The Dim Figure at the Linen Closet

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"It was the tail end of July, and my father’s house in rural Nebraska seemed to sweat from every pore. The air was thick with the smell of dust and old wood, and the windows were thrown open to catch any stray breeze, but the heat clung to the walls like a second skin. I […]"

It was the tail end of July, and my father’s house in rural Nebraska seemed to sweat from every pore. The air was thick with the smell of dust and old wood, and the windows were thrown open to catch any stray breeze, but the heat clung to the walls like a second skin. I was sixteen that summer, and I spent most of my days avoiding chores and exploring the forgotten corners of that rambling farmhouse. My father, a retired railroad worker with a bum leg, moved with the deliberate slowness of a man in constant pain. That evening, around 6:00 pm, the sun was a low, golden blaze over the cornfields, casting long, distorted shadows across the kitchen floor.

Dad had just finished folding the laundry, a heap of towels and work clothes that seemed to multiply in the basket. He handed me my stack and said, ‘Go put these away, and don’t dawdle. I’ll be up in a minute to do the same.’ I trudged up the creaking stairs, my mind already on the comic book hidden under my mattress. I knew if I finished too quickly, he’d find me something else to do, so I took my time in the upstairs hallway, pretending to adjust the crooked picture frames that had hung there for decades. I heard his heavy, uneven footsteps on the stairs, each one a slow, painful thud that I had grown accustomed to. I didn’t turn around, just continued into my bedroom, tossing my clothes onto the bed and starting to fold them with exaggerated slowness.

I was standing at my dresser, my back to the door, when I heard the footsteps stop right behind me. The floorboards creaked under a weight that seemed too heavy to be human. I waited for him to say something, to tell me to hurry up, but there was only silence. A cold draft prickled the hairs on my neck, and I felt a presence that was not my father’s. I turned around slowly, a sarcastic remark ready on my lips, and froze. Blocking the doorway stood a figure so tall it had to stoop slightly to fit. It was translucent, like a heat shimmer, but discernibly human in shape. Dressed in a black colonial suit, complete with a tricorn hat and a high collar, it seemed to absorb the light around it. And it had no face. Where features should have been, there was only a smooth, dark void, like a doorway into nothing. It was standing perfectly still, facing forward, not looking at me, but through me, toward the open door of my sister’s old room across the hall. My sister had moved out years ago, and that room was now a storage space, filled with boxes and old furniture. We never went in there.

My heart slammed against my ribs, and I couldn’t move. The figure didn’t acknowledge my presence. It just stood there, a silent sentinel, as if waiting for something. I don’t know how long I stood there, paralyzed, but then I heard my father’s real footsteps coming up the stairs, slow and uneven, accompanied by the tap of his cane. The figure turned its head, its faceless void somehow conveying a sense of attention, and then it took a step backward into my sister’s room, dissolving into the darkness like smoke. I snapped out of my trance and ran, nearly colliding with my father at the top of the stairs. He looked at my pale face and asked, ‘What’s wrong?’ I could only stammer, ‘The… the figure… in the hallway.’ He glanced around, then frowned. ‘You’re seeing things. Must be the heat. Go sit down, I’ll get you some water.’ But I knew what I saw.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay in bed, staring at the closed door, listening to the creaks and groans of the old house. Around 2 am, I heard a faint rustling sound, like fabric, coming from my sister’s room. I got up and crept to my door, pressing my ear against it. The sound stopped. Then I heard a low, whispering voice, speaking in a language I didn’t recognize, but it sent a chill down my spine. It was coming from right outside my door. I backed away, my heart racing, and I didn’t sleep the rest of the night.

In the morning, I told my father about what I had heard. He grew quiet, and his face turned ashen. He told me that my sister used to talk about seeing a ‘dark man’ in her room when she was little. He thought it was just a childish imagination. But now, after more than twenty years, it was back. He warned me to never go into that room, and to never look directly at the figure. But I couldn’t just ignore it. Over the next few days, the figure appeared more often, always in the hallway, always looking towards my sister’s room. And I noticed something odd: the door to that room, which was always kept shut, was now slightly ajar, no matter how many times I closed it.

One afternoon, while my father was napping downstairs, I decided to investigate. I pushed the door open, revealing a dim, dusty room cluttered with old boxes, a bed covered with a tattered quilt, and a heavy oak wardrobe against the far wall. The air was cold, much colder than the rest of the house, and it smelled of mothballs and something else, something stale and metallic. I stepped inside, and the door swung shut behind me with a click. I turned, but there was no lock. I tried to open it, but it wouldn’t budge. Panic rose in my throat. Then I heard that whispering voice again, coming from the wardrobe. I felt a presence behind me, and I slowly turned. The figure was standing in the corner, its faceless head tilted slightly, as if studying me.

Fear overwhelmed me, and I scrambled to the door, yanking on the handle with all my strength. It opened suddenly, and I stumbled out into the hallway, slamming the door behind me. I stood there, gasping, my heart pounding. When I looked down, there was a thin scratch on my arm, bleeding, as if something had clawed me. The door to my sister’s room was now firmly shut. I never went back in there. And I never told my father about the scratch.

But the figure still appears, standing in my doorway at night, watching over the house with a silent vigilance. It seems to be waiting for something, or someone. And now, whenever I look at a mirror, I catch a glimpse of a black, faceless silhouette behind my reflection, before it fades away. I’ve learned to live with it, but I know this: the figure isn’t a ghost. It’s something older, something that was here long before this house was built. And it’s still here, waiting. The dim figure at the linen closet, as my father called it, is now a permanent resident of our home. And I have a feeling it wants to be seen.

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