The Fingerprint on the Glass

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"It was a rainy Tuesday evening when I found myself trapped in the sticky sweetness of my sister’s living room, watching a cartoon about a robot boy with my two nephews. The house smelled of old wood and lavender, and the rain drummed a steady rhythm against the windows. My sister, Lena, had gone out […]"

It was a rainy Tuesday evening when I found myself trapped in the sticky sweetness of my sister’s living room, watching a cartoon about a robot boy with my two nephews. The house smelled of old wood and lavender, and the rain drummed a steady rhythm against the windows. My sister, Lena, had gone out for a late shift at the hospital, and my brother-in-law, Marcus, was already snoring in the upstairs bedroom. The twins, Oliver and Theo, were glued to the screen, their eyes wide with the kind of innocent absorption that only children possess. I was sprawled on the floor, my back against the couch, half-watching, half-dozing, when the movie suddenly paused. A black rectangle with a spinning wheel appeared, and then the screen went dark, plunging the room into a silence that felt heavier than the rain outside.

It was in that void of sound that I felt it: a tickle, light as a spider’s leg, tracing a slow path down my spine. My skin erupted in goosebumps. Then, a warm breath, impossibly close to my ear, expelled a low, guttural whisper that was not a word but a sound, like the clearing of a throat from deep within a cavern. It was undeniably masculine. My heart slammed against my ribs. I spun around, expecting to see Theo with a mischievous grin, but there was nothing but the empty space between the couch and the window. The rain streaked the glass, and for a moment, I thought I saw a handprint on the pane, but it vanished as I blinked.

I didn’t scream. I couldn’t. The twins were still staring at the frozen screen, oblivious. I called for my dog, a golden retriever named Biscuit, who had been sleeping in the corner. She trotted over, tail wagging, but as she approached, she stopped, her ears flattening, and let out a low whine. She refused to come closer, instead circling the spot where I had felt the touch, sniffing the air as if something lingered there. I pulled myself up, my legs shaking, and told Oliver to come sit next to me on the couch. He looked up, puzzled, but came over. I wrapped an arm around him, my eyes darting to every shadow, every corner. Theo was still asleep under a blanket, and I checked on him, finding him breathing peacefully. Marcus was out cold upstairs.

I didn’t sleep that night. I kept Biscuit on the floor beside me, and I propped myself against the couch, my back to the wall. The rest of the evening passed in a blur of half-hearted attempts to play video games and the occasional creak of the old house. When Lena came home at dawn, I told her what had happened, expecting her to laugh it off or offer a rational explanation. Instead, her face went pale. She told me that the house had a history, that the previous owner had died in the living room, a middle-aged man with a heart condition. She had never told me before because she didn’t want to scare me. ‘It’s just the house settling,’ she said, but her voice wavered.

The next day, I couldn’t shake the feeling. I was at my own apartment, a sterile one-bedroom with white walls and no history, when I got a text from Lena. ‘Did you see the window this morning?’ I hadn’t. She sent a photo: a clear handprint on the inside of the living room window, the same one I thought I’d seen. But I had been the only one in that room last night, and I hadn’t touched the glass. I zoomed in on the photo. The handprint was large, with long fingers, and it was pressed flat, as if someone had been standing outside, looking in, but the print was on the inside. And that’s when I noticed something else: a faint smudge on the glass, like a breath had fogged it, and within that fog, a single word traced in reverse. I turned the photo upside down, and my blood ran cold. It said: ‘MINE.’

I haven’t been back to Lena’s house since. She called me a week later, frantic, saying that Oliver had started sleepwalking, and he would sometimes stand by that same window, whispering to someone outside. She had moved the twins into her bedroom, but the whispering continued, always in that low, masculine tone. She said Marcus had found scratches on the inside of the front door, deep gouges as if something had been trying to get out. I told her to leave, to sell the house, but she couldn’t afford it. So they stay, and I stay away.

But last night, I woke up at 3:00 AM to the sound of my own name being called. It wasn’t Lena’s voice, or any voice I recognized. It was that same low, gravelly whisper, right by my ear. I turned over, and there was a shadowy figure at the foot of my bed, but when I blinked, it was gone. The air was cold, and my window was wide open, even though I never open it. On the glass, fogged from the night air, was another handprint, and this one was smaller, like a child’s. I knew then that it wasn’t just that house. It had followed me, or it had been waiting for me all along.

I haven’t slept since. I’m writing this from a hotel room, my back against the headboard, the lights blazing. I don’t know what it wants, but I know it’s not done. The worst part is, I keep feeling that tickle on my back, and I’m afraid to turn around.

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