grass and bark. They nodded, but I could see they didn’t really understand.

As the evening wore on, the fire grew stronger, a warm heart in the cool, damp night. We shared stories, mostly about road trips and bad jobs. Benji, in particular, seemed fascinated by the bush, asking endless questions about what animals lived out here, what plants were edible, whether the stories about ‘missing people’ were true. Lena and I exchanged a glance. It’s a common trope, but the way he asked, with a glint in his eye, made me feel a bit uneasy. I dismissed it as city-boy naivety.

The clouds, which had been threatening all day, finally burst. Fat drops of rain sizzled in the fire, and we scrambled to cover our gear. The students ran for their vehicle, shouting thank-yous and goodbyes. I tossed a tarp over the fire and we retreated to our truck. The rain hammered down for an hour, then stopped as abruptly as it had started, leaving a world that was dark, dripping, and eerily silent.

We woke to a cold, grey dawn. The fire was out, a black smear of ash in the mud. I went to kick at the embers, hoping for a spark, but there was nothing but cold, wet charcoal. As I turned to go back to the truck, I noticed something odd. Near the ashes, there was a small, bright object. I picked it up. It was a silver ring, engraved with a symbol I didn’t recognize: a spiral with a single eye at its center. I slipped it into my pocket, intending to leave it at a lost-and-found if we passed through a town.

We drove on toward Kununurra, the road a sliver of tar winding through endless scrub. Around noon, we passed a road train hauling cattle, and the driver flashed his lights at us, then pointed frantically at our trailer. I pulled over, and Lena got out to inspect. The trailer’s tires were fine, but the door was ajar. She opened it and went pale. Inside, among the furniture, was a bundle of wet, mud-soaked clothes, neatly folded and stacked, as if someone had left them there. There was a note on top, written in pencil on a scrap of cardboard. It read: ‘Thank you for the fire. We’ll return the favor soon.’ There was no signature.

The clothes were expensive, designer labels. They were soaked, but not from rain—they were stained with something dark that smeared when Lena touched it. She wiped her fingers on her jeans, and we both stared at the brownish-red streak. It dried quickly, leaving a rust-colored mark. We didn’t know what to make of it. We took the clothes to the police in Kununurra, but they just shrugged, said it could be anything, and filed a report. They took a sample for testing, but we never heard back.

That night, we camped at a rest stop west of town. We built a fire again, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that we were being watched. The silence felt heavy, like the air before a storm. We ate our tinned stew, and I kept touching the silver ring in my pocket. It had grown warm, almost hot, as if it were absorbing something. Lena noticed my distraction and asked what was wrong. I showed her the ring. She frowned, saying it looked like something from a cult movie. I had a sudden urge to throw it into the fire, but I stopped myself. It felt important, somehow.

We woke to find the fire had gone out again, despite the clear sky. But this time, the ashes were arranged in a pattern: a spiral with an eye. My blood ran cold. I looked at the ring, and it seemed to pulse, like a heartbeat. We packed up quickly, not mentioning it, both trying to convince ourselves it was coincidence. But as we drove away, I noticed a small, dark figure standing at the edge of the trees, watching us. It was too far to make out clearly, but it had a shape that felt wrong—too tall, too thin, with limbs that bent in ways they shouldn’t.

We didn’t stop for lunch. We drove straight through to Halls Creek, and found a motel with a vacancy. Lena was shaking, and I wasn’t much better. I locked the door, drew the curtains, and we sat on the bed, not speaking. I took out the ring, and it was cold to the touch again. But I could hear something now, a faint whispering from it, like a voice just beyond hearing. Lena put her head in her hands. ‘What is happening, Dom?’ she said. I didn’t have an answer.

That night, I woke to a sound outside our window. It was a soft, wet slapping sound, like bare feet on pavement. I peered through the curtain, but I couldn’t see anything. I heard it again, closer. Then a voice, clear as day, whispering through the window crack: ‘We found you.’ It sounded like a child, but with a strange, echoing quality. I grabbed the phone, but the line was dead. I looked at the ring, and it was glowing faintly, a sickly green light that seemed to seep into my skin.

I don’t remember much after that. I just remember a blinding headache, and Lena screaming, and the sound of glass breaking. I woke up on the floor, the ring gone, the window shattered. The room was freezing cold, and there was a puddle of black water in the corner. Lena was huddled in the bathroom, crying. She said something had tried to pull her through the window, a thing with long fingers and a face that was blank, like a mask. I believed her.

We fled. We drove through the night, determined to put as much distance between us and that place as possible. We didn’t stop until we reached Port Hedland, the sun rising over the ocean. We found a motel, and this time, we left the ring in a locked drawer, wrapped in a cloth. We didn’t touch it, didn’t speak of it. But we both knew it was just a matter of time.

Three weeks later, we were back in Kununurra, having finished the job. As we packed the trailer for the return trip, I found a cardboard box on the driver’s seat. Inside was a photograph: it was of Benji and his friends, standing in front of their vehicle, smiling. But their eyes were black, and there was a spiral tattoo on each of their foreheads. On the back, in shaky handwriting, it said: ‘We left the fire. It will always find you.’

We never went back to that campsite. We never spoke of the ring. But sometimes, late at night, when the wind is just right, I can hear the sound of a fire crackling, and a whisper in the dark: ‘We’re still burning.’ And I know, with a certainty that chills me to the bone, that they are not gone. They are just waiting, in the spaces between the trees, for the next fire to feed on. And I was the one who showed them how to start it.

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