The Door That Breathed

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"I have never thought about discussing this kind of thing with anyone before, so it feels a bit strange – please bare with me if I ramble! I have had several experiences over the last few years that I have been wondering about for some time. The latest was over the past few nights, which […]"

I have never thought about discussing this kind of thing with anyone before, so it feels a bit strange – please bare with me if I ramble!

I have had several experiences over the last few years that I have been wondering about for some time. The latest was over the past few nights, which is why I am writing this now! I feel it’s about time I asked for some feedback as to be honest I don’t quite know what to make of it all.

This is my first experience (I was going to write them all in one lot but I have found that this may be too long for one sitting!)

This was during my first year of university in a small town in the north of England. My digs were in an old Victorian asylum that had been converted into student accommodation. The building was immense, with four floors, each floor a long corridor with fire doors at either end (added during the conversion, but crucial to the story). My room was on the third floor, at the far end near the fire door that led to the stairwell. The corridors were lined with heavy wooden doors, each with a small frosted glass pane at the top, letting in a milky light from the hallway. The linoleum floors were cracked and worn, and there was always a faint smell of disinfectant mixed with something older, something damp.

I remember my first night there. The bed was narrow, the mattress sagging, and the window overlooked a courtyard with a single dead tree. I tried to sleep, but the building was alive with sounds: the creak of pipes, the occasional slam of a distant door, and underneath all that, a rhythmic thumping that seemed to come from inside the walls. I put it down to the old heating system.

A few weeks later, I started to notice the fire doors. They were heavy, with a hydraulic hinge that made them swing shut slowly, but they never fully closed unless you pushed them. So it was strange when I began finding them shut at odd hours, even though no one else was around. At first, I thought it was just the draft, but then I started to hear something else: a low, whooshing breath, like someone sighing in their sleep, coming from just beyond the door. It would happen every time I passed, usually around 2 or 3 a.m. I would freeze, listen, and the sound would stop. But the door would be slightly ajar, and I could feel a cold draft seeping through the gap.

One night, I had been studying late in the common room. It was past midnight, and I was walking back to my room. As I approached the fire door that sectioned off my part of the corridor, I saw that it was closed. That was odd because I had left it open. I put my hand on the push bar, ready to open it, when I noticed the frosted glass pane at the top. It was frosted, but I could see a dark shape on the other side, like a person standing there, but the shape seemed too tall, too thin, and its head was tilted at an unnatural angle. My heart raced, and I pulled my hand back. I stood there, staring at the door, and the shape didn’t move. I told myself it was just a shadow, a trick of the light. But then the door breathed. I know it sounds crazy, but the door itself seemed to expand slightly, as if it were inhaling, and then it relaxed, exhaling a cold puff of air that smelled like old dust and something metallic. I backed away, turned, and ran to my room, locking the door behind me.

I didn’t sleep that night. I lay in bed, listening to the building’s sounds, but I couldn’t hear the breathing anymore. The next day, I asked the other students on my floor if they had noticed anything weird. A girl named Jenny said she heard footsteps in the corridor at night, but when she opened her door, there was no one there. A guy named Marcus said he saw a figure in the stairwell once, but it vanished when he called out. I didn’t tell them about the breathing door. I was afraid they’d think I was cracking up.

Over the following weeks, the breathing became more frequent. It wasn’t just at the fire doors now; I could hear it from inside my room, coming from behind the wardrobe, or from the vent above the bed. I started to feel a presence, a weight pressing on my chest at night, making it hard to breathe. I would wake up gasping, and sometimes I could swear I saw a shadow crouched in the corner, its head jerking toward me as if startled.

The breaking point came one night when I forgot my keys in the common room. I had to go back for them. As I walked down the empty corridor, my footsteps echoed more than they should have, like there was a second pair of footsteps just behind my own, but when I stopped, they stopped. When I reached the fire door, it was open, the portal dark. I stepped through, and the corridor stretched longer than I remembered, the doors on either side seeming to lean inward as if watching. I saw my keys on a table at the end, but as I approached, the lights flickered and went out. I stood in total darkness, and then I heard it: a slow, wet breath, right behind my neck. I spun around, and there was a shape, a tall black thing with long arms and no face, just a dark void where a face should be. It reached out a hand, and its fingers were impossibly long, ending in sharp points. I screamed and ran, slamming into the fire door, pushing it open, and fleeing to my room, where I cowered under the covers, shaking.

The next morning, I moved out. I couldn’t stay there, not after what I saw. I told the management that I had a family emergency, and they let me break my lease. I never went back, but sometimes, late at night, I still hear that breathing, soft and rhythmic, just outside my window, as if it followed me home. And I wonder, what is it that lives in old places, waiting for the quiet hours to draw breath? And I wonder if it will ever stop.

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