The Crooked Gate

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"The first time I stepped onto the Craine property, I felt a wrongness in my teeth, like biting down on tinfoil. The house itself was a brutalist slab of concrete and glass, all sharp angles and cold light, but it was the garden that unsettled me. It was overgrown in a deliberate, almost vindictive way, […]"

The first time I stepped onto the Craine property, I felt a wrongness in my teeth, like biting down on tinfoil. The house itself was a brutalist slab of concrete and glass, all sharp angles and cold light, but it was the garden that unsettled me. It was overgrown in a deliberate, almost vindictive way, with thorny vines snaking up the fences and gnarled oak trees that seemed to lean inward, as if eavesdropping. My husband, Ethan, had been coming here for years to visit his old college friend, Marcus, and he’d never mentioned anything odd. But as we walked up the gravel path, I could feel the hairs on my arms stand up.

We arrived in the afternoon, and the back garden was already alive with the sound of sizzling meat and laughter. About a dozen people milled about, clutching beers and wine glasses, their voices a pleasant hum. Marcus’s wife, Lena, greeted us with a warm hug, her smile too wide, her eyes darting to the trees behind me. I dismissed it as the stress of hosting. For hours, we ate, drank, and talked, the sun bleeding into a bruised purple sky. The garden, despite my initial discomfort, had a strange charm—rockeries with succulents nestled between grey boulders, and a wooden playset for their kids, half-hidden in the shadows.

By eleven, exhaustion hit me like a wave. I told Ethan I was going to bed, and Lena showed me to the guest room at the end of a long, dim hallway. The room was minimalist, with a single window that faced the back garden. As I pulled back the duvet, I noticed a small, crooked garden gate at the far edge of the yard, half-hidden behind a tangle of ivy. It was rusted, and it swung slightly, even though there was no wind. I told myself it was the air conditioning unit humming outside, and I fell asleep almost instantly.

I woke to a cold, wet feeling on my face. Something was dripping on me from above. Groggy, I reached up and touched my cheek—my hand came away slick and dark. I fumbled for the bedside lamp, and in the sudden light, I saw a rust-colored stain spreading across the white pillowcase, coming from a crack in the ceiling directly above the bed. The drip was steady, rhythmic, like a slow heartbeat. I ran to the bathroom to wash my face, and the water from the tap ran brown for a full minute before clearing.

I went back to the bedroom, my heart hammering, and pulled back the curtain. The crooked gate was now standing wide open, and beyond it, the darkness seemed somehow thicker, more solid. I watched, frozen, as a shape emerged from the black—a tall, thin figure, impossibly pale, whose head was tilted at an unnatural angle. It began to walk toward the house, not along the path, but through the rockery, its feet seeming to glide without touching the ground.

I wanted to scream, but my voice was gone. I stumbled back, tripping over my own feet, and fell against the door, which swung open. I ran down the hallway to the living room, where the party was still going on, the sound of laughter now tinny and hollow. I grabbed Ethan’s arm, but he just looked at me with a blank smile, his eyes unfocused. ‘What’s wrong?’ he asked, but his voice was flat, like he was reading a script. I looked around the room—everyone was staring at me, their smiles frozen, their eyes empty. And from the hallway, I heard the creak of footsteps on the wooden floor.

I fled through the sliding glass door to the garden, but the garden was no longer the same. The trees had grown twisted, their branches reaching like gnarled fingers. The rockeries now formed a labyrinth, and the air was cold, thick with the smell of damp earth and rot. I ran, my bare feet cutting on stones, until I found myself at the crooked gate. It was open, inviting. I didn’t want to go through, but I felt a pull, an invisible hand on my back.

I turned to look back at the house. In every window, I saw the pale figures standing, watching me, their heads tilted in unison. And behind them, the party continued, the laughter now a mocking chorus. I knew then that Ethan was lost to me, that he had been lost the moment he walked into this house. The gate was the only way out, but it wasn’t a way back to the world; it was a threshold to something else.

I stepped through, and the garden vanished. I was standing in a field of dry grass under a grey, endless sky. In the distance, I saw the same crooked gate, rusted and alone, but I couldn’t reach it. I walked for what felt like hours, but the gate never got closer. And then, behind me, I heard the creak of hinges, and I knew I wasn’t alone. I turned, and the pale figure was there, its face finally visible—it was my own face, twisted into a grin.

I ran, and I’ve been running ever since. But the gate follows me. It appears at the edge of my vision, in my dreams, even in my waking moments. I’ve tried to warn others, but everyone I tell ends up like Ethan—blank smiles, empty eyes, drawn to their own crooked gates. I don’t know how long I’ve been here, in this grey wilderness, but I know one thing: the gate is always open, and it’s waiting for me to step back through.

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