The Count of the Hollow

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"My grandmother never spoke of her childhood except in fragments, like pieces of a shattered mirror she was afraid to reassemble. She said that when she was seven, she wandered too far into the chestnut woods behind their farm in the Appenine foothills, and there she met the Count. He was tall and thin, with […]"

My grandmother never spoke of her childhood except in fragments, like pieces of a shattered mirror she was afraid to reassemble. She said that when she was seven, she wandered too far into the chestnut woods behind their farm in the Appenine foothills, and there she met the Count. He was tall and thin, with skin like old parchment stretched over bones, and his eyes were the color of spoiled milk. He told her she was beautiful, that she would be his bride, and that in fifteen years he would return to claim her. She laughed, because children laugh at impossibilities, but she never forgot the coldness of his fingers when he touched her cheek.

Fifteen years later, two months before her twenty-second birthday, she married my grandfather, a stonemason with hands like slabs of granite. They moved to a village at the base of the mountains, where the houses leaned into each other for support and the church bell rang with a cracked, mournful tone. They thought they had escaped the Count, that a Christian marriage and a new home would break any unholy pact. But on the eve of All Souls’ Day, in the second year of their marriage, my grandmother began to change.

It happened every year, in the days leading up to the Feast of the Dead. Her eyes would grow distant, her voice would drop to a whisper, and she would speak in a tongue that was not her own. My grandfather would find her in the cellar, standing among the jars of preserved figs, her lips moving in that hollow voice. He would sprinkle holy water and pray the rosary, and eventually she would come back, shivering and exhausted, with no memory of what she had said or done.

I remember the first time I witnessed it myself. I had just finished my first year at the university in the city, and I came home for the summer. My mother—my grandmother’s daughter—was lying on the couch in a sunlit room, sleeping with her mouth slightly open. I was sitting in a chair by the window, reading a book on geology, when I heard a small, grating voice that did not belong to her. It was like a child’s, but angry, petulant, and utterly devoid of warmth.

‘She stepped on me,’ the voice said. ‘She stepped on me and didn’t even say sorry.’

I froze. My mother’s lips were moving, but the voice was not hers. My sister, who was in the kitchen, heard the commotion and ran in. We stood there, paralyzed, as the voice continued: ‘She ignored me. She walked right through me like I was air. But I see her. I see her every day. And you will all answer.’

We called for my father, who came from his workshop with oil-stained hands. He had seen this before. He told us to pray, to hold the rosary, but the voice only laughed—a dry, rustling sound like autumn leaves skittering across a tombstone. Then, as suddenly as it had come, it was gone. My mother blinked, sat up, and asked why we were all staring at her.

That summer, the possessions became more frequent. The Count, we learned, was not content with yearly visits. He was growing stronger, more impatient. My grandmother, now an old woman with a thicket of white hair, told us the whole story one evening, her voice trembling. She said she had encountered the Count in a hollow where the chestnuts grew twisted and black. He had made her promise to be his bride, but she had broken that promise. Now he sought to claim her daughter as recompense.

We sought help from a priest who specialized in exorcisms, but he was an old man with more faith than sense. He performed the rites, but the voice that came from my mother’s mouth was not wicked in a way that feared the cross. It was ancient and patient. ‘You cannot banish me,’ it said. ‘I am bound to this family, to this bloodline. I will take what is owed.’

The exorcism failed. My mother grew thin and pale, her eyes sunken, her appetite gone. The Count appeared to her in dreams, she said, dressed in threadbare finery, wearing a moth-eaten coat, and he would whisper promises of a cold castle and eternal servitude. My father, desperate, tried to move us to the city, to a place with no trees and no history. But the following autumn, on the eve of All Souls’ Day, the possessions began again, worse than before.

I took it upon myself to research the Count. I spent hours in the church archives, in the village library, in dusty registries. I found a record from the 17th century, a nobleman named Conti who was said to have dabbled in forbidden arts. He had been accused of abducting children from the surrounding villages, and he was executed—burned alive, some said—but his tomb was never found. The villagers believed that his spirit lingered among the chestnut groves, feeding on the living to sustain itself.

On the night of All Souls’ Day, with the moon full and the air sharp with frost, I took my grandmother’s hand and led her to the hollow where she had first encountered the Count. It was a gnarled clearing where the trees seemed to claw at the sky, and the ground was littered with bones—animal bones, we hoped. I carried a lantern and a silver knife that had been blessed by the priest. My grandmother walked with a cane, her steps slow and deliberate, as if she were being drawn forward.

In the center of the hollow, there was a large, flat stone. My grandmother stopped. ‘He is here,’ she whispered. I saw nothing, but then the air grew cold, and the lantern flame guttered. A figure emerged from between the trees—tall, thin, with eyes like spoiled milk. It was the Count, just as my grandmother had described him, but more terrible in person. He wore a coat that seemed to be woven from shadows, and his smile was a gash of darkness in his pale face.

‘You have come to return to me,’ he said, addressing my grandmother.

‘No,’ I said, stepping forward with the knife. ‘I have come to end this.’

He laughed, that dry rustling sound. ‘You cannot end what is eternal. I have waited for your grandmother for a century. I will wait for her daughter, and her daughter’s daughter. There will always be a bride for the Count of the Hollow.’

But I had read the old records, and I knew there was a way. The Count’s power was bound to his physical remains. If we could find his bones and burn them, he would be scattered to the wind. My grandmother pointed to a spot beneath the flat stone. ‘He told me once that he would never leave this place,’ she said. ‘That he would take me to his home, but his own home was here, in the earth.’

I pried at the stone with my hands, feeling the cold seep into my fingers, and finally it gave way. Beneath it lay a shallow grave, and within it, a skeleton wrapped in blackened rags. The Count screamed—a sound that was not human, that tore through the night like a wounded beast—and he lunged at me. But I had the knife, and I drove it through his chest, where his heart should have been. He crumbled to dust, and the skeleton burst into flame as if ignited by my hate.

The next morning, we found my mother sleeping peacefully, a slight smile on her lips. She had no memory of the past months. My grandmother lived to be ninety, and she would sometimes touch her cheek where the Count had touched her all those years ago. But the possessions never came again. Yet sometimes, on cold nights, when the wind whistles through the chestnut trees, I think I see a tall figure standing at the edge of the hollow, watching. And I wonder if we truly defeated him, or if we only made him wait longer.

My grandmother died two winters ago, and we buried her in the village cemetery. But I have never told anyone that on the night she died, I saw her smile and whisper, ‘He came for me after all.’ And in the morning, the grave where we had burned the Count’s bones was disturbed. The earth was churned, and there were footprints leading away from it—bare footprints, too large for any human, going toward the chestnut woods.

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