The Empty Ground Floor

I grew up in a small town where the biggest mystery wasn’t the old fort on the hill, but a single ground floor in an apartment building next to my school. The building itself was like any other: a box of concrete and glass, three storeys tall. Families lived on the top two floors, their balconies cluttered with potted plants and drying laundry. But the ground floor, which opened right onto the street, had been vacant for as long as anyone could remember. The windows were always dark, the metal shutters rusted and pulled down, and the door, a heavy wooden one with a circular iron knocker, remained locked. As a kid, I used to press my face against the grimy glass, trying to see inside, but the interior was too dark, too still. I asked my parents, my chacha, my bua, even the elderly neighbors, but no one could give me a straight answer. There were rumors, of course: that the ground floor was cursed, that a family had been murdered there, that it was haunted. But the truth was far stranger.

It happened during my final exams, when I was fifteen. My bua, Mala, who was in the same school, had come over to study with me. Our small house, just a ten-minute walk from the school, was stifling that night. The power had gone out around 11 PM, as it often did during the summer load-shedding. The darkness and heat made it impossible to concentrate, so we took our books and candles outside, joining the little crowd of neighbors who had gathered in the dusty courtyard in front of our house. There was the usual hum of conversation, the flicker of oil lamps, and the distant buzz of mosquitoes. I tried to remember the dates of historical battles, but my mind kept drifting to the vacant ground floor. I had been thinking about it all week, ever since a new family had moved into the apartment above it, and I’d seen a strange, hunched figure peering out from the shadowy interior of the empty floor, just for a second, before vanishing.

At around midnight, Mala and I decided to call it a night. We were walking back to our house, our footsteps crunching on the gravel, when I stopped. ‘I have to see it,’ I said, pointing towards the school. ‘The ground floor. I can’t shake it.’ Mala looked at me, her face half-lit by the candle she was holding. ‘Don’t be silly, Raju. It’s dark, and we have an exam tomorrow.’ But I was insistent. I had a feeling, a cold knot in my stomach, that something was waiting for me there. So, without telling any of the adults, we slipped away, following the familiar path along the empty streets, past the well that was still used by everyone in the neighborhood, its stone rim worn smooth by decades of ropes and buckets. The building stood like a black monolith against the starless sky.

The main gate to the school compound was locked, but I knew a gap in the fence, a place where the barbed wire had been pulled aside, that led to the back of the building. We crept through the darkness, our hearts pounding. The ground floor was even more oppressive up close. The air was colder here, and there was a faint, musty smell, like rotting wood and stale water. The door, which had always been sealed, was now slightly ajar. A sliver of absolute blackness showed between the door and the frame. I looked at Mala. She was trembling, her eyes wide. ‘We shouldn’t,’ she whispered. But I had to know. I pushed the door.

It groaned open, and the stench hit us like a physical blow. It was the smell of countless years of dust and damp, but beneath it, something else, something metallic and sweet, like old blood. The candle in Mala’s hand cast a weak, dancing light, revealing a vast, empty space. The walls were bare concrete, covered in long streaks of black moisture, and the floor was a rough, unfinished screed. There were no windows, only a few high, narrow slits near the ceiling, and the only source of light was our candle. As we stepped inside, the door swung shut behind us with a soft click. We spun around, and though I tried to push it open, it was as if the door had been locked from the outside. We were trapped.

In the center of the room, there was a deep, circular depression in the floor, like a dry well. I walked towards it, Mala clinging to my sleeve. The depression was lined with bricks, and it went down into darkness. As I peered over the edge, I heard a sound, a low, rhythmic scraping, coming from below. Then a voice, dry and raspy, like falling leaves, echoed up from the pit. ‘You’ve come at last.’ I stumbled back, but the voice continued, ‘I’ve been waiting for you. Ever since that night, sixty years ago, when they sealed me in here with my secrets.’ Mala screamed and dropped the candle. It sputtered out, and we were plunged into absolute darkness.

In the blackness, I felt something brush against my ankle. I kicked out, but it was gone. Then I felt a cold hand grasp my wrist, and a pull towards the pit. I fought, but the grip was like iron. Mala was sobbing somewhere to my left. ‘No!’ I shouted, and my voice echoed in the empty room. ‘Don’t end up like the others,’ the voice hissed. ‘The last one was a girl. She screamed for three days, until the walls soaked up her cries. But you, you will serve me better.’

Suddenly, I remembered something my grandmother had told me, a story about an old man, a hermit, who had lived in that building when it was first built. He had been a water diviner, someone who could find underground springs. He had dug a well in the basement, but something had gone wrong. He had fallen in, and the building was constructed over him, entombing him alive. The ground floor was kept vacant because of his restless spirit. I knew I had to do something. I calmed my breathing and whispered to Mala, ‘Do you remember the mantra from my grandmother? The one to bind evil?’

Mala’s sobs quieted, and she began to chant, her voice wavering but growing stronger. As she chanted, I felt the grip on my wrist tighten, then slowly loosen. The scraping below grew louder, more urgent, and then turned into a howl of frustration. The candle flickered back to life as if a gentle breeze had passed over it. The light revealed the entrance of the pit, and I saw, just for a moment, a pale, gaunt face with hollow eyes, glaring up at us from the depths. Then it sank back into the shadows, and the scraping faded away.

We didn’t wait. We ran to the door, and this time it opened easily. We stumbled out into the night, gasping for air, the cold sweat drying on our faces. We never told anyone exactly what we had seen, but we knew. The vacant ground floor wasn’t vacant because of property disputes or bad luck. It was vacant because it was a tomb. A tomb for a man who had found, not water, but something far older and darker, something that had him now. And as I walked home, I could feel the ground beneath my feet, and I knew that beneath that building, there was a well that went deeper than anyone could ever measure, and something down there was still waiting, patient and hungry, for the next fool to pull on the door.

We passed the well on our way back, as we always did. I stopped and looked into its dark, watery depths. For a moment, I thought I saw a reflection, not of myself, but of a gaunt, pale face, staring up at me from under the water. I blinked, and it was gone. But I didn’t need to see it again. I knew that some secrets are buried with good reason, and that some wells should never be dug.

Years later, I left that town and never looked back. But the memory of that night, the scraping, the whispers, and the endless darkness of that ground floor, has stayed with me. Sometimes, in my dreams, I find myself standing on that threshold again, the door creaking open, and always, always, I hear that voice, rasping, ‘You’ve come at last.’ And I know that one day, I will.

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