The Custodian of the Hollow

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Story Premise 6 min read (1,120 words)

"The first time I noticed it was the front door. Not the sound of it opening—that was soft, like a breath—but the clack of the latch settling. I’d have chalked it up to the wind, except the wind doesn’t turn a deadbolt. I was in the kitchen, pouring coffee, and I froze. My husband, Derek, […]"

The first time I noticed it was the front door. Not the sound of it opening—that was soft, like a breath—but the clack of the latch settling. I’d have chalked it up to the wind, except the wind doesn’t turn a deadbolt. I was in the kitchen, pouring coffee, and I froze. My husband, Derek, had left for PT twenty minutes earlier. I’d watched his taillights disappear down the hill. So when I heard the door open and close, I expected to see him jogging back, maybe for his phone. But I peeked out the window; the driveway was empty. The door was shut. The deadbolt was thrown. I told myself it was the house settling, but the sound was too precise, too intentional.

We live in Pickett’s Landing, a row of identical brick houses on a short cul-de-sac that butts up against a dense pine forest. Before we moved here, the Army gave us a booklet about the history of the post. It mentioned that the land used to be a training ground, but nothing about the village itself. Derek works long hours at the hospital, and I’m alone most of the day. At first, it was small things: a floorboard creaking upstairs when I knew I was alone, the faint smell of cigarettes in the hallway even though neither of us smokes. But the sounds—they were the worst. Around 3 PM, like clockwork, I’d hear what I thought was a pair of children running up and down the stairs, their footfalls uneven, sometimes stopping right outside the guest bedroom door. When I’d investigate, the room would be pristine, the air still, the only sound the hum of the old refrigerator.

Three nights ago, everything changed. I was coming back from the commissary on Ellis Road, the long way that loops past the old airstrip. It’s a lonely stretch, treeline on both sides, no streetlights. It was past midnight, and I had my brights on because the road was empty. That’s when I saw her. She was standing at the edge of the tree line, just past the turn-off to the old range. A woman, or a man with long black hair, in a gray dress that hung limply. She was impossibly still, facing my car. I slammed the brakes, and the tires screeched. But she didn’t move. I could see her face—or what should have been her face—but it was just a void, like a hood of shadow. My heart was hammering. I wanted to drive on, but my foot refused to lift. Then, as if she grew tired of waiting, she raised a hand and pointed, not at me, but at the passenger seat. I looked, and there was nothing. When I turned back, she was gone. I sped home, not remembering the drive, and I didn’t sleep.

That night, I told Derek. He said it was probably an owl or a trick of the light. He laughed it off, but I saw him glance at the window. The next morning, he was gone before dawn as usual. I was in the bathroom, brushing my teeth, when I heard the footsteps again—but this time, they were slow, heavy, coming down the hall. I froze, toothbrush in hand. The footsteps stopped right outside the door. Then I heard a knock. Not a child’s knock, but a deep, deliberate thud. I opened the door, ready to scream, but the hallway was empty. The only thing I saw was a small, dark stain on the carpet, just outside the guest room. It looked like oil. I touched it, and it was cold. I never found out what it was.

Last night, I couldn’t sleep. I was sitting in the living room, reading, when I heard the front door open and close again. This time, I didn’t look out the window. I got up and walked to the door, my heart pounding. I unlocked it and yanked it open. The porch light was on, but the porch was empty. In the corner, by the welcome mat, there was a small object—a child’s toy, a little plastic soldier, green and faded. I picked it up. It was wet, as if it had been left in the rain, but it hadn’t rained for days. And on its base, scratched in tiny letters, it said: “FOR JUDITH.” I don’t know who Judith is. I’ve never heard that name before. But the cold that washed over me wasn’t from the night air.

I’ve started to connect the dots. I remembered the booklet mentioned that this village was built over an old cemetery that was relocated in the 1950s. But some graves were missed. I looked it up: the missing graves belonged to a family who died in a house fire—a mother and two children, Judith, age 8, and Peter, age 5. The mother’s name was Margaret, but she was known for her long, black hair. I haven’t told Derek. He thinks I’m imagining things. But I know what I saw. The woman in the road, the children on the stairs, the door closing on its own—they’re all connected. And last night, I woke up at 3:33 AM to the sound of a child whispering right next to my ear: “Can you see me now?” I didn’t open my eyes. I just lay there, stiff, and the whisper came again, closer, like a cold breath: “Patrick wants to play.” I don’t know who Patrick is. I don’t want to know.

Now it’s morning, and Derek is at work. I’m sitting in the kitchen, staring at the front door. The deadbolt is locked. The chain is on. But I can hear, very faintly, from upstairs, the sound of a small rubber ball bouncing on the floor. Thump. Thump. Thump. And then, a child’s laugh—a high, gurgling sound that could be joy or could be something else. The house feels colder than it should. The toys are appearing more frequently: a doll on the stairs, a marble in my shoe. None of them were there before. And the woman—I saw her again last night, through the window, standing at the edge of the trees, her face still a void, but now she was holding a child by the hand. The child waved at me. I didn’t wave back. I pulled the curtains and put a chair against the door. But I know it won’t stop. The house is built over them, and they’ve finally found their way up.

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