The Eighth Floor Flicker

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"The air in the high-rise apartment was thick with the smell of buttered popcorn and the static hum of a TV left on a dead channel. Maya, our host, had insisted we lock the deadbolt twice and slide the chain across, a habit she’d developed after a break-in scare last year. Her building, the Monolith, […]"

The air in the high-rise apartment was thick with the smell of buttered popcorn and the static hum of a TV left on a dead channel. Maya, our host, had insisted we lock the deadbolt twice and slide the chain across, a habit she’d developed after a break-in scare last year. Her building, the Monolith, was supposed to be safe, with its keycard entry and twenty-four-hour lobby attendant, but the walls were thin and the elevator always seemed to arrive with a chirp that felt less like a welcome and more like a warning.

We were five of us that night: Maya, with her nervous energy and a collection of indie horror films; Zoe, who claimed she couldn’t sleep without a nightlight; Priya, who brought a sage bundle ‘just in case’; and the twins, Jenna and Julia, whose identical faces made it easy to lose track of who was who. We’d dragged the mattresses from the two bedrooms into the living room, creating a chaotic patchwork of pillows and blankets on the polished concrete floor. The only window, a wide pane overlooking the city’s glittering grid, was covered by a heavy, dark curtain that Maya had pinned shut with clothespins.

We were midway through a game of ‘Truth or Dare’ when the lights flickered. It was a quick stumble, a blink, and the TV buzzed back to life, showing a static-filled screen instead of the movie. ‘Just the building’s old wiring,’ Maya said, but her voice was tight. ‘It happens sometimes, especially at night.’

We all shrugged it off, but the atmosphere had shifted. Priya started burning her sage, and the smoke coiled in the air like a nervous question. Jenna suggested we turn off all the lights and tell scary stories, which was met with a chorus of groans, but also a flicker of excitement in her twin’s eyes.

An hour later, after we’d exhausted our ghost stories and the sage had burned to a gray ash, we decided to turn in. Zoe claimed the spot near the window, while the twins took the middle, and Priya and I flanked Maya, who was nearest to the hallway that led to the kitchen and the two bedroom doors.

The darkness was absolute. The city lights were muted by the curtain, and the only sound was the faint hiss of static from the TV, which no one had thought to turn off. I lay awake, staring at the ceiling, feeling the familiar unease of being watched. I tried to convince myself it was just nerves.

Then I heard it: a soft, rhythmic tapping from the ceiling directly above us. It was a slow, deliberate pattern, like someone counting steps. I held my breath, and the tapping stopped. A second later, it started again, but this time it seemed closer, lower, as if it were coming from inside the wall behind the TV.

I nudged Priya, who was already tense. ‘Did you hear that?’ I whispered.

She nodded, her eyes wide. ‘It’s like something’s moving in the walls.’

‘It’s just the plumbing,’ Maya whispered from across the room, but her voice was shaky. ‘Old pipes.’

‘Yeah, but pipes don’t tap in patterns,’ Jenna said, her voice cutting through the dark. ‘That’s three knocks, pause, three knocks. It’s like it’s answering something.’

We were all silent, listening. The tapping stopped. Then, from the kitchen, came a soft, muffled thud. It was the sound of a drawer being slid open, then closed. The fridge hummed, but the sound was too deliberate.

I felt a chill crawl up my spine. ‘Maya, did you lock the back door?’

‘The only door is the front,’ she said. ‘And it’s locked. I checked twice.’

‘But the balcony?’ Julia asked. ‘The sliding door in the living room?’

We all turned our heads toward the window. The heavy curtain was still pinned, but I could swear I saw a faint, pale light flickering at the edges, as if someone had turned on a flashlight outside.

Then the TV’s static abruptly changed pitch. It was a low, wavering hum that sounded almost like a voice, but twisted and wrong. I scrambled for my phone, turned on the flashlight, and aimed it at the screen. The static was shifting, forming shapes that looked like long fingers or reaching arms.

‘That’s not normal,’ Zoe whimpered.

Suddenly, the bedroom door at the end of the hallway creaked open, just a few inches. We all froze. No one had opened it. The door had been shut.

The hall light flickered on, a harsh fluorescent that made us squint. Standing in the doorway was a figure—small, childlike, but with limbs that were too long, and skin that seemed to ripple like static. It tilted its head, and we heard a noise like a radio tuning, a burst of garbled speech that resolved into a phrase: ‘You forgot to turn off the TV.’

We screamed. The figure took a step back, and the door slammed shut with a force that rattled the walls. The light went out. The tapping resumed, now from inside the ceiling, faster, more frantic.

For the next hour, we huddled together, clutching each other, listening to the sounds of movement in the walls, the occasional slam of a cabinet, and the TV’s static that seemed to whisper our names in a language we didn’t know.

When dawn finally broke and sunlight seeped through the curtain, we were exhausted, pale, and trembling. We agreed never to speak of it, but as we gathered our things to leave, I noticed something on the floor near the TV. It was a small, blackened piece of sage, but it was smeared with something dark and sticky. And on the wall above the TV, scratched into the paint in crude letters, were the words: ‘I’m still here.’

We never returned to the Monolith. We never saw each other again, each of us convinced that whatever had visited us had followed us home, waiting for the next time we switched on a screen or forgot to say goodnight.

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