The December Countertop

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"It was the first week of December 2016, and I was alone in the old farmhouse my husband and I had bought the previous spring. My name is Evelyn, and I had just turned sixty. My husband, Carl, was out in the workshop, tinkering with his vintage tractor, and my grandson, Tommy, was napping in […]"

It was the first week of December 2016, and I was alone in the old farmhouse my husband and I had bought the previous spring. My name is Evelyn, and I had just turned sixty. My husband, Carl, was out in the workshop, tinkering with his vintage tractor, and my grandson, Tommy, was napping in the spare bedroom. I was in the kitchen, drying the last of the dinner plates, my hands moving automatically as I lost myself in the quiet hum of the fridge and the soft ticking of the wall clock. The farmhouse was drafty, and I could feel the cold seeping through the cracks around the window frames, but the kitchen was warm from the oven I’d used to roast a chicken for supper.

It was then I heard the sound. A soft, rustling noise, like dry leaves skittering across a stone floor, coming from the pantry. I paused, my hands still wrapped in the dish towel, and listened. Nothing. I shook my head and resumed drying, chalking it up to the wind outside, which had been gusting all afternoon. But then it came again, clearer this time. It was a voice, a woman’s voice, but not one I recognized. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, a whisper that slid along the walls and under my skin. ‘Evelyn,’ it said. Not a question, not a call, just my name, spoken with a weight that made the air feel heavy.

I set the plate down slowly, my heart starting to thud against my ribs. The voice was not from the living. I knew that immediately. It had a hollow, echoing quality, like it was being filtered through layers of water and time. I had heard stories of such things, of course, from my grandmother who claimed she could converse with the dead, but I had never experienced it myself. Carl had always joked that our old farmhouse was ‘lively’, remarking on the odd creaks and the way doors would sometimes swing open on their own, but we had always attributed those to the house’s age and the whims of the wind.

I stepped toward the pantry, my bare feet cold on the linoleum. The door was slightly ajar, a sliver of darkness visible in the gap. I pushed it open, revealing the neat shelves of canned goods and preserves I had put up in autumn. Everything was in order, but there was a faint chill emanating from the back corner, near the wall where the old coal chute used to be. The voice spoke again, this time softer, almost pleading, ‘Don’t be afraid.’ I felt a presence, a gentle pressure in the air, like someone standing very close to me, but I saw no one.

My mind raced. I thought of my late sister, Margaret, who had passed away from a sudden illness the summer before. She had been my closest confidante, and I often wished I could hear her voice just once more. But this voice was not hers. It was unfamiliar, older, with a timbre that seemed to come from a time long past. I remembered that the previous owners of the farmhouse, the Hendricks family, had lived here for generations, and I had heard whispers from the town about a tragedy that had occurred in this very room, decades ago.

The voice spoke once more, and this time it was clearer, as if it were right beside my ear. ‘Look in the drawer.’ I felt a cold shiver trickle down my spine. I turned to the kitchen counter, where a small drawer sat next to the sink, its wooden handle worn smooth from use. I had never opened it, assuming it was empty, but now I felt compelled to slide it out. Inside, nestled on a bed of faded velvet, was a silver locket, tarnished with age. I picked it up, and the clasp opened easily, revealing a faded photograph of a young woman with dark hair and sad eyes, and behind her, a man in a military uniform.

The voice sighed, a sound that seemed to come from my own chest, and then said, ‘My name is Eleanor. I was trapped here, but now I can leave. Thank you.’ And then the pressure lifted, and the room felt lighter, warmer. I stood there, holding the locket, trembling, as Tommy called out from the bedroom, and Carl came in through the back door, stamping the snow from his boots. I never heard the voice again, but that December, I wore the locket, feeling a strange comfort in its weight against my chest, and I knew that some stories end with a release, not a haunting.

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